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Title: Chapter 8

“Damn Trent someone really did a number on you. You need to sit on somebody’s couch and get yourself sorted out.” Truer words were never spoken concerning Trent! Jeez, what a douche!

Glad Nyla and Gavin are progressing nicely, and its nice to see Gavin is thinking long-term about the relationship. It'll take Nyla a bit longer to get there. She still has a lot of work to do, yet.

Nice!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 05:39 am
Title: Chapter 8

Did I miss chapter 8 or did you mislable the chapters?



Author's Response:

No I mislabeled the chapter

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 8

Nyla is not ready for to take her relationship with Gavin.  She loves you Gavin but the thought marriage scares her to death.  She doesn't want to loose someone else that she loves.  But Nyla is stupid enough to run so just take is slow with her.  I would love to go on vacay with my man, if I had one at the moment.

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Date: September 27 2012 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 8

Love the progression of the relationship. I do not like his friend, and I think her friend is overreacting.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

A lot emotion in this chapter. Poor Nyla she really went through some traumatic times. I'm glad she got help. Wonderful chapter!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

Are you trying to make a sister cry? Nyla had bern through the wringer but had come out the sttonget for it and mow she can feel free to live her life. So awesome!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 06:40 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

This was so good.  I'm glad she let it all out.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 11:15 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

Wow! That was heavy. I feel for Nyla. I'm glad that they have cemented the relationship, so they can move forward from here.

Good stuff!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 05:47 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

Wow, that was some heavy sh*t!! But glad she's on her way to recovery with Gavin there to support her.

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Date: August 31 2012 04:52 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

That was so sad. She cut herself where no one would see. He is so patient with her and he loves her and will not leave her. Wonderful update.

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Date: August 31 2012 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

heavy chapter but I love it.

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Date: August 31 2012 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 6

Loving this story. Glad they were able to work out some of their issues.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter 6

incredible, please continue with this story.  I love the story

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Date: August 27 2012 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Great story

 Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 07:15 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Wow, she moved in and it was time! That was hot!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 10:42 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I hope that she doesn't mess up the progress that their relationship by jumping to conclusion and running away scared.  Kate was octopus, I do hope that we have seen the last of her.  Gavin in no way gave the the indication that it was interested in having her in his life.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Great update! I hope it is happy sailing from here on out. I am glad they finally got together!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 09:28 pm
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

Those 2 definetly need to talk. Good chapter!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 10:51 pm
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

great update.  Love the progress and the charactes

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 06:47 am
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

Great update! Love this story!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:59 am
Title: more cast photos

Where are the pictures?



Author's Response:

I mistakenly removed them they are back up now.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:11 am
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

Nyla is tripping, you and Gavin are in the getting to know you phase, so allow to explain about the ho with the hands.  I don't like Trent he hasn't grown up yet as he?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

Ok, yeah, so that was kinda weird at the restaurant, and maybe Nyla shouldn't have just assumed anything. Having said that, they do have to decide if exclusivity is what they want; because neither one owes the other explanations at this point. 

So I guess Nyla turned to alcohol in her at her low ebb, huh?

Good!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for letting me know, who the pics are.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:53 am
Title: Chapter 5-Confusion

We should not jump to conclusion. It's time for them to define what it is they have.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:27 am


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