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Title: more cast photos

Is this her best friend and deceased husband? The last pic is that the lady Gavin was going out on a date with?



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I can't figure out how to add the names. The brunette is Sheila, the blond is Kate .

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

Sad, but happy she shared her grief with him. He sid the guy looked familiar, I'm wonderng if he treated him at one time.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 12:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like the cast!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

They will be good together, eventually! Gaving seems so caring and understanding. The type of person that will not rush her into anything she does not want to do.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what happend to her husband and child, and whether or not she blames herelf for it.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 03:48 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying this.  Please continue!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 12:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love your dialogue in this first chapter, I couldn't help but chuckle when Gavin  to Nyla, "...you could pretend to think about it." It takes talent to write conversation that easily flows and comes off as realistic. Sprinkle some fairy dust on me, will you please? :)

 Reviewer: Ciggy Burns Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I just read the whole thing. There is the potential for more depth with Nya and her trying to seriously date and figure out how she feels about it all. 

 

Nice!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 02:50 am
Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

great update....please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

Wow, that was powerful.  Nyla is feeling loads of gift, and she needs to forgive herself so that she can love herself.  Gavin is a good man give him a chance, Nyla he will love you like you deserve.  I love this story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

I love it! Please update. I love the chemistry!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 01:12 am
Title: Chapter 2

Love your story and Gavin and Nyla are very cute together. I'm interested in reading more.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I'm really loving this story. Gavin sounds like a real cutie. Can you post pix of the characters or tell us which actor/actress/models you have pictured in your mind so we can imagine the same people? Thanks and looking forward to your next update! Don't make us wait too long! 

 Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 07:49 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Gavin is wearing Nyla down with no effort as she is just as smitten as he is. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 04:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

Me likey please continue!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

A really good start, please contine with this story soon:)

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interested in reading more.

 Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 01:54 am


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