I am so glad you are back with an update....love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for being so encouraging. This is the first story I ever tried my hand at so it's my little baby.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: October 04 2013 03:54 am
I forgive you as this is one of my favorite stories. How far did Nyla think that she could push Gavin before he pushed back and walked away. But damn to get hit by a car just when she needed to beg like James Brown was so unexpected. Damn hasn't she been through enough, give her a break. Give us a break by updating soon.
Author's Response:
I know Nyla has been through the ringer but some of her pain is her own doing. It was unfortunate that she started to come to her senses so late.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2013 03:33 am
Just caught up I am glad he is not letting it go, I am personally glad. She needs to decide what she wants she is irritating me now with how she is acting.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:05 pm
I'm happy he finally confronted her. You can't have a relationship without trust, and you can't have trust without honesty.
I never understood her reasoning behind keeping everything concerning Greg and her life before meeting Gavin a secret. You're moving on to a new relationship and I understand the loss of a husband and child, but bringing excess baggage along will end the relationship before it begins. Gavin has been understanding and supportive, so I don't get it.
I also think Gavin is a saint, because I wouldn't be with someone that long and put up with that kinda shit. You are not the person you are today without having gone through the things you've been through. So be honest about those things or move the hell on... Thats how I see it.
I hope Nyla finally removes her head from her ass before she loses Gavin for good.
Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 04:28 pm
Oh hell! I hate it when "we" try to stand our ground and try to be tough and be evasive instead of just coming out with the truth instead of trying to prove a point! "He can't tell me what to do!" BS that is why we end up being alone. Please remind Nyla, that they love each other, and to forgo, all the heartache!
Author's Response:
But you know we do it. Talking about he is not going to tell me nothing he is not my daddy even when we are dead ass wrong. Lol.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 02 2013 03:21 am
was there a chapter 20?
Author's Response:
I goofed. I have changed the it to 20
Reviewer: annette Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 06:47 am
Nyla is pissing me off. Its to the point where I want to just jump in to the story and slap her. I totally understand that she had lost her husband and child. But she made the choice to be in a relationship with Gavin and her with her stupid secrets all the damn time is going to ruined it. Why is she still so secretive? At this point I'm asking myself why he is still bothering with her. I'm trying to understand Nyla and be compassionate, but she is making it difficult. Sometimes it seems as if she doesn't care about Gavin's feelings at all. She says she loves Gavin, so then why did she not tell him about Greg's memorial? She keeps hiding things from him, its no wonder that he doesn't trust her and has some insecurities when it comes to their relationship. Why is it so difficult for Nyla to open her mouth and explain who Malik is? I wouldn't blame Gavin if he decides to leave her. In fact I'm all up for him leaving her ass if she wants to continue with her secret ways.
Author's Response:
Wow. Nyla is definetly being a moron right now but she is really confused as to how to move forward.
Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 04:31 am
Interesting chapter..
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 03:31 am
Nyla should just tell Gavin the truth that the guy came to use the bathroom. Don't let her sister win.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 08:26 pm
Tina needs to go somewhere. smh
Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 06:21 pm
Tina is a jealous ho and I am so gals that Gavin had her tossed out on her jealous ass! Why is NY LA so secretive still? If she loves Gavin why did she keep the memorial for Greg to herself? I want my HEA and Nyla is pissing me off. Do you know that you went from chapter 19 to 21? Is it just a typo? What were your issues with this chapter? It was well written, but Bylaws"a forward progress has all but ended in this chapter. That is my frustration!
Author's Response:
Tina is a nightmare that Nyla can't wake up from. Thanks for catching the chapter slip up. I will correct it. Please just tough it out its almost over.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 02:27 pm
Great chapter. I think Nyla should come clean and tell Gavin the truth and close that chapter in her life. Also Gavin should tell Nyla about her sister. Then they can get married and have babies!!! Nyla needs closer.
Do not like that bitch of a sister!!!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 12:33 pm
Uh oh Jealous Gavin. I want to beat down Nyla's sister.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 12:28 pm
Dayum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 06:40 am
she better tell him before she ends up really hurt if she really loves him she would explain to him whats going on instead of having him misunderstand
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 06:34 am
Loved it. Please update soon. Looking forward to the proposal!!
Author's Response:
I am anxious to see how the proposal unfolds as well. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 10:50 pm
I just love this chapter and the comfort level these two have managed to achieve.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 10:24 pm
Ahh I love Nayla and Gavin. Her sister needs to go right along with their mother
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 05:30 pm
I'm totally hooked on Nyla and Gavin! They are too cute. I hope her issues don't get In the way to the point where they break up. And her sister is a crime scene! Ugh! I can't stand her.
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 07:09 am
I love this couple. I'm glad she faced her grief head on and can focus on Gavin now.
Author's Response:
They are one of my faves too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 06:03 am
Why didn't Nyka tell, Boris that she was meeting her man instead if saying she"d had another appointment? That would have shut Boris down I love Gavin and I think that he an Nyka make a great couple. Loved it!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 05:52 am
I'm still here... It's been a while since the last update, but I'm 100% sure I'll stick around to the end.
Anyway, great update. I'm hoping Nyla is ready to move on now, Gavin really loves her and he doesn't deserve to be kept in limbo anymore. It's about time for her to take that step to continue living.
Update soon and keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2013 07:31 pm
Please update soon. Really good story.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: tymes3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 04:54 am
I'm along for this ride as long as you are, so please keep updating, I aporeciate your efforts and I love this story...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed
[Report This]Date: June 25 2013 11:00 pm