Thank you for finally updating. NY LA is making progress but Tina is still a bitch. Actually Tina is a jealous bitch! So good and now she is thinking an about her man Gavin. So good!

Still reading. 

I appreciate the update.  Thought provoking and real.

That was a lot for Nyla to take, and I think she did a good job, considering. Maybe one day she and Drake will meet again.

Greg's relatives are a trip. And I hope those people can understand why did cheked out of life aftewer her family was killed.

Gavin is a fool....lol!

Loved it! Hope you update soon.

Poor Nyla, what a family she has. Tina and Mom both need to be out of her life permanetly. They don't care a lick for her and I am most shocked at Tina. She is turning out to be just like her mother. What a tool she is. I can't wait for Gavin to come back and hopefully Nyla and Gavin will go unscathed through this next round of jackassery. Thanks

I'm sorry, but those two vipers would be gone from my presence. Nyla needs to keep those two away from her and Gavin. Tina is f'in delusional. I hope neither Nyla nor Gavin falls for anything she tries to pull.

Great update, Chica.

Loved the chapter, absolutely HATE Nyla's family!  I know more drama is coming, I am bracing for it; please make sure that when all is said & done, someone smacks the shit out of Tina (and possibly mom!)

That was sweet with Ava.

Tina really must think Nyla is a complete moron! How is she gonna think she can just break up Nyla's relationship like that? She comes on the scene not knowing her ass from her elbow and because she put some plan into motion, it definitely supposed to work because Nyla is weak and vulnerable like that. Ughh! Really? That might have worked before, but Nyla has come a long since then. My shock would be that any plan to dismantle her and her confidence would work. What thread is she talking about?

And the fact that Tina thinks that its okay to even try to completely ruin her sister mentally to get her out of the way, then say she can just build herself back up again like she's talking about a toy is breathtaking. Who does Tina think she is?

And what's wth that mother of hers?

Again, another great chapter...I would love to see Nyla to give her mother and sister the ass whipping they need

I like where this story is going. There is a nice flow to it so good job!

The only thing that is REALLY distracting is the typos/grammatical errors.

I understand writing on a touchscreen is a b****. But PLEASE spend some time editing before you post. This is a really good story and those errors are unnecessary (missing periods and caps to start a sentence). It's like walking around with your hair unbrushed, its distracting... and takes away from the beauty of the piece. This is seriously only meant as constructive critism. But nice job and I hope you continue to write because your very talented!

I like!!! more please and thank you.

It's refreshing to have a peek into just an uncomplicated lazy day with them. Nyla's progress is encouraging and I'm glad Gavin has stuck with her.