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Dear Matt, I'm sorry. Love, Z

Ok, I know I've committed the cardinal sin of the "read and dash" with this story for chapters and owe more than I'm about to type. I need Matt to have a stadium full of seats! I have needed this for a while, but that last bit just got me. Ditto to the TMZ mom.

Thanks for updating so glad to have back to back updates :) I can't wait to see what happens next and I can't wait to see zee and Matt fall back in love again. I can't wait to see what's going to happen when Matt confronts his mom about her part in zee leaving him. On the edge of my seat :)

So Z kisses and feeds Miguel.  Let's him sit at the head of the table and MAtt walks in??? dun-dun-duuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnn.

WELL DAMN

Hey there, I just wanted to make sure you got my email. -thanks

Ding dong the witch is gone! Telling that poor child, those lies about her daddy, she needs to be beat.

Yay! Go on Matt with your bad yourself. This chapter went just right. I'm so glad Matt handled his business and broke up with her in person and put his ducks in a row. Smart move having the photos and making her sign a non-disclosure agreement. Im surprised I expected a lot more drama from Liz but that's good he nipped this in the bud. Poor Chase, maybe she has some fear of abandonment issues going on. They're going to have to talk as a family. I can't wait for Z and Matt's reunion! Nice job. ;-)

Yay no more Lizbeth. I can't stand that heifer.

Hahaha...Matt better make sure he disinfects his lips now. Don't take chances.

Oh wow. I just stumbled upon this story and read all the chapters in one sitting. I really love how you've framed your characters. Chase is adorable and witty. I really love Z's personality. Her character is both vulnerable and strong, sweet but fiercely loyal- love it! You also did a really good job with Miguel and her chemistry. Their dialogue is smooth. It kinda makes me sad because they're a so great together... but we know he's no Matt. :/

Matt, well I love him too. But he seems a little too perfect. From the beginning he's been the poor guy that was left behind and lied to and now he consistently does the right thing. With his daughter and even with his awful fiancee. I mean he gets mad and destroys things but doesn't really do anything wrong.. except for cheating on his girlfriend in the beginning. I dunno I still love him. :)

Also I'm surprised you've made the grandmother Nicole so repentive so quickly. I thought there might be a build up from when she's first introduced to when she admits she was wrong. I thought maybe Chase would soften her heart and then she would feel regret. But that's good that she's supporting Z now. Probably threw Z for a loop. And then there is Liz, well she's just a spolied brat who feels threatened. 

An editor or a beta would really really be helpful. The simple grammar mistakes easy to fix and really disrupt the flow of the sentences. It's always good to have a second set of eyes to help you out. (I'm available if you're interested)

All in all very very nice job. Your words are like butter gliding on the page. :) 

-p2p-