SEXY! Good choice in characters!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 11:14 am
Very interesting start to what seems to be a very good story! I hope Matt and Zee get a chance at the love they deserve! Besides, there is a beautiful living reminder of it everyday, named Chase!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 11:11 am
Very interesting start to what seems to be a very good story! I hope Matt and Zee get a chance at the love they deserve! Besides, there is a beautiful living reminder of it everyday, named Chase!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 19 2013 11:11 am
Oh well, she has a right to date too. Wonderful update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 04:11 pm
This is great continue to update
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 04:02 pm
Lizbeth makes my teeth itch, why is still going to marry that ho? She's self-absorbed, narcissitic, and so not maternal by any stretch of the imagination. The sex with that skinny ho can't be that good, can it? Can I just say that I love Chase? that little girl is a sweetie pie!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 05:14 am
Thanks for the update. Lizbeth has quickly made me despise her & Matt needs to handle tgat. The intervals aren't too bad but please try to extend the chapters.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 01:50 am
Matt needs to break it off with lizbeth, she's a pain in the butt
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 01:02 am
Matt is psycho! He really thinks Azalea dropped that bit of info to mess with his head? Really? Get over it, like he keeps telling Azalea he has. Granted, he has a right to be mad that Azalea his Chase, but he's being all kinds of rude and nasty to her all of the time. Not to mention he's parading his fiance all around, insinuating she's the better woman. He's mad, we get it, but now its time to get over it, move on, and make a new way with Chase; and with Azalea for Chase. Besides, his mother is a major contributor to the reasons why Azalea never told him. I can't wait until he finds out so he can get off his high horse about it! Will he be just as rude and nasty to her?
And I'm glad Azalea got him told. His not knowing about Chase doesn't give him the right to tell Azalea what to do. He has some nerve! Look at him second-guessing Lizbeth in his own life, yet, willing to subject Chase to her just the same.
I never say this to the writers, because you are giving us this for free and you have real lives to tend to, but....update soon!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2013 12:50 am
I liked the update. Matt needs to stop fighting his love for azalea before he loses her for good. I wish the chapter was a tad bit longer but oh well can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2013 11:59 pm
love the update. please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2013 10:55 pm
I don't mind the intervals, but I think you could have gone a bit farther before ending this chapter. I had to go back and read a bit to remember the story, though it sounded familiar. Then, when I arrived at the new chapter, it was quite brief. Could you maybe try and extend the chapters, with the amount of wait time in between them? I really love this story, and hate for the chapters to end.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 16 2013 10:12 pm
Loved the update! Wonder if his mom had some input in Z leaving Matt?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2013 03:19 am
Why don't you throw a man in for Z.. It's time she met someone that's intereseted in dating her.. Let's really get things popping.. Hahaha..
Looking forward to the next chapter.. I would how he will react when he finds out his mother had a hand in Z disappearing..
Author's Response:
Be patient. He's coming and it won't be pretty.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2013 04:54 pm
He's not in love with Lizbeth, so why torture himself.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 06:19 pm
I like it but I am hurt that he is not giving Z a chance.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 05:07 pm
Have been waiting for this story to re-appear. Really enjoyed the update. Gonna be interesting to see how Matt and Azalea make it back to each other again.
Please update agin soon.
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 09:17 am
Azalea needs to tell Matt about what really went down. I'm a little tired of his attitude. I get it, and he has a right to be angry, but he's taking things to another level now. All this snarling and huffing isn't needed. Lets see what he does when he learns the truth of things.
Lizbeth is sooo getting on my freakin' nerves!
Chase is a cutie!
Bring on the drama when his mother gets there!
Glad this story is back, too!
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 05:46 am
I am really enjoying this read, I hope there is lots more.
A new fan,
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 05:11 am
I missed this story. I love Azalea & I see her point of view, I wonder what will hapen when Matt's mother shows up. I can't wait for Lizbeth's departure!!! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 03:56 am
Matt is so stupid, Lizbeth will never treat Chase well. Not to mention Lizbeth is a bitch and should be run over with a truck!! Z I find it hard to sympathize with you since you didn't tell the man that he was father. You ran like punk which is so shows you to be a coward. When is Matt going to drop to Lizbeth? YOu don't love her, let the ho go please!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2013 02:50 am
Please update I want to know why she left him in the 1st place:)
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2012 10:04 am
omg i'm loving all the feedback on this,,it means ppl give a darn and bout yu writing this which i rlly hope yu keep doin cause i love the idea and the chemistry of matt and azalea and i kno they'll bring more to come but just so yu kno i'm a loyal fan of yu continuing and hopefully finishing this story :D gluck wit all yu do in life
Reviewer: domo nicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 27 2012 01:42 am
very good job.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 12:22 am
Oh oh, Azalea needs to apologize and just let him bond with Chase right now. She knows she was wrong for what she did. She had no reason to keep Chase from him. Even her mom felt she was wrong. Hopefully they can at least be civil with each other for Chase's sake. Loving this story so far.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2012 09:22 am