Reviews For My Dearest Matt
Title: Chapter 15

noting like some grudge f*cking!  well done!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Is this the latest chapter? I thought I read this chapter last week?



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the confusion. I posted the update then took it down to be edited. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 15

Damn!   ...and he bites the dust and doesn't even know it.  He needs to stop being an azz, though.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 15

Matt is so angry but so in love with Z wnd she refuses to see.  Z makes ky left ueue twitc.  I hope that when th y finally talk she tells him everything as he deserves the truth. She needs to put Miquel outd of his msery allthough he knows deep inside that Matt owns Z's heart. Z is just slow like that and stubborn as hell!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 15

Hot damn finally!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 15

I love the update. Yes, Z made a mistake but Matt mother played a big part in him not having a part in his daughter's life.  Matt's mother needs to feel the pain.  Great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 14

Yes, Z kept Chase from her father but at the time she did what she did for his own good.  As famous as he is there is a POSSIBILTY with a wife and child he may not have been where he is.  Having said that, you can't undo the past ESPECIALLY when Matt has heard what his mum did to Z.  He has not discussed it with Z he is still using his anger against Z.  He is manipualting her by using their child.  Chase is a CHILD, parents make decisions for their children.  Since Matt has custody of Chase then if he wants her own tour then so be it.  Manipulating Z into going on tour is unfair is all ways.  Should she become his kept baby mama?  Becoming totally financially dependant on him.  Where will she be then?  Matt has crossed all sort of lines, what's next?  Sex in exchange for staying in her own child's life?  She has a career that she has fought to atain and she did it as a single mum.  So she is supposed to give up her career for Matt?

Chase has a right to her father but his actions (in the real world, not in a story) would push any woman to swallow her pride, call her father and get her trust fund released so she can find a real lawyer.  NO JUDGE in his right mind would have given sole custody of a female child to it's father unless the mother was unfit somehow, and a primary school teacher spearheading a pilot learning program is not unfit.  Z let Matt steamroll her into this crazy custody situation over her guilt about Chase not having a father. 

Z needs to put on her big girl pants, she is not a doormat for Matt to take his angst out on, nor should she tolerate Matt using Chase to manipulate her into going on tour.  What's next?  Matt getting her into bed.  Her having SEX with a man who still has issues with her; as much as Matt wants Z, he still HATES her for keeping Chase from him. He won't even call his mum on the bullshit she did.  It's ALL Z's fault.  Matt needs to GROW up.  Fall on his knees and thank GOD that Z did not abort his child, give her up for adoption or hook up with a loser to help her raise Z.  Z's own mother has issues which is why Z did not ask her father for her trust to help her pay for A DECENT lawyer but was quick to point out what Z did WRONG in reference to Chase and Matt.  Hindsight is always 20/20.

You are an EXCELLENT writer but I will be disapointed if this whole story is about Z acquiescing to Matt over Chase's first four years of life.  Z is a good mum but a good mum also shows her daughter how strong she is by not being a doormat.  She apologizes for her mistakes, tries to do better and does not let someone (like a man) use her mistakes to break her down or manipulate her.  Put Chase in family theraphy if she feels the need but stop letting Chase (and Matt) manipulate her.  Chase is not stupid, she damn well knows her father is not going anywhere and she is also smart enough to have figured out the family dynamics and to stop manipulating her parents by asking them to kiss.  Children will try you, its up to you to stop them.

Sorry for writing so much, I just saw the story going somewhere that in the real world would not pass the smell test.  Don't stop writing; you're good at it.



Author's Response:

I love the feedback but I feel Matts justified in his anger. Sometimes I want to yoke Z up my dang self. She has never humbled hersrlf to apologize. Matt can't help his attraction to her though.  Thanks for the in depth review. I especially like those to see if people sre receiving the story the way it's intended. 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 14

Miquel knows that Z is still in love with Matt but he chooses not to see it. He told her she has has feelings whether she wants to admit it or not.  Z's guilt over what she cost Matt and Chase is making her extremely stupid and I find it annoying!  Wake the fuck up Z! I just had to cc read and comment again. I love this story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 14

This is one of my favorite stories on this site; I get giddy when I see there has been an update.  I feel sorry for Miguel but the heart wants what the heart wants.  On paper, Miquel is the perfect man for Z but Matt has her heart.  I think Z is finally realizing that fact, but for some reason she's still leading the man on; he deserves better.  

Poor Chase, she brought tears to my eyes and Matt's reaction was heart wrenching too.

Update soon please.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 14

Omg please you have to update. I HAVE to read this confrontation, too excited to see what happens next.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 14

This must be a rewrite until next time

Author's Response:

I put up chapter 15 and then took it down for editing.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 07:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

Z knows they wil have to go on the tour with him--wonder who the crazy woman is?  Maybe his mom in disguise, trying in her own wacky way to get them by together.

Z needs to let MIguel go and face the fact that she is afraid that the tour will leave her defenseless in her emotions for Matt.  Matt will get a chance to really show her how he feels--he will be with his family.  Wonder where they will sleep on the bus?  

Thank you for the great update and thanks for getting rid of Liz.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 14

Understand Z has some explaining, what about his mom who start her down this path because of need for money and security.  Matt heard that conversation.  Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 14

Drama comes in all forms.

 

 

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 03:56 am

Title: Chapter 14

I believe that Man Is pissed!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2013 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 14

Ooooooohhhhh! Matt is spoiling for a  fight and  Azelea is just the right person to give him one.



Author's Response:

We will see if she comes out swinging.

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

I sat trying to figure out why I love this story so much.  It has to b the love Matt has for his daughter.  She may have missed four years with him but you would never know it. I think that was brilliant to threaten to take Chase if she refuse to move into the house.  That way he could be with both of them.   Matt is a smart guy. He got rid of Lizbeth and it looks like he is about to reclaim his woman before Miguel gets too comfortable.  Can't wait for the next update....Oh.if he needs the phone number to  Mr. Plumber to eventually unclog that shower drain...give me a holler....Lol



Author's Response:

Lol . He adores Chase and she definitely is a daddy's girl.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow don't Z know by now that Matt wants her apparently not ;Maguel is all that & more but the chemistry is just not there & she seems like she's coming to understand that. Now this stalking thing the lady has been visiting Chase dance class seriously & talking to her; can't wait to see who this phsyco is. Chase's feeling of abandonment is in somewhat Z's fault but not all b/c she always told her her daddy loved her but now Z is gotta face the music b/c Matt wants answers hopefully she tells him the truth about that evil manipulative witch he was with terrorizing their baby with threats of him leaving her if she wasn't a good girl etc. Just sick. & while they're having this discussion I hope they open up more to one another & they start communicating more b/c they both want the other but past mistakes & pride seems to be in the way & Z needs to just give in & go on tour especially with this threat they'll be heavily guarded but together which want look suspicious b/c of the tour.

Author's Response:

Her sack of reckoning is on  horizon .

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 02:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

thanks for the update!  Z needs to come clean and tell Mig by, take leave from the job to go on tour, apologize for leaving our guy in the cold and keeping him in the dark about his child...hell she needs to grow up and quit being so mean to him.   Now our guy needs to calm down and perhaps pull back from Z for a while, even if they do go on the tour with him--just concentrate on being a good dad.



Author's Response:

The dad part has been easy its the baby mama drama that has Matt messed up. Miguel is awesome I actually think Im going write his story eventually.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 07:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Eh.. I dunno. Why is Z soo incredible clueless and in denial?! Is she still trying to pursue something with Miguel when she darn well know she's not into him. And when he confronts her about the Matt situation, she just replies no he's not interested in me. Really? I don't like the fact that she keeps stringing Miguel along just because... he doesn't deserve that, he seems like a really nice guy that is not playing games with her.

In the beginning her denial was maybe understandable because so much time had passed since Matt and her had been together but at this point it's just frustrating that she's still not getting it. Especially since Matt has been pretty open about his attraction and his want for her. Sorry had to vent a bit. Lol So this stalker situation is worryisome.. someone is talking to the baby?! Oh no they didn't! Chase is still cute as can be. Please update soon, this story just sucks me in! Keep up the good work.

-p2p-



Author's Response:

Z has her own reasons for not accepting what's in front of her face. She delves into that in the upcoming chapter. IMHO she is a little selfish.

Reviewer: partial2passion Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 09:30 pm

Title: Chapter 14

You're an amazing writer, leaving me on the edge of my seat with this update

Looking forward to the next chapter... :-)

 

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Z needs to come clean to Matt, she has truly harmed her daughers with her decisions.  Chase deserves to a chance a having a real family with Z, Matt and her.  Please get her over the stupidity, she is making my left eye twitch and my teeth itch.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 14

Thansk for the update. I hope Z is not missing. Mr, Principal has no chance of beng with Z, he may as well cut his losses.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 13

i love this story

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 10:27 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Miguel is getting serious really quickly! Z needs to go ahead and tell him that she is in love with Matt and nothing will ever change that! I has been a while but you haven't missed a beat. Thank you for the update, I look forward to reading more. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 03:21 am



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