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Title: Chapter 4

Aiyana is scared of gerting hurt, but Johnathan is not like that asshole that you thought that you loved.   Has Aiyanan been tested for pregnancy, AIDS and other STD's?  I do hope that she goes to therapy for trauma of being raped. Great story with great characters.  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 01:03 am
Title: Chapter 3

Johnathan has got it bad and I love it.  Drew is trying to help him get some uninterupted time with Aiyana.  Drew you are the ace boon coon!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 4

That dirty old man! What a pervert. This is a great story but what a cliff hanger! It was getting really good. Thanks for the update.  

 Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 12:19 am
Title: Chapter 1

I am in love with this story. I watch their show, I like how you make it all seem so realistic  

 Reviewer: E.P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2012 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2012 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Good start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 01:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good cast.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 01:42 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great start.

 Reviewer: dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2012 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Loving it so far. Jonathan may not be alone for long!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 03:46 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Interesting start. More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 05:52 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like it! Please continue!

 Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 12:21 am
Title: Chapter 2

Jonathan has got it bad!!  Does Aiyana feel any attraction towards to Jonathan is the question.    More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued, please continue.  Although I couldn't see all of the cast pictures.



Author's Response:

Who couldnt you see?

Here they go againstories/1985/images/property.pngstories/1985/images/Property1.png

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 10:16 pm


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