Great story! I love the plot and the characters so far are amazing. However your been tense is everywhere and words are being misused. Please don't ever stop writing but consider an editor.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2016 01:43 pm
I know what id get Katherine for Mother's day a nice glass of arsenic
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2014 06:10 pm
I know what id get Katherine for Mother's day a nice glass of arsenic
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2014 06:09 pm
I kinda like this, I don't like the title tho, please continue!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2012 09:46 am
OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH please please pleaseeeee continue for the sake of all humanity. I hate Katherine and Jackline needs to watch her back her momma dirty.
Reviewer: MissOctober Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:15 pm
Good chapter
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:13 pm
great update! intense and i like that Jackie is feisty - wow, this is ging to be something else, alright! like always look forward to more - thanks!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2012 09:40 am
Loved the update!! More please. Wonder what plans James has for her?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2012 01:31 am
Great update, but what is seventeen hundred thousand dollars...? I was trying to make sense of it in my head...does he mean 170,000? One hundred seventy thousand?
Author's Response:
Sorry about that a big mistake on my part it's been fixed
Reviewer: JB Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 02:33 pm
Good update . I feel so bad for Jacqueline . What a bitch of a mother she has . Can't wait to see what happens next .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 05:40 am
great update...more please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 05:05 am
Thanks for updating.
You need to watch your tenses because it gets very confusing. A good beta could you smooth out the kinks and make the story flow better.
Poor Jack, I'm happy she's not a wilting flower.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 04:24 am
Please kill Katherine, she doesn't deserve to live she sold her only child to get out of debt and to continue to live. Now James and Ace are kidnapping Jacqueline, man I am wondering what he has planned for her? C-I-L-L Katherine!! I want her going to hell in gasoline draws wearing a pork chop necklace for the hounds of hell!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 02:09 am
Wow , that's crazy to sell your daughter because you are jealous of her youth. Great start I can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 02:06 am
This story has been very interesting from the start!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 01:22 am