*In my best Florida Evans voice*
Damn, daamn, daaaamn James!
Shame on you! You should feel bad for what you did!
This story is getting better. Keep it up ^^
Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2013 05:01 am
I really need you to come back with more soon. This is getting damn good. You have created some great dynamic characters! I can't wait for you to start unraveling James. I can only assume he has many layers. This story is becoming a favorite.
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2013 04:16 pm
That was really sad and i wish he had not gone that far. I hope we get longer and quicker updates next time.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 01:26 am
Oh my what a experience I wonder how shes going to feel afterwards probably anger directed towards him but maybe also awareness of the compassion and tenderness he showed her. I think he's falling for her lil by lil but he probably dosen't even begin to know he really is or what falling in love is. He'll learn he'll be in denial but he will know in the end hehehehehe I hope :0 lol
Great Chapter cant wait for me and don't be to long girly!lol
Author's Response:
I won't take long I promise
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 04:03 pm
This is so sad. Jac didn't bring any of this on herself. She didn't asked to be used and abused. I think James has gone too far and if he breaks her mentally he will only have a compliant body and not the fiesty woman he's come to care about. I don't see how she can fall in love with a man so cruel like this, one who has all power over her. It's going to be interesting to see how you work this story so that the reader would even want those two to be together.
Author's Response:
That's the one thing about, Jacqueline she keeps jumping back into her feistiness. It is some what her defense mechanism, especially after her father died when she was young and having to take care of herself especially with a mom like Katherine.
You also have to see it James side, his defense mechanism is to act ruthless he doesn't do we'll in voicing his feelings, which well be the main problem with them. The funny part is when you mention how can she fall in love with a man cruel like this she's going to be thinking the same thing.
How can she fall in love with a man such as him, how can she fall in love with a man who lives the way he do, etc...but she does and your going to love it.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 01:04 pm
He was cold to do something so horrible to her no matter what..
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 02:27 am
He was cold to do something so horrible to her no matter what..
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 02:27 am
I can't believe I waited so long to read this!! AMAZING!!! I can't wait to see more. I am too stupefied to say more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 07:34 pm
Great update! Hmmm, is James finally beginning to see the effects of his actions on Jacqueline? Is he possibly developing feelings for her? Has he broken her with that reality check?
Author's Response:
Thanks, James is intrigued by Jacqueline so she has spark some interest...the reality check really didn't break her for two reasons. One it taught her to be even more patient about trying escape as well strengthening her reason to play his game. The second her feistiness is the reason that James is intrigued by her in the first place so he wouldn't do anything to break it.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 07:02 am
great update! talk about leavning an impression - the scene where the men were touching Jac was intense, to say at least and the end with James feeling guilty - yup, Jac has left an impression on him too ;)
thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 08:58 pm
Wow... I loved every chapter!! I need more! James is something else. This is getting really interesting! Keep going!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 07:26 pm
Keep going can't wait for next chapter
Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 06:41 pm
I loved this chapter but James pissed me off letting those nasty men touch and feel On Her.. Update soon please
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 05:20 pm
awww I feel so bad for her!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 05:01 pm
So James does have conscious, I thought that held was going let those men rape Jacqueline. I really want her mother dead or in jail. It's mandarian that the Chinese speak at least its one of the Chinese dialects. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hey mother is going to get hers in the end
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 02:09 pm
Wow I really do love this..I can't wait for a new up-date
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 01:38 pm
Great update, I can't wait for more..
Update Soon!!
Date: March 13 2013 11:33 am
Finally. Break threw. :). Please update soon
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 11:29 am
I absolutely love this story, please please update soon. Jacqueline and James are good strong characters and they belong together...
Please do give up on this story, you have a strong following
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 09:14 am