Thank you for such an awesome chapter--Definitely a 'Yay'. I must say that this chapter is one of the best presents I've recieved for this holiday season, so thank you!!! =)
Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 04:47 am
yay
Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 03:10 am
Yay to Lily and Aiden!! I'm glad Aiden choked Alex. I wish he hit him a couple more times. Blair got what she deserved. Grant and Owen are so cute. I'm glad they clicked :-)
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 02:32 am
Yay. I truly enjoyed this chapter. It was also a nice touch in the way he took care of her once she did lose her viginity.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:11 am
I love the chase. I love the dialogue. I love the story. Thank you and have a HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR (with more stories from you *hint hint*)
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 03:53 am
Oh Yay!!!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 01:27 am
Yay especially to Aiden
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 01:00 am
woot woot. i am glad that alex's plan didn't work and that Kennedy was there for her. I am also glad she lost it this way and not at the rave. Excited to see what comes next.
Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 12:56 am
Finally x2! An update and Lily & Aiden got busy LoL. Can't wait to see what happens now. I bet Aiden's possessiveness is about to skyrocket over the fact that he's the one she lost her virginity to.
More soon please!!!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 12:48 am
yay! This was a marvelous update!! It was quite eventful and I wasn't expecting the virginity thing! Please don't leave us hanging again! =]
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 11:42 pm
Ok, you more than made up for your absence with this extremely loooong chapter...lol! There is just so much going on and I hope I remember what I wanted to say....
Aiden needs to get it together. As I've said, I know next to nothing about this lifestyle, but I'm pretty sure being an ass isn't part of it. I'm glad Lily mentioned that she already had a daddy, because those were my thoughts about Aiden. I thought he was going to give her a bib next! Sexual dom, not life dom. Which would explain his utter shock when Lily told him off on the phone and hung up. He really couldn't believe that...lol! Like Owen said, he's not Jesus! And I see why he has trust and control, and to some extent, women issues; his father. That relationshiop pretty much explains Aiden...ughh! Unresolved issues. Also, yeah, he's in love with Lily. Because a control freak like him wouldn't tell his mother about her unless he was.
Lily...was kind of all over the map here. One minute she was showing me her immaturity in spades, the next; that she sees more than I thought. I'm glad she told Blair a thing or two, and that she wasn't afraid of her. And personally, I think Nate is kind of a loser, with the sex show he was willing to put on in front of a crowd involving Lily. Then he had the nerve to want to drag her back inside to finish the show! I chalked it up to booze and some recreational drugs, up to that point. I dont hate him, but I'd keep a respectful distance. Upside to it all, she found a good friend in Kennedy! She did Lily a serious solid by looking out for her when she didn't have to. Lily's never had a galpal before, so this is good.
Alex...hopefully now he'll get some damn self-respect! If that little fiasco at the party didn't clue him in, nothing will. He's pining and fighting for/over a woman who barelyremembered him in the first place! This crazy, obsessive, drugged-out, lushy, screaming, harpy of a lunatic is who he damn near risked his life with Aiden for; and who he wanted to marry?! This woman is why he was dragging (and possibly hurting) Lily into some convoluted game that only he remembered the reasons for? She's screaming Aiden's name during sex with him!! Yeah, go home and think about some shit!
Blair..ughh! I trust we wont be seeing her again.
Now, the real sex part! I honestly couldn't see, given the way Aiden has been going on, for them to do it the first time any other way...lol! Aiden's moodiness really wouldn't allow for anything but sudden and explosive sex. He's been crazy and Lily's been reactionary to the crazy. Now that he knows he's her only, he going to make sure it stays that way. This is really going to kick the possessive meter up a notch!
It was pitch-perfect!! Brilliant. Right out of a movie, really.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:41 pm
Yay!!!!!!
Aiden will not let Llly go now. He even told his mom about her.
Thanks for the long update and update again when you have the time!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 09:54 pm
I think, yay.
One thing is for sure...he ain't nevah gonna let her go now. hee hee
BTW...Everybody has a life outside of The Chamber. Handle yours! I appreciate the updates as they come, when they come. Just glad you didn't abandone the story altogether!
Be well!!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 09:47 pm
I'm happy they finally slept together it was at the right time and I'm happy Aiden didn't rush it with her or be a jerk and scold her for not telling him she was a virgin. I felt bad for Blair and Alex they're both so desperate. Can't wait for the next update! I want to see what will happen between Grant and Owen and with Aiden's dad!
Reviewer: Ash Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 09:20 pm
Yayy! Great update, glad they slept together and Aiden finally kissed Lily!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 08:06 pm
HALLE-FREAKIIIN-LOO, IT'S HERE!! POP THE CHAMPAGNE!
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! AND of course, I LOVED IT! the last scene wasn't the only reason - man, Aiden can put it DOWN and still be sweet at the same time, love that man! - but i really liked this update because i feel sorry for Alex. yay, he's a vile creature but he's a heartbroken man who was deeply in love. i hope with Blair's blunder he has finally woken up and finds love elsewhere *wink, wink, hint, hint* maybe Alex's own story in the future *wink, wink*
thanks for the update! you rock - take care!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 07:56 pm
Yay!!!!!!!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 07:47 pm
I liked it.. It was a good chapter.. Alex deserved what he got.. And Blair She's just a messy hoe.. But I can't wait for more aiden and lily!!
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 07:29 pm
Yay, loved the update! !!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 06:53 pm
Great chapter I love a jealous Aiden, I thought it was cute when he was looking for Lily that night. I loved the last scene. Update asap
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 06:25 pm
Hell yay
Reviewer: Chrissyo Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 06:20 pm
Maybe Lilt giving up the vcard to Aiden will make admit his feelings for Lily to himself and her. Aiden is most certainly falling in love with her! I just don't want het hurt and I jnew that Lily coukdn't handle this type of relationship, she gies from not ever veing in one to a sub/dom one. Auden coukd break her and I don't want that. So please give me a HEA. I knew Aiden wouldn't sleep with another man's woman and Blair has list Alex. Alex, I am so glad that you finally woke up! Blair deserves to sad and alone! Fabulous!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 04:30 pm
Yay to the much-anticipated loooong update And YAY to her losing her virginity to Aiden. This update was fantastic and the clues are there for Aiden and everyone else to see that he has deeper feelings for Lily.I'm anxious for more.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 03:09 pm
Yay, to Lily loosing her virginity. I feel like Aiden in his own way kind od told Lily how he actually feels about her when he kissed her. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 02:53 pm
Everyday... I waited. It finally came and it was beautiful.
*cries*
I wonder if she's still going to be his sub from here on out.
AND HELL YAY to her losing her virginity.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 02:22 pm