Nate is sexy, but it was wrong of him to give Lily that drug and it was wrong of her to take it. Aiden is going to go crazy when he finds out she ignored him. Update Soon!!!!!
Reviewer: blu23 Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2012 04:53 am
Yikes! Aiden is going to go ballistic when he sees Lily again! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
its going to be so much fun to write!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 08 2012 03:20 am
NO! You can't stop there! Lily is in soooo much trouble. Nate is going to blow a gasket when he finds out where she is, what she's doing and with who. Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
*evil laughing*
Reviewer: Nicci Signed
[Report This]Date: November 08 2012 03:04 am
it was amazing && really long whih i love! loving the development ofof the story. Alex obsession with Blair & Blair obsession with Adien. Adien is Lily's... happu writing. i loveeee it
Author's Response:
thanks! everybody is obsessed with somebody in their town!
Reviewer: readlover Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2012 07:03 am
Monkey wrenches galore! Alex doesn't know what a lucky break he had. Hope he eventually wakes up and smells the coffee. But something tells me that won't happen until havoc is wreaked.
My Dominant often says, "Only good girls get spankings." Well, it seems that only good girls have orgasms too! Yay for Lily!
Love how this story is progressing so far. Aiden is finally starting to experience the depth that D/s can encompass. When you trust someone (even in a vanilla relationship) there is almost nothing that is taboo, and things like limits, safewords etc. nearly become superfluous.
Anyway, awesome chapter!!
Author's Response:
Alex is very stubborn lol, and that wont be a good thing in this situation. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 05:42 am
All right, having also read 50 Shades of Grey (which sorry to say, was just a lite BDSM Harlequin romance), I would like if you'd not compare yourself to the book. Unlike Ana, Lily is less afraid of the unknown and less judgemental so far. Granted, Aiden is also not presented as the tortured soul that Christian was, but Aiden is by far more like a real life dominant that the oh so "perfect" and boring Christian Grey. 50 Shades made BDSM seem like the haven of the hurt and damaged. Not so. LOVE that so far Aiden isn't seeking exorcise any demons.
Orgasm control is something that many dominants and submissives enjoy. Intrigued to see how you will handle it. *grins* Can't wait until Lily does more research and puts a nipple clamp on Aiden's free for all. (By the way... may want to try clothespins first.)
Great chapter. The sex scene was nicely done. I do like that Aiden didn't overwhelm her. He may not know she's a virgin, but he's being very appropriate in terms of a first encounter. A good dominant has control of themselves and is able to gauge their partner's reactions, and is unwilling to rush. Thumbs up all the way!
Author's Response:
thank you for that, you really have no idea how happy that makes me! yeah i didnt want to make aiden that "tortured soul" simply b/c i think that whole bit is played out. i've personally never met anyone in the bdsm lifestyle so i'm trying my best to represent you all in a good and normal light. i'll keep those clothespins in mind!
Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 04:47 am
All right, is it bad that I'm rooting for Voldemort? Screw Harry Potter, let the bad boy win for once, right? Okay, okay. We all know that Alex is probablly Voldemort, but he drank so much unicorn blood no one can even tell.
Let me also say that a story without humor bores me to tears. This is certainly not a boring story. I am very much enjoying your sense of humor and wit.
Poor Lily! To be shocked by the "seamy" side of BDSM. Whatver will become of her? *wicked grin* Taken slowly on that journey, she may discover things she thought impossible. But I am willing to wait to see where it takes her. Loved Aiden being protective of what he's already thinking of as "His".
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response:
lol @ screw harry potter (which is alex) i think everyone is rooting for the "bad boy" in this story, yeah i need humor in my daily life, i get so bummed without it, thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 04:03 am
Regret is a bitch! LOL!
Okay... totally loving your development of the two main characters. Can I adopt Owen? I know a few people that need some dog dung in their mailboxes, as well as the girl that cut my own pigtail in fourth grade.
Now, for a more serious side. I do like that you have her thinking that Aiden is domineering because she's about to realize the difference between a dominant and domineering man. Many people assume that a dominant is a bully, but they are far from that. They simply know what they want, how they want it, and are determined to have it that way.
Lily is discovering her submissive side slowly and I am hoping that the unveiling will be one that allows her to appreciate how strong she really is. Giving into someone's demands requires strength that many do not understand. Lily taking this leap is very telling. She's already developing tentatively that trust that is so imperative within a D/s relationship.
Nicely done so far.
Author's Response:
interesting how the dom/sub relationship works. i totally didnt know any of this before writing this story so i'm glad to know now and not be as ignorant beforehand. lol i'll take owen and mr. gustin
Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 03:37 am
Terrific start.
As a person in the BDSM lifestyle, I am very interested in where this story will go. I am reading this on a recommendation from Caribbean Fire and so far am not disappointed.
Author's Response:
you both are fabulous! thank you for taking the time to read it!
Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 03:03 am
update soon!
Author's Response:
:D
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 03 2012 02:38 am
GREAT STORY! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE AGAIN!!!
Author's Response:
:D
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 10:52 am
I love the way Lily took control and gave Aiden pleasure! He was proud of her as well! Sorry Owen had to get hurt,but that gave him a chance to get to know more about Lily's past. I have a feeling Blair will cause Lily and Aiden more trouble then necessary! I Do Not Like Blair or Alex! He just wants to use Lily for revenge against Aiden and I bet Blair will help him!!!
Author's Response:
lol little Lily is growing up! And Blair is...yeah..
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 10:50 am
why is this aden so harsh...grr...im so hating his attitude. cant he just compelled her more nicely...
but still and though, i love reading this :)
Author's Response:
thanks :D don't want to give too much away but there are reasons for his attitude ;)
Reviewer: naania Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 02:03 pm
Skank troublemaker . .Blair and Alex deserve each other.
Author's Response:
:D i just laughed way harder than I should have!
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 11:52 am
AWESOME!!!!!!!! Please update soon, I love Lily's character; Aiden came off as a complete dick but the otherside of him has won me over, Ms. Monroe can kick rocks and Alex as well, since he wants to use Lily for revenge. Owen is adorable and funny; I love the sibling bond between him and Lily. I think Grant and Own should date.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading! i wish i had more Owens in life
Reviewer: SBrown Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 08:22 am
OK This story is so good that I went back and re-read parts of it. LOL
First, Alex is upset because he thinks that Aiden slept with Blair when she was with him, but Aiden didn't know Blair came to the party with Alex. What a sleeze! Alex wants revenge but he needs to let it go!
Alex has figured out Lily is a virgin, but has Aiden? He is already in over his head and I'm sure he wants to be her first and only! I like the way Lily stood up to him and was about to quit and Aiden had to regroup and make her that offer. LOL Even though she's agreed to be his sub, I doubt if she just lets him walk all over her.
Owen is not going to let his sister be taken advantage of and I'm sure he'll get to be a thorn in Aiden's side if he doesn't behave himself!
Love this story. I'm glad Lily read up on a few things so that she knew what she was getting into (sort of). She already has Aiden's nostrils wide open and once he gets the real deal, he'll be hooked for life. LOL. I'd love for her to come up with a few tricks that no other woman has laid on him and really blow his mind.
Author's Response:
Haha accidentally posted this as another comment-Adien is very in over his head, funny how lawyers are typically good at reading people at first glance, yet Aiden completely misjudged Lily.
Date: October 29 2012 10:31 pm
Their first time together was perfect!
Author's Response:
:D thanks!
Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 09:04 pm
Loved it!
Author's Response:
:D thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 02:54 pm
Why wont he kiss her?
Author's Response:
it will be revealed next chapter :D
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 07:18 am
Awesome update!
I like how Aiden is starting to be nicer to Lily.
Blair and Alex are crazy. They deserve each other.
Thanks for the update and update again soon.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading! im hoping to be finished with the update by the end of the week!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 05:40 am
This story is very interesting and captivating. The FC's you use are on point, very well casted. Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response:
thanks! im glad you like them!
Reviewer: Sammy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 05:35 am
I read this all the way through for the first time. It is really good. More please!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like it :D
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 01:39 am
can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
I can't wait to finish writing it :p
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 12:49 am
Candice is one of my favorite vs angels and I think she's perfect for this role!
Author's Response:
Mine too, it was between Candice and Miranda Kerr, but Miranda looks too innocent for Blair lol
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 07:04 pm
DAAANNNGGG drama filled chapter just as I love them! Blair is going to be pissed when Lily comes into the office!
Author's Response:
Blair is going to flip her shit lol
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 09:22 am