Oh shit! 

Ok,Alex is an Ass! He knows there is something going on between Aiden and Lily,but because of something alexvdid in the past,he is willing to use poor lily! Oh wow, he has started on the right foot. Giving her pleasure first always works for me!

Author's Response:

yeah he is relentless. Aiden is a giver when it comes to her :D

Oh Wow! Little Red Ridinghood my have just fallen into the wolf's trap!

Author's Response:

She won't be going to granny's house anytime soon!

I would like to know more about how the rivarly started, because it seems like Aiden couldnt care less about Alex except when it comes to Lily. Like one of the other reviews said, I dont think Aiden would intentionally go after Alex's girl becuase women flock to him. I loved their first encounter and I cant wait to read more! 

Ok, so we all see where Alex is coming from. On its face, I can see his point. Aiden is an ass, but somehow I don't believe he'd willingly commit adultery. Mainly, because he's probably never had to. However, I don't have the full story yet.

Now, on to both Alex and Aiden with their games. The fact that Alex equates virginity with stupidity is simpley astounding. He gives Lily absolutely NO credit for having a brain at all. Slick words and smooth moves and that's all she wrote, huh? And the sickening part is that he would use her in this way and think nothing of it. That's no better than what he thinks about Aiden! ANd really thinks it will work!

Aiden is doing this simply because he's bored and needs something new to play with. Again, giving her Lily no credit for having no brains. Here they both are having a pissing contest over a woman who is minding her business and just wants a job to gain some experience in her chosen field. Now she's become some kind of hockey puck between them. I hope Lily gives them both something good to talk about!

These are two peas in a pod! Unbelievable!!

Good stuff.

If Shades of Grey is like this, I will be purchasing. I doubt it is though, so that means, you are damn talented. 

I think the first encounter was good. You did really well withthe scene. Can't say I like alex but then there may be a bit of VD bias bleeding in. I hope that Aiden pops her cherry before Alex can get to her otherwise she may never recover form the betrayal considering her childhood.

Definitely a huge thumbs up! I loved this chapter and thanks for introducing me to Bonobo. I

Author's Response:

:D thanks! and you're welcome! (I love that man so much!) 

Super good update . Aiden and Lily being together was so hot ! It was perfect for there first time not to much - just enough ! I love the tension between Alex and Aiden . Can't wait to read more !

wow. wow, wow...! this upfate was reeeal good! not only because of Lily & Aiden which was more than hot - and Aiden has just started! but i liked the interaction between Lily and Aiden during dinner, and Lily with Alex. it's pity that Alex is going to be such an ass but then again walking in on the love of your life with another man can really mess you up and i'm betting Blair  was his love ...

other than thtat - keep the story coming! this was great!!

I hope that the fact that Lily can sense Alex's vindictiveness that sho won't fall prey to his plan to usw her to hurt Aiden. Aiden went in fir the kill and gavw Lily a taste. If inly he'd treat her better at work,. Audwn warch that fool around Lily, I don't want her to get hurt. She has no confidence niw but if Alex succeeds she'll be destroyed.. Me likey!!

Fantastic story! The scene between Aiden and Lily was HOT!!

I hope Lily trusts her intincts where Alex is concerned & stay away. Aiden and Lily's first sexual encounter ( thumps up & a victory dance thrown in), I'd like like no..Love to see more of those.Thank you...it was beautiful.