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Title: Hometown Glory

Aiden is hot! From the title I'm guessing that Lily isn't going to be as obedient as Aiden thinks.



Author's Response:

wink wink

 Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 08:45 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

I love this story ! I'm totally Obsessed with it .Great update .



Author's Response:

Thanks! :D

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 08:27 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

I live Aiden, otherwise known as the a-hole. :)

I like Lily. And I think we've only scratched the surface of who she is. She seems the perfect submissive. But that position can have more power than the Dom. So, let the games begin.



Author's Response:

You are so right! I've noticed this while doing my research on the two positions. 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 08:06 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

I'm loving this fic. A round of applause to you for a great start. Yes u tricked me at the start at thought my girl was getting her some. Happy writing update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Haha she won't have to wait long! 

 Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:59 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

loving this story so much can't wiat to read more.



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Thanks! :D

 Reviewer: babyt Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:33 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

You can't end it there!



Author's Response:

*evil laughing*

 Reviewer: Ria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:29 pm
Title: Chasing Pavements

yup. You got me.



Author's Response:

:D

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 03:52 pm
Title: Hometown Glory

I love Owen and lily's relationship! Aiden is a dick



Author's Response:

lol yes he is

 Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 03:38 pm
Title: Hometown Glory

Great story! Can't wait to read the rest! And I love the Adele song titles for the chapters ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I LOVE Adele!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 11:24 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

Yes, you did. Thank goodness it was a dream or I'd have been sorely disappointed. 

 

I like Owen. I wonder if there will be anything between him and Grant. 

 

I found it odd that Aiden called Lily short when she's 5'10 and he's only 6'3. 5'10 is six above average height for US females and average height for males, so I doubt Aiden would consider Lily short. 

 



Author's Response:

:D I'm taking 'growen' into consideration, I never really thought about those 2 togther. Oh Lily is 5'4'', Aiden typically goes after women who are 5'10'', sorry for the confusion! 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 09:03 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

it sucks that they had a rough childhood but i like the fact that they kept going and never let the bullying get to them and owen is such an awesome brother. i wasn't expecting her to accept aiden's offer of being a submissive but i can't wait to see what happens with that 



Author's Response:

yeah high school can be hell, Lily has a lot of things to work on, like that impulsiveness lol

 Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 08:22 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

I'm enjoying this so far!

Owen is so funny and just what Lily needs.

Aiden is a trip and I hope Lily strats standing up for herself soon.

Thanks for the update and update again soon!



Author's Response:

Owen will definetly be the comedic break for this story. lol yes he is, and thank you for reading! 

 Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:46 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

Yes you had me going with the beginning! For some reason I don't trust Aiden when he says there will be no sex. Update soon!!



Author's Response:

:D, I don't either....

 Reviewer: Ash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:21 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

hehehe that sneaky B lol defintly didnt see that one coming



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:D

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 07:06 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Are we not supposed to like Aiden? Lol



Author's Response:

haha if you don't I totally get it-unless you go for the asshole types

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 06:52 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Amazing!



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thanks! :D

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 06:50 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Amazing update, I hope Aiden doesn't continue to be an asshole to Lily. I hope there is more to him than that and I'm glad Lily stood up for herself and I can't wait to see what happens next. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks! Aiden is something...

 Reviewer: BLU Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 06:23 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

Lol you really had me going with the beginning!! This was a great chapter, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

:D thanks!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 06:10 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

Please update soon. I am living this story

Author's Response:

I will :D

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 05:59 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Great start.... very captivating!

Author's Response:

thanks :D

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 05:44 am
Title: Hometown Glory

I love this story, super hot! But it's really simular to Noah's Orders



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Thanks! yeah its cray, I'm waiting for an update with that story! 

 Reviewer: ebonyluverr23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 05:42 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

LOL...and this is why I shy away from these BDSM stories, usually. Aiden would have had a paperwieght sticking out of the side of his head!

And good for Lily! Submissive or not, him being disrespectful and abusive of her as a person or employee is NOT something she has to accept. I hope being bullied taught her that much. I didn't appreciate him talking down to Lily that way and implying she wasn't intelligent enough to have a simple rational thought. Again, I'm hoping Lily realizes that she doesn't have to take any abuse during her "journey" into the BDSM underworld with Aiden. 

I hope there is more to Aiden than a dominate azzhole who only hears the word yes, that he appears to be. That makes him so one dimensional.

I'm going to really try not to lose my temper with this story (Aiden) because it has alot of potential...lol!

Good chapter!!


 

 



Author's Response:

LOL! Aiden can be a big asshole but maybe that will change...maybe *swirls tea*

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 03:39 am
Title: Chasing Pavements

i admit i was fooling! great chapter. can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

:D I'm so mean! 

 Reviewer: mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 03:29 am
Title: Hometown Glory

AMAZING UPDATE PLEASE

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will :D

 Reviewer: Chasz143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 01:10 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Update Soon Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I will :D

 Reviewer: BLU Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 09:21 pm


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