wow i hope you con't with this one i'm lovinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng it. can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thanks! smiling so big rn!
Reviewer: Tj Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 05 2012 07:33 pm
I didn't read the other, but I hope you don't delete this.
Good start!
Author's Response:
I won't, I think my other story was so unorganized and I didn't feel up to writing it, with this I have each chapter outlined already so this is here to stay!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2012 04:28 am
Can't wait to see what you do with these two.... Update soon pleeeesssss....with sugar on top.
Author's Response:
oh I have a lot in mind for those 2!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 07:33 pm
great start, i'm looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
thank you, and thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 07:39 am
I absol-funcking-lutley love Owen!! Lily and her lack of confidence is working my last nerve. I didn't know what to expect as you really didn't discribe her at all. The picture that you used is of very pretty woman so I am wondering why her self-esteem is so low? It can't be all about her being adopted by a white family. Aiden maybe fine but he is a true ahole!! More please!!
Author's Response:
Each chapter will dwell into each character's personality and how their current situations affect them, Lily is a classic insecure girl and her past has a lot to do with that, but only time will tell if she stays that way-hint, hint..
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 05:12 am
i love this story and i can't wait until you update!!!
Author's Response:
thank you! I will try to update this as much as I can!
Reviewer: blu Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 04:09 am
I'll call you Sir any time l0l
love it keep it up.!
Author's Response:
haha, thanks!
Reviewer: dope. Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 04:01 am
YASSSSS. I'm looking forward to this.
One question, who is that model playing the role of Aiden? He is fine!
Author's Response:
Atesh Salih, that man should be illegal!
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 03:47 am
great job....more please
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 03:32 am
I like Lily and I hope she gains more self-confidence and strength as this goes along because I dont want her to appear like she's whining all the time. I also don't like the fact she's only there because Aiden is bored and needs fresh meat to toy with and dominate. That's kind of sleazy of him.
I love the brother-sister dynamic. Owen is a cutie.
Author's Response:
Aiden is a sleazeball, but will he always be O_O???
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2012 02:05 am
Great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 03 2012 11:52 pm
I love this story. It is so good. I love Lily and Owen. Please update ASAP
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2012 11:32 pm
HEHEHE love it can't wait till lilly is like I have confident so watch out! that since of inner self is going to kill taylor
Author's Response:
you may be on to something there *sips tea*
Reviewer: ESTHER Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 03 2012 10:49 pm
Wow, I love your way with words! Really sucked me in. I am curious to find out more about Aiden and I wonder if Lily is going to be down with what he has in mind for her next. Only time will tell, I suppose. Also, Owen is awesome! I'd love some more scenes with him in the future. Please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! haha Owen is my spirit animal!
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2012 10:01 pm