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Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Thank goodness I missed this story!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 03:49 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Great update, i liked the morning after interaction between Lily and Aiden!!!

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Date: January 29 2013 03:19 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

I was quite happy to see an update. Thank you!

Aiden is about to give Alex a rude awakening when Alex tells him why he treated Lily like he did and said what he said to Aiden. Can't wait! lol

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 01:55 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

I'm waiting for the drama.... But of course it was good

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 12:17 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

I hope that Aiden and Lily can move forward. I enjoyed this chapter.

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Date: January 28 2013 09:26 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Aiden didn't know that the nobag Blair was dating Alex. I hope that this conversation helps Alex. It is about time he thought about getting an RO on Blair I just hope that follows through with it. That ho is crazy!! More please!

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Date: January 28 2013 08:26 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Damn straight Alex needs to tell Aiden what is going on. Fool that he is. Long overdue for Alex. He's handled this like some 12 year-old instead of a mautre grown man.

The morning after was cute. Aiden cooked for Lily, and nicked her name! He's in love..lol! And he seemed much more relaxed. I bet not many people see that side of him, or even knows that he can cook. I liked it. I like the less intense Aiden much better.

Nice!

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Date: January 28 2013 08:20 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

I liked this chapter and every chapter doesn't have to be drama. But, I will be looking forward to the drama coming in the next part. LOL!

Thanks for the update!

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Date: January 28 2013 07:43 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Good update .

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Date: January 28 2013 04:48 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Lily should have slapped Alex two good times

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 03:09 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Aiden didn't know that the nobag Blair was dating Alex. I hope that this conversation helps Alex. It is about time he thought about getting an RO on Blair I just hope that follows through with it. That ho is crazy!! More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 02:50 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

I liked this update, thanks! I'm all for more chapters and I say bring on the drama.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 01:47 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Well, well, well! I knew Aiden would want to know the meaning behind that remark Alex made last night. When he finally understands I hope he is able to keep his head and not kill him. Yes, I think you may need to write about 10-15 more chapters to complete this very intriging story.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 11:11 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 1

Well, well, well! I knew Aiden would want to know the meaning behind that remark Alex made last night. When he finally understands I hope he is able to keep his head and not kill him. Yes, I think you may need to write about 10-15 more chapters to complete this very intriging story.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 11:09 am
Title: Turning Tables

Yea! She said she would give it to the man she loved only! So she did it, she gave herself to the one man she loves!

Please update again,,,,soon!!!!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2013 06:29 am
Title: Turning Tables

Definitely a Yay!!! Feel soory for Lilly because she really will have no freedom now that Aiden knows his the only one!

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Date: January 13 2013 06:13 pm
Title: Turning Tables

 

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Date: January 12 2013 09:07 pm
Title: Turning Tables

Definitely YAY!

I feel bad for Blair...will she and Alex work?

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Date: January 01 2013 03:38 pm
Title: Turning Tables

Yay!!! Yay!!! Yay!!! Cause he loves her even if he doesn't realize it... And she loves him for sure now.....Wish I had been lucky enough to have an orgasm my first time....

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Date: December 31 2012 05:24 am
Title: Turning Tables

Definitely Yay!

It had to happen and the way it did was great.  Aiden is going to be even more possesive than he already was.  Good luck to Lilly. LOL

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 10:42 am
Title: Turning Tables

There is so much to say about this chapter and one word that comes to mind, FANTASTIC!

Right now, my favourite charcter is Owen...yes Owen. I liked owen when he cut off the girl's ponytails for cutting off his sister's hair. I began to fall in love with Owen when she had to sell her soul to him to dress her for the rest of her life. I'm in love with Owen for what he did to Aiden when he showed up at their apartment looking for Lily. He turned Aiden into a stalker...bravo Owen! That's  his sister.

So we meet the father who shines on why Aiden is the way he is and his mother is where he gets his carefree side. Very good character since his mother has been waiting for some grandchildren but in vain...LOL! I like that he told her about Lily; he cares more than he's letting on. And now that he took her virginity it is for him to move on from there. That has a lot of ramifications both for Lily and Aiden. He's never done that before so now he really knows how innocent she is which means his protective nature about her just increased 100%, and for her, its her self-esteem issues that she now has to deal with.

Alex and Blair, a match made in heaven except Alex has taken off the rose colour glasses when it comes that slut. I like Blair's character...she's so pathetic that it's funny. Aiden is going to want to find out more about what Alex meant by what he said to him but that will be on the back burner for now.

Nate...childish, immature and Kennedy, not afraid to do the right thing.

All in all, wonderful job with this chapter. Keep up the excellent work.

 Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 05:20 pm
Title: Turning Tables

Very hot last scene! I wish I could've lost my virginity like that! 

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Date: December 29 2012 07:16 am
Title: Turning Tables

Yay

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Date: December 29 2012 07:07 am
Title: Turning Tables

Best story i've read in a while!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Phuongiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 06:36 am
Title: Turning Tables

Ok this is pretty selfish of me but I need another update ASAP!

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Date: December 29 2012 06:25 am


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