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Title: Chapter 1

I'm liking this so far. I need more though.



Author's Response: Thank you!:)

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 03:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

Just a little hard to read at times but I like the idea though...



Author's Response: Sorry! I try to make it as perfect as possible, but I seem to fail! LOL! Thank you, the idea just came to me out of nowhere.:)

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it, but I feel like I just read the middle of a good book and I have no idea what is going on. I do have a feeling that Bev maybe putting too much into a relationship, and that she is not getting enough back.



Author's Response: Thanks, yeah I know! The story is going to explain itself in future chapters. Yeah true, Beverly feels that why sometimes as well. Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: FaithMax Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start so far. I'm wrestling fan so loving MC is in the story. I just love how Beverly handle his ex lol. Keep it coming



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a wrestling fan aswell! Mark was the only guy that I knew of that had badass biker qualities! Beverly is a tough bitch! She earned her place in Mark's life, so for Lisa trying to get under her skin, Beverly wasn't having it! LOL!

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1

GREAT FRIST CHAPTER.



Author's Response: Thank you!:)

 Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 02:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it. It has a smooth flow to it.

Thanks for sharing your story.

MORE!



Author's Response: Thank you! I try to keep it that way, but sometimes I get busy and rush!:) Your welcome, thanks for reviewing! ;)

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 1

Why would Beverly expect Mark's children to call her mom when they have mother whose living?  It's obvious that Lisa still wants Mark as she is jealous as hell of Beverly and her place in Mark's s life.  Don't like Lisa at all!!! Good beginning, thanks for sharing your story.

More please!!



Author's Response: Beverly has been in his kids lives for a long time now! Yes, Lisa is super jealous of Beverly, she feels she took something that was hers, which is Mark. Yeah, Lisa will never be liked in this story! LOL! Thanks and your welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 05:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

I love the introduction, very strong beginning.  More pleas



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!<3

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I can't wait to see where this goes. I like that his kids seem to love and respect her, they will eventually call her mommy too. I'm willing to bet she does more with them than the real mommy.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Yeah the kids still need to warm up to her (eventhough she has been in their lives for about 9 or 10 years now). Their real mom loves them, eventhough she can be mean, she still loves her children.:)

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 05:39 am


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