I love this story. It reminds me of scandal characters Olivia and Fitz. When you meet that special someone that you are instantly attracted to and just know what they mean to you. In Scandal Fitz says" why was I such a coward to marry her and not wait for you. " That's how I feel about these characters. I once heard that we pick and choose who to love and how much to love them. In this case its the same but yet different. They know going in with eyes open what they are doing but the attraction that pulls them together is a curse and blessing. It's a curse because he's married and unavailable to commit to her unless he is willing to lose everything he has gained. Its a blessing because they have met each other and know what each other means to each other. He is having doubts because he knows that he can't give her what she deserves (commitment and not being a mistress) unless he walks away from his current relationship and he is not ready to. He thinks she will leave and that scares him.
Ypu're spot on!Reviewer: LovinLo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 03:48 am
Thank You for clarifying what the nature of the relationship Nick Collier had with Victoria Moore, and why he is so desperate for her to help him and his case. I know he doesn't want that rich wife of his to find out. This story is getting more and more interesting!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 12:15 am
So Victoria was twenty-three when they meet. If Nick was the mayor then she knew that he was married, so why decided to be the other woman? If Nick knew her father, how could he use his friend's child that way? I would say that she was young and stupid, but she knew that the man was married he was the damn mayor after all!!! Smh!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 05:26 am
Ok, all I want to know, did he really rape the maid? Because I feel he was being setup by someone who doesn't want him to be President of France. When will the strategy start? Good story so far.
Thank you. That precise answer is in chapter 37, but you will not be satisfied until you read the last chapter which will describe the actual event. Strategy will start in about 10 chapters. All the players need to be introduced first. And they are a lot of people, including the maid and her back story.
I said it in the notes of chapter 1, this is a very long and complex story, as my 1st one, The One, was. We are looking at 100+ chapters. You will keep asking questions, and answers will be provided that raise further questions...Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 03:44 am
Did you tell us how old Victoria was? If he's 59 and they had their things 13 years ago which means that he was 46. So of course at 46 Nick had to have been married which means that he cheated on Helen. How long were Victoria and Nick having an affair? This story is so juicy and I really want Nick to suffer some karmic justice!! Please!!!
yes, in the previous chapter.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 02:08 am
I really don't like Nick and his wife makes my teeth itch! I love stories where I instantly love or hate characters, the wife is on the hate list! I am loving Vi although I am concerned about her hiding from love all because of nimrod!
glad to see you react!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 10:43 pm
What did Nick do to Victoria? He really broke her but she is allowing him win by not loving a good man. Will you tell us what happened between Victoria and Nick via flashback? Was Nick married when he and Victoria had a relationship? Or did he get married to his wife while sexing up Victoria? I love this story!
I will tell you, all in good time.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 10:35 pm
An interesting turn of events. I am interested to know more about Helen's angle. Definitely looking forward to more! Great update!!
Thanks! Helen is definitely an interesting woman!Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 09:45 pm
This is bad and it's going to get worse as she still has feelings for nimrod! His wife is evil and those two are in for a rude awakening because I don't believe that Victoria is punk. They just unleashed the beast! She can't attest to his guilt or innocence as she doesn't know him. It has been thirteen years since they were together and he treated her abismally. Don't like Nick can't stand his wife or their attorney! Looking forward to future updates.
A rude awakening is in the works...Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 05:22 pm