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Title: Chapter 7: Keep Your Hands Off My Girl

Great update . I forgot to tell you that I love, love,love the playlist of songs that go with each chapter. My only advise for Alex would be - always make sure the guy loves you more than you love him. I know it's Very selfish of me to say but it's always been true for me . I'm still Team Lucas. Cheers ! :)



Author's Response:

Aww thanks! I love trying to find songs that go well with the emotions of the characters. :D

Alex clearly doesn't understand your advice. She's blind. :D

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 7: Keep Your Hands Off My Girl

Tyler is such a punk, he took a swing at Lucas' door and not at Lucas.  Lucas is such the better man,  but Alex gets on my freakin' nerve.  She is so self-absorbed she doesn't deserve Lucas she deserves for Tyler to break her heart.  Alex is leaning on that last nerve!!!  Next fight please let their actually be one and have Alex there so that she can witness Tyler being an ass.

 

Fabulous!!



Author's Response:

Yeah. That was punk. Not manly at all.  

However, is Alex really self-absorbed?She's just in love and I guess her love for Tyler makes her see everything differently. Even her possible feelings for Lucas, and Lucas' feelings for her.  She just needs to see the light. I personally don't want her to end up broken-hearted, but by looking at Tyler's past record it seems likely.

There are going to be other fights. And they're going to be quite terrible. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 7: Keep Your Hands Off My Girl

Another fantastic update, you are on a roll. Oh Alex, so weak, but I understand while I have never been in her position I know many women that have, they fall in love and lose common sense. I want her with Lucas but maybe some competition will help her see reason, maybe Lucas with someone else. She must feel something besides friendship with Luke, I mean she is not blind lol and she is always running to him when something goes wrong. If only she had a friend like me to help her see the light *cough* Lucas *cough lol.

I love it and this ride that you are taking us on. I am interested to see what Tyler will do wrong next.

Update Soon!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Unfortunately I will stop in a few days because exams are close and I have to concentrate on them. But I will be back, I promise.

Yes, she lost all the common sense she might have had. Does she really need some competition to see the light? Maybe. I'm still not sure about that.

You'll be surprised at the stunts Tyler will pull out of his bag! You should prepare yourself.

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 6: Something

c**p, they bumped without protection...! hahaha, things might get A LOT more complicated!

even though i'm 100% Lucas fan after reading this it wouldn't be fair for him to be the rebound - he deserves better and someone who will love just as deeply. lord, he is going to be so hurt when he sees Lexi - he's going to know instantly what happened *le sigh*

anyhow you mentioned in the previous update that Tyler is going to screw things up, again! - i can only imagine how, lool!

by the way, i saw Tyler's ex Jemima is in the flashback when Lexi meets Lucas for the first time - is that something we readers should have noticed or?

thanks for the updates, Adi Milano! Happy New Year! Looking forward to the next update - i finally get to see Lucas again :)



Author's Response:

Do not worry about a possible pregnancy. It won't happened, of that I am sure.

Of course Lexi is in love with Tyler. However, if there is a future between her and Lucas, I don't want her to rebound on him either. So I'll try and tell her that! Lol. I'm a bit sad as well because it's going to be so painful when she tells her what happened. 

Yay! You caught a hint. Yes, Jemima, the actress....she's Tyler's ex. You can only imagine what will happen sooner or later...

And yes Tyler is going to screw up so badly that I feel sorry for him for being such a bloody douchebag. 

Happy New Year to you too! Next update today or tomorrow hopefully. :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 11:48 am

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

damn, i see i have missed couple of updates but what a great way to start the new year, lol! anyhow, i'm really trying to give Tyler a chance but when he keeps on accussing Lexi for cheating, i just want to reach out and strangle him...! he has dated her for years(!!) and he knows what type of person Lexi is - and something tells me if Lexi had cheated it would've been written all over her face, he would know...!

even though Tyler is a jerk, he is sexy jerk, lool! with one look Lexi pretty much melted on the floor, lool!

however...seeing how she is off the pill i can hope things WONT get A LOT more complicated if Lexi gets preggo...

 



Author's Response:

How can someone date someone for years and not trust them is beyond me. And how she can stand it, is absurd. I guess it's true when people say that love blinds people.

Things won't be complicated. Do not worry. :D She'll tell you all about it later on.

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 11:33 am

Title: Chapter 6: Something

Not rubbish at all . Great update . Tyler was a bit of a male slut before he met Alex , I see. I like that Alex made him wait before she would have sex with him . Anyway, can't wait to read more . Cheers and Happy New Year . :D



Author's Response:

A male slut indeed. But he saw the way. 

Happy New Year to you too! :D

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 6: Something

This was a good chapter.  Tyler needs to remember where he went wrong with Lexi and not go back down that path.  I hope he keeps his promise and get the help he needs.  

I know some people want her with Lucas, but I don't want her going to him on the rebound.  He deserves a woman who will love him just like she wants Tyler to love her.

Great stuff!  More please!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you. :D

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6: Something

Love the background info, hate that she's weak when it comes to Tyler. However, I know it's hard to walkway. She needs to really get away and clear her from being dickmatized by Tyler. As long as she is dickmatized she won't be able to think straight when it comes to Tyler and really evaluate what she wants and what's best for her.



Author's Response:

I hate it too but I can understand it.

I did not know what dickmatize meant before your review, so I thank you for giving me a new expression. Had to go and look it up on the Urban Dictionary, although I suspected what it meant. I guess Tyler can give it good. LOL. However, all this might be irrelevant to her when Tyler does his bullshit.

Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

Tsk Tsk Tsk hate that I love you is a wonderful title for this chapter. You should listen to I hate everything about you by three days grace it really describes there relationship very well. Yes I am a  Lucas fan but Tyler is pretty cute as well. I wonder what he's going to do to screw things up this time. I didn't really think anything could be worse then accusing someone of cheating. Anyways awesome chapter I really liked it and I hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

I loved that song. I guess it fit even better with this chapter. I wish I knew of it before hand. 

Yeah, well...Tyler is hot and Lucas is hot as well. If Alexandra had to decide who to go out with by judging solely their handsomeness, it would be tough. But behaviour wise we all know who wins between the two men. 

If you think that accusing someone of cheating is the worst thing he could do, think again. What he'll do is probably ten times worse, if not more. Prepare yourself for some drama. It's far away for now. But it is fast approaching.

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 08:27 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

I don't know why, but I like Tyler.  He still needs to see a shrink though and knowing that he's going to once again mess things up gives me pain.  Still Lucas needs a chance I guess, but we all know that she doesn't love him like she loves Tyler.



Author's Response:

I like Tyler too, but if I were Alexandra I'd probably break up with him. 
Now I don't know whether she will learn to love Lucas as she loves Tyler or even more. We'll see about that.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:41 am

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

Great update . I get it Alex is feeling , lonely and confused and she's use to going back and forth with Tyler . I think he will just hurt her again but sometimes it's really hard to see the light at the end of the tunnel .But I'm still Team Lucas . :) Can't wait for more .



Author's Response:

Yes, he will hurt her again. So badly that maybe it will be over for good this time. 

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

Alex realky is dense that she doesn't know that Lucas is in love with her. I can't stand her abd had sex with that fool Tyler knowing that he doesn't trust her. She deserves to be busted and disgusted! Poor Lucas write me in so can helo him heal!?



Author's Response:

Ahahah. Are you hitting on Lucas or something? I'll tell him if it will make you happy. He might give you a chance. LOL.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

Tyler is too damn needy. I want Alex and Lucas to get it on. 

 

Good update! 



Author's Response:

Too needy for their relationship's sake. 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Alexandra and Lucas about damn time I was team Lucas every since I saw that Picture. Tyler is an idiot so I'm all for Lucas



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. :D

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

Honestly I don't think Alex is cheating on Tyler : A. Because magazines lie and B. they are broken up . She maybe using Luke a little but I don't think she's cheating with Luke ... yet ?



Author's Response:

Yep. She's not cheating. But you never know what might happen in the future. :D

Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

This fool is crazy as hell. You the one who got committment issues yet she now she's cheating on you. Boy ain't that how guys be, when they do something wrong something in there body just can't cope with it being there fault. They gotta make up some elaborate tale of what you then did with mediocre clues. Tyler is no different I hope Alexandra cuss his ass out. He ain't got a lick of sense and all he gone do is make it worse. She just said "You don't trust me that's your problem" She broke up with him because she said he didn't trust her...now here he goes proving her right by calling her out about cheating. Boy if that was me I would be going off. All he doing is pushing her right to Lucas, hell sexy Lucas ain't gone have to do a damn thing. If Tyler keep "thinking" the way he is then all Lucas gotta do is sit and wait and watch Tyler crash and burn. Anyways really nice chapter I loved it update soon 



Author's Response:

He clearly has trust issues. Never really trusted a woman, if not his sister, in his life. He doesn't trust her and suspect that she's been cheating on him. I agree. If I were Alexandra I would tell him to go and refrain from bothering me ever again. That loser. And yes, he is pushing her right into Lucas' waiting arms. Sooner or later Lucas' patience is going to pay off. I can guarantee that to you.

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

Now I know why Tyler has committment issues, his momma left the family when he was 5.  I wonder did she ever apologize to her children, but to Tyler especially.  Tyler you are going to truly piss Alex when you ask her about her and Lucas.  I feel so bad for Lucas, Alex is not your friend.  I refuse to believe that she doesn't know that Lucas is in love with her.  I think that she is knowingly using his feelings for her against him.  Yep, don't like that selfish cow Alex!!!  I am team Lucas all the way and he deserves someone better.

 



Author's Response:

I am pretty certain that she doesn't know. Believe me, I spoke to her. She's just really blind and stupid, maybe. I don't know myself how she could not see it, but apparently she doesn't understand or she refuses to acknowledge it. I think it's because she might have feelings for him too. LOL.

His mom did not apologise, otherwise he wouldn't hate her, now would he? You'll have a chance to meet the woman and you'll see what Tyler thinks of her.

You'll hate the next chapter. I already know! You'll probably like the start and hate all the rest. So I apologise in advance.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

OK Tyler, hold your horses!  Do you really think she's going to come back to you by you accusing her of cheating?  Boy, you really do need a shrink!  Run to him fast as you can before you do something else stupid and lose Alex for good.  Run Forrest Run!!!

This is good stuff.  I feel sorry for Tyler but he's a train wreck about to happen.



Author's Response:

Apparently he believes that she will always come back to him. And he just might be right. But I think that in the future he will be stretching his luckuntil it breaks completely. 
I agree, he is indeed a train wreck. And he needs to go and see someone who is really good to help him sort out his life.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

One of your best chapters from this story . I love how Alex totally rejected Tyler when they first met . I'm kinda starting to like and understand why Tyler is so needy and immature . Great update - More, more, more ! :)



Author's Response:

Yep. I think he is still the 5 year old child who suffered from his mother's decisions. He is also an adult, but emotionally speaking he's still a kid. 
Thank you very much for the kind words. :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

It's about to get real lol



Author's Response:

Oh yes, it is! Yay.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Try Sleeping With a Broken Heart

Wait she just met Lucas and the chemistry is there. Also now her boss has broken up with his girlfriend to be with her but she seems oblivious to this fact. And she just broken up with commitment phobic jerk and she isn't pursuing a relationship with Lucas or Matt? WTH? Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Yep. She is oblivious to anything. I think her love for Tyler is clearly blinding her from seeing that she could get someone amazing into her life and start fresh. 

Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 11:30 am

Title: Chapter 2: Complicated

Thanks for a great update. My goodness Alexa has a gorgeous man in love with her and she still wants feckless Tyler? WTH? I think that she should go with the man that can committee and loves her....Oops that isn't Tyler...so he loses the louse.



Author's Response:

Lucas is indeed handsome and gorgeous. Tyler is as well, but still. I know it's very illogical for her to love him. Unfortunately she does. Will she ever be able to move on? Who knows?

Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 11:26 am

Title: Chapter 3: Try Sleeping With a Broken Heart

Another great update. I am loving this story and I am Team Lucas all the way. I loved reading about how they met. I hope that he continues to be a good friend and hopefully she will stop being in denial but I understand her confusion she has been with Tyler for a long time and you can't just turn your feelings off like a light switch.

Update Soon!!!

Author's Response:

I am too! Let's just hope that in the future she will be able to see the treasure she calls Luke. 

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Try Sleeping With a Broken Heart

It was fun seeing how they met =] I'm glad she let Tyler's butt know.



Author's Response:

Me too. :D 

Tyler really needs to get over himself. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Try Sleeping With a Broken Heart

WOW !  I liked this update . Thanks for giving us some background on how Alex and Lucas met . Hell I feel emotionally drained for Alex after her conversation with Tyler . Can't wait to read more .



Author's Response:

I felt emotionally drained when I wrote it down. That was awful, and I'm glad it's over. Now we'll see what happens next. 

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 08:12 pm



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