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Title: Lost In Paradise

How exciting!!!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 08:20 pm

Title: Jump

I don't understand Terri reaction! Years ago while she was so tender hearted she could get reid of the jerome guy and now that she is such a bitter and stronger person she is scared ?

 Not very logical

Besides if you don't want the guy to know too much about your life, don't even meet him at your house. Don't let him him

Buy a dog , have security alarm installed; record any threat or conversation on your phone, go to the police have a restraint order and then it's done ?!!!

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 09:04 pm

Title: Lost In Paradise

Great chapter.  I do think Daniel's family timing is way off.  He was homeless and no one was looking for him and now that he's famous, they want their son/brother back? 

I think he should proceed cautiously though he should forgive them.  There is no use holding hate and grudges.  If they really are sorry for their past behavior, then they should do all they can to make it up to him, especially his father.

 

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 01:06 pm

Title: Lost In Paradise

Thank you :0)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 07:30 am

Title: What Now

love this more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 02:15 am

Title: Lost In Paradise

His mom and sister reached out to him but only after they sawhis ads. What nerve?  She admitted loving Danny, it is about damn time. Meeting his mom and sister should ge interesting. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 10:41 pm

Title: What Now

It's good to have at least one person in your life that knows you well.  In Terri's case, Daniel probably saved her life becase he knew she wasn't acting right.  I'm glad she is getting over the stereotypical relationship hangup. An older woman dating a younger man is becoming as acceptable as homosexuality.  She should relax and enjoy her relationship with her knight in shining armor. It's better than hooking  up with some old guy and he's telling you how he would have worn that thing out ten years ago, while you're changing his pamper and he's spitting on you becasue his teeth are in a cup soaking on the nightstand by the hospital bed...lol

Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 05:34 am

Title: Mother Mary

Thank you for creating complex characters who walk through life's struggles together. I find myself mad at Terri but feeling sorry for her all at once. 

Ps - you had me at Ian. I don't know if I love this character because of my crush or because he's so lovable. Great story!



Author's Response:

wow. you're like one of the authors i really look up to on this site and this review honestly means so much to me!

haha i love ian somerhalder so much that there's no way i couldn't have used him in one of these stories lol daniel's lovely though, of course

Reviewer: M_denise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 03:17 am

Title: Cast Pics

AWWWWW man... I LOVE Nia Long! Why doesshe have to be the meeanie??? Gret casting btw

Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 06:59 am

Title: What Now

If your goal was to make Terri seem absolutely disgusting and unapproachable you did a great job because I hate her. 

Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 06:58 am

Title: Mother Mary

It's about dang time she gives those goodies up!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2013 04:32 am

Title: Mother Mary

That was crazy! Jerome was totally unexpected.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 11:49 pm

Title: Mother Mary

Actually proud of Daniel.. he's getting a backbone and not having her direct him all the time.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 08:40 pm

Title: Jump

On the one hand I understand why she couldn't think when she first met up with her past. Although I don't think I would have agreed to go anywhere with him. I would have created the scene instead. :o

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 07:53 pm

Title: Mother Mary

Yes!  Thanks for this wonderful update!  I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 12:21 pm

Title: Mother Mary

love it u rock more soon 5*****

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 04:42 am

Title: Mother Mary

It's not over and that crazy fool Jerome ain't done.  They really need to make police report.  Jerome used her and gave her an STD yet is angry at him for getting him beat up.  He stalked and plotted only to force her to have dinner with him by gun point.  Jerome needs to do and quickly!!    I like the explaination for his actions as it just proves how psychotic Jerome is.  I like how Daniel followed Terri and saved her but the question is for how long?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 03:44 am

Title: Jump

Ok, I didn't see that coming...Jerome the formerly home guy, that caused Terri to go on a 20 year fast!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 07 2013 06:20 am

Title: What Now

love this story more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2013 03:39 am

Title: Jump

Great update . I hope you have Fun in the UK !!! :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 04:45 pm

Title: Jump

I like this story and was happy to see there is an update. Now about this new chapter, I got to say I am a bit...disapointed. Firts, I don't understand Terri's reaction when she firts see Jerome : ok the guy was an ass, trying to live off on her and all, but it was more pathetic than anything else, and there was never any indication that he had beviolent or anyting. So bad experience 20 years earlier, I get that. But for her to be so worked up, and paralysed, and all that shit is a bit of an overreaction. Then, the "twist" with Jerome who turns complete psycho- stalker and "threaten" her 2 minutes after meeting her again, and she just...caves like that. WTF? She just up and agreed to go out with a man who she as not seen for 20 years and who threaten her (of what, it is not even clear). She beavec too stupid for her age and her social statut. Sh eis not an helpless 20 years old. This doesn't make any sens, it is beyond ridiculous, like drama for the sake of drama.

Reviewer: Hmmm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 01:27 pm

Title: Jump

What hell does he want? If it were me, I beat Jerome back into his momma's womb.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 08:31 am

Title: Jump

Really

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:41 am

Title: Jump

Excuse me but what the fu-...what the FREAK just !!?! Terri didn't do a dayum thing to that asshole...all his problems we're his fault not hers- but I know losers like Jerome- losers who try to mooch off of vulnerable ppl and drain them dry. And when said leaches have exhausted all your resources...they move on to their next target. He's just mad b/c Terri kicked his ass to the curb - literally - before he could completely use her. Slimy bastard!

It was completely stupid to fall into his trap. She have him WAY TOO MUCH power that he NEVER should have had access to. She should have cussed him out, and then called security on his ass AND filed a restraining order. He's running game on you girl!!! Extortion!
I wouldn't doubt that he knows Daniel or at least seen him on the streets. Daniel can handle himself. Puhleeze let Daniel follow her or stop the madness before she leaves with that fool!! Urgh!
thanks for the update, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:36 am

Title: Jump

Feedback.  U r planning an update before you leave. ..right???? Ijs Iove Daniel and want to....no I need to see him kick Jerome in his trifling Ass. Please and thank you.  Plus ...teri needs to go Jlo or Farrah Fawcett  on his weak A S S.

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:08 am



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