love this more soon
Reviewer: faye Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 05 2014 02:15 am
It's good to have at least one person in your life that knows you well. In Terri's case, Daniel probably saved her life becase he knew she wasn't acting right. I'm glad she is getting over the stereotypical relationship hangup. An older woman dating a younger man is becoming as acceptable as homosexuality. She should relax and enjoy her relationship with her knight in shining armor. It's better than hooking up with some old guy and he's telling you how he would have worn that thing out ten years ago, while you're changing his pamper and he's spitting on you becasue his teeth are in a cup soaking on the nightstand by the hospital bed...lol
Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2013 05:34 am
If your goal was to make Terri seem absolutely disgusting and unapproachable you did a great job because I hate her.
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2013 06:58 am
love this story more soon
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 07 2013 03:39 am
Loved the update. I was a little ticked that they got interupted though. LOL I am glad the Terri will spill her guts. She wants that man and he wants her, so what's wrong with that? I'm loving this story.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 12:45 pm
This story is so good! It can't be drawing to conclusion yet! Why you may ask? First, we NEED for the romance to blossum and for her to let Daniel in behind that wall she's built up and she needs to reap the benefits for finding him and not ALONZO!
Second, I really really want Daniel's family to see him succeed as a top model and that he did it without them. I want them to realize that he's his own man now with his own life and let them be the ones to say, "That's my son" when they look at a TV commercial or a magazine with a doze of humble pie.
Third, the've both been out of commission for a while so I know that they will surely rock each other's world when the romance goes to another level.
And finally, this story is just so good that it can't end yet, OK?
Author's Response:
haha you're amazing :DDD
i MIGHT make it over 10 chapters, but it's a little hard for me to write long chapters so they'll have to be smaller than normal
but you're right. i have a lot to cover lol i'm excited!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2013 01:47 pm
I like. Terri is all business for now. She found her model,or should I say Lay found her a model.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 07:12 am
Update Soon!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 11:31 pm
It's interesting.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 11:52 pm
Good start. More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 05 2013 02:29 am
Teri is a bitch, you take care of business without being bitchy!! Laila keeps Teri human. Love Daniel, I can't wait to see you casted as Daniel.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 09:20 pm
Thanks for the explanation, re cougars. Somehow I thought it referred more to the age of the woman, than the age difference between her and the man?. Totally not updated with this jargon.
Reviewer: foosrule Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 04:41 pm
You definitely got my attention with this. I'm very curious to see the rest of the story so I hope you don't take too long in updating!!! Hehe just saying. Interesting cougar story.
Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 04:25 pm
I really like this story, the premise to me seems quite fresh and orginal I can't wait to see how the story develops with ll the travelling, advertising and drama the modelling world brings, and Laila seems like a sweetheart I like her and Terri I want to more about her backstory.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING :)
Reviewer: Gundam gal Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 01:46 pm
Since when is "pushing 40yrs" considered a cougar?. I've always assumed it's from mid-forties?. Or is this only in the US?.
Author's Response:
Hey, over here in the states a woman is considered a cougar when she dates/or enjoys have sex with men in over 8 years younger than them...
according to wikipedia (i know, such an unreliable source):
the term refers to women over 30-40 years old who pursue sexual relations with people more than eight years younger
in this case, terri is around 38-39 years old. daniel is 22. so she's got him by 16-17 years. i'd say the woman's definitely a cougar lol
Reviewer: foosrule Signed
[Report This]Date: January 04 2013 11:00 am
I'm loving this story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. Update Soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: blu23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 08:20 am
Me likey! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 07:25 am
Great start, I'm intrigued and can't wait to read more! Love the potential of Daniel and Terri to have a relationship and put their differences aside! Please update soon with more!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:19 am
Good start. neat story idea. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:05 am
Dead at that first conversation with her best friend. I'm laughing so hard right now.
I can't wait for the second chapter. I like your sense of humor.
Author's Response:
lol thank you. i try :)
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:04 am
I'm sold. This has definitely caught my attention. Please update!!!
Author's Response:
*breaks out in praise dance* lol i'll try to get this story rolling.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 05:55 am
more please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 05:47 am