Reviews For The Less Fortunate
Title: Jump

Wait...what?

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 04:52 am

Title: Jump

Jerome is an asshole!  What does his delusional self think that Teri did to him? He didn't have shit before Teri and still doesn't have shit. Why didn't she tell Daniel? She is still stuck on stupid I see. Please update soon!   Congratulations on studying abroad!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 02:21 am

Title: Jump

Why!Why! Would she have agreed to go out with that creep!  I would have gone straigtht to the cops!  What if he rapes her?  Blackmails her?  I can't beleive she's going out with him and not telling anyone!  I'm on pins and needles!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 02:07 am

Title: Stay

Daniel, is just the man for Terri! He is strong she is weak and vulnerable, and when he is weak, she steps in to build him up. Just like a loving couple. He is always there for her!  I can not wait for them to consummate there relationship. 17 years is a very long time without SEX! She could be considered a virgin again! I am glad he made her face her problems..this will make it easier for him to persue and persuade her into a relationship with him.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2013 08:07 am

Title: Stay

Loved the scene with her parents; it was emotional and loving. But my favorite scene was of Daniel laying with his head in her lap and Terri massaging his scalp as they shared a quiet moment in bed.  The words he spoke made me swoon!  i swear Daniel is da man!  The right MAN for Terri- so she needs to stop trippin' with the quickness!  He is more man than any wannabe in her age bracket!  He considers her needs, her feelings, her desires- and he's given her life anew as she'd done for him - a form of pay-it-forward in reverse. Terri needs to accept the blessing that is Daniel Jones and give him what he desires...in spades!

Great update! :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 03:18 am

Title: Stay

Still reading this awesome story!!  So glad to see that it is back!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 06:49 pm

Title: Stay

Thanks for the update! 

Im glad Daniel is helping Terri work through her issues and realize that people do care about her if she will only let them in. Hopefully their relationship will only go up from here!

Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 09:32 am

Title: Stay

This was a good chapter but I think he was wrong to take her to her parents' house without her knowing beforehand...you can't make someone face something if they are not ready.  However, I am glad that she made up with her parents; they seem to be a loving kind bunch of people.  I don't feel bad that she called him "little boy" and her "client."  Honestly, he is a "boy" compared to her but I guess "little" bruised his ego a bit...and as far as them being more than client/friend well...they are but it's not like they are an item.  I liked the chapter though.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:27 am

Title: Stay

I  really like Daniel. He may be young in  years but he's definitely more mature than Terri when it comes to being in touch with who he is. Love their "relationship". So glad he took her to see her folks. I still don't understand why she shut them out of her life. But, they're back and that's all that counts.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:24 am

Title: Stay

So I am so proud of him! He is starting to put her in her place,  however that was pretty mean comment to him. Love the story missed it. thanks for updating!!!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:12 am

Title: Cast Pics

You had me at I.S.!!!!!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 06:44 am

Title: Stay

Daniel is really good for her. I'm glad she's softening to him. 

Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 06:23 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Update.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 11:10 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Love this story so far. Can't wait to read more soon.

Reviewer: Vava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 12:16 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I just discovered this gem and I'm loving!!! Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 06:08 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

wow they want each other so bad

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2013 03:22 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I'm proud of both of them...he isn't putting up with her running all over him.A+++++

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 03:35 pm

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Short but informative. Just what we readers needed! (Terri's backstory) I understand her more now. Wow, 17 years....I know when they do have sex it will be like she was a virgin all over again! Make sure they use birth control, because she may get pregnant that first time. Since Daniel is young and you know his little swimmers are strong and healthy!    They will be like heat seeking missles heading for it's target!

Now that would be one he'll of a phone call.   

Hello, mom and dad.....I know we haven't spoken in 10 years, but I just thought I would let you know,  I am pregnant by a 22 year old, formerly homeless man who,now works for me!  Of yeah, did I mention....he's white?  LOL!

That would be one hellified phone call! You may use that scenario if you like!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 03:34 pm

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

This was a great chapter.  So sad about her parents and she's an only child.  I hope her parents are still alive because I know someone who went back only to find their mother dead and buried and the family couldn't find them to notify them.  That is so sad.

I love that she's finally admitted to wanting Daniel and I can't wait until things go to another level!. As for 17 years, all I can say is 'wow'.  Daniel has a lot of 'dusting for cobwebs' to do.  LOL

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 11:04 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I am playing catch up....I love your story please keep the updates coming

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 07:00 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Yes, Daniel broke through Teri's wall.  It was little chink but it's a hole none-the-less.  Daniel refused to sign that contract with Alonzo and I thank the writing gods!!!  Teri is a hot mess she hasn't spoken with her family in years, what if her parents died?  SO stupid!!!  I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 06:00 am

Title: Phresh Out the Runway

All right... Stake your claim Terri. YHeah, he's yours in all thangs. More, please.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 05:36 am

Title: Get it Over With

Ooooooohhhhh, Teri final got some water in that dry well! It's about time! I am glad Daniel called her on her attitude and the fact she has been hiding her feelings for so long, that they are beginning to come out, but only when it has to do with Daniel or she is around him! Yeah, for Daniel, he has almost tamed the pit bull! He deserves hazard pay along with his modeling contract! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 04:35 am

Title: Get it Over With

LOL...Terri is such a dork! She's maing things way tocomplicated for herself.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 10:33 pm

Title: What Now

Loved the update.  I was a little ticked that they got interupted though.  LOL  I am glad the Terri will spill her guts.  She wants that man and he wants her, so what's wrong with that?  I'm loving this story.

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 12:45 pm



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