One of my favorites. You did it just right. Thnx.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 04:44 am
There are no faces for David or DJ. Which photos did you selectReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 09:52 pm
Really great story! Amelia and David made quite a pair. Thnx.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 02:44 am
I'm sorry, I can't give you a positive review because this was a bad short story to me. It was an ok read but there was virtually no information or even developed back ground on the characters, nor development of a sincere effection or love between two people needed to reconnect and have after a two decade relationship. It could have been better.
Hi You're entitled to your opinion and that simply means my story wasn't for you--the chamber is filled with stories that don't click for me--I don't feel the need to give readers every tid bit of information on a character to push the message forward--it was a simple and short story which if I had given all background to the readers would have been a very long story--which is not what I created. Thank you for reading and reviewing hopefully you'll find other submissions by those brave enough to put their creative musings out for public review. Peace
M.Reviewer: Navaura Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 05:45 am
YAY!!! TWINS! *Clapping slowly*
I really like these characters. Thank you so much for writing this story. The family just seems so full of love. I love DJ's reaction.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2013 06:02 am
i love your work u ROCK more from u soon
thank you! It's a pretty heady feeling reading all these wonderful compliments--I posted a story a year ago and took it down because one review was so negative I allowed it to cancel all the good ones out--this time out I decided I would only focus on constructive criticism and positive sentiments--
i hope to be writing shortly--
m.Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2013 05:02 am
Damn Good story . I'm just so Sorry it took me so long to read it. Forgive me please ! Great Job !!!
thank you! I'm glad you found it--
M.Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 09:41 pm
Actually, I'm a twin and we were delivered naturally. It's just the hospitals prefer to hedge their risk, by delivering twins by c-section these days...
Awesome story. So now it's time for DJ to head off to college! Yay! I hope you have good things in store for him.;-D
thank you for reading and all your reviews (you made me recheck my dates :)--I appreciate an active reader--keeps me honest and on point--
twins are a handful but I wouldn't trade the experience for anything--take care and thank you!
M.Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 08:58 pm
Thx for this awesome story... Please grace us with another!!!
thank you for the compliment--I have some rough (real rough) drafts on the computer and when school's over I'll hopefully have more time to write. I appreciate the encouragement!
M.Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 06:47 pm
That sweet David and Amelia got married and made some babies!! I love how DJ embraced Tink and the babies. He asked his dad, "If they had babies?" So amazingly cool!! Those babies are just so precious! Thank you for the epilogue it ended this wonderful story on a beautiful note.
I love your reviews!!--they are always so thoughtful--I appreciate your enthusiasm for this story--it's been on my mind for a minute--I'm glad you liked the story.
M.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 02:09 pm
Okay. I get that you need to focus. However, you could write an epilogue. One more chapter. Pllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeease. :)Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 12:59 am
Please do a part 2.. I loved it!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 02:51 pm
I love the cast pics!!!Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 04:54 pm
No, this can't be the last. I think I need to 'see' them make that baby...
Your story is soo good.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 09:03 am
Amelia was stupid to allow pride to keep her from true love. Why did David marry a woman that he didn't truly love? You should never settle, you never know true happiness when you settle especially when it comes to love. I am loving this story more please!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 06:34 am