This is hilariuou! Jason, shouldn't drink ever again. It is generally considered a no-no to lust after another woman that isn't your girlfriend.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 10:42 pm
hahaha...that last sentence is LMFAO-funny in light of the situation.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:26 pm
:/ he raped her though. I can't imagine anyone being okay with some random guy being in their bed and actually coming inside them and not feel threatened or call the police.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I agree with you. Rape is rape.
I would like to resepctfully point out that this is a fantasy. It's not logical, or PC. That's why I tried to put as many warnings on here as possible. If you feel uncomfortable with the story, then please do not read on. I would hate to have ruined your day.
If you would like me to write something else, then please post a challenge, and I'll see what I can do.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 02:22 pm
I likey.do you have the cast picture?
Author's Response:
I don't know how to do pics yet.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 01:29 am
The single fact that she's a Jamaican and he hasn't been beaten bloody tells me this is crack-fic. But seriously, Jason....you want to get the attention of the girl you like, so you thought breaking and entering (and uninvited sex!) was a great idea? Here's another r-word for you, son : RAPIST!
Author's Response:
LOL!
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 11:35 pm