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Title: Chapter 3

Oh my God is this funny, this story has me rolling.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 10:44 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I like it, please continue.

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 08:22 pm
Title: Chapter 3

this story is crazy and cracks my up - keep them coming! thanks for In the Dark!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for helping me figure out how to post it. :-D I'm glad it brought a laugh or two.

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 07:28 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update! This story is great so far!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 05:45 pm
Title: Chapter 3

You stopped there!!!!!!!!! OMG, please update and can you make the chapters longer? This story is too good for its chapters to be read in less than 2 minutes.



Author's Response:

If you knew how long I agonize over each word, you would take more time with it. Don't wolf it down. Enjoy it. I'm trying to make a gourmet meal for you... LOL

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 04:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3

WOW...this story has me fascinated. I'm still a little puzzled at Marianna's latest actions but that I hope will be cleared up with some more back story. As to dude...rofl. I guess that's the last time he will be crawling through a window.

I agree wholeheartedly that most Jamaican woman do have a low tolerance for bullshit. Although the misnomer that Jamaicans are violent/passionate expressives it does hold some weight IMO. Marianna's immediate reaction though peppered with hilarity was so typical Jamaican and appropriate of any woman in that circumstance. 

Excellent premise.

More please!

 Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 02:38 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I honestly didn't think I would, but I like it a lot!

 

Please continue, I would love a little back story, but this is great. 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 02:08 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Chapter was great. I wish it was longer.

 Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 01:47 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Dare I say this is entertainingly crazy, yes being a woman the rape thing should bug me but Mariann is taking it in such a steady stride I'll be the crazy one to complain.There's some rationality in their insanity  (I hope). So please do your thing, I would like to see some more.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 12:33 pm


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