HAHA! I like it. It was entertaining seeing through his eyes and his thoughts are a riot. Definitely a guys and definitely workable. Im not a writer but Im a hard core reader and lover of all things literary and you my dear very well. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 02:09 am
i really really really enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet :) i think you did a good job so i'll look forward to upcoming stories - thank you!!
Author's Response:
You're most welcome. Now I have new respect for all the writers on the Chamber... y'all make it look easy, whipping out ten chapter story masterpieces. I can only bow down and hope it gets easier with practice.
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 04:37 pm
Being a Trini I would say Lara is the best..lol. That's for sharing.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 03:09 pm
This chaper was especially good. What an unusual way to find each other. I liked it a lot.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 02:10 pm
Being West Indian myself, I found that last part utterly hilarious. And it's Sobers, BTW, :-P
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 01:10 pm
VERY GOOD! I liked the story and found it really funny and great to read. The only bad part is was.... WAY TOO SHORT! I wanted more, LOL!
I hope you plan to make more stories. Good job :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 09:43 am
VERY GOOD! I liked the story and found it really funny and great to read. The only bad part is was.... WAY TOO SHORT! I wanted more, LOL!
I hope you plan to make more stories. Good job :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 09:42 am