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Title: Chapter 1

jason messed up BIG TIME - look forward to the read, thank you!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 06:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHA!!!

This is going to be fun.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks much! I'm working on it!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 06:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Lol...great start, what a mess. More please...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 12:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 09:22 am
Title: Chapter 1

Woah mind trip..... Need explaining.... Is he breaking in... Or just confused? 



Author's Response:

I hope the next chapter clarifies a bit.

 Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

Very good loved it cant wait to see whats next, need more need more lol.

 Reviewer: bintjihaad Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 02:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

Eek! That is a good way to get killed, Dude.

 Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 1

Woahhhh.

 

im intrigued. 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it, great start!

 Reviewer: meme398 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 11:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Can't wait to read more!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 11:05 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Uh oh! Can't wait to read the next chapter

 Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like this, first timer, a little humor helps almost any situation. LOL. And now that he orgasmed inside the woman who is NOT Ashley, without protections, hmmm...we have home invasion, body invasion,...and maybe pregnacy.  Poor Jason.  And who is our substitute Ashley?  More please. 

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 10:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like this. Interesting start. More please. 

 Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting...looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 09:36 pm


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