I dont know man...her method is making me really dubious...there's a big BIG possiblity of it all backfiring in her face. 

The plan does sound mad to me because what if she can't prevent him from taking the child again. He has a lot more influence than she does... the chips do not seem to be falling in her favor. 

Also she needs to talk to someone about this like Bennie suggested.  

This is all making me anxious eeek

She really should have talked to someone a long time ago. Raymond is just sick. 

wow you really sent me for a loop with this story I dont really know what to say its good but more than a little mind blowing though hey i am addicted to it now so it works

Great update didnt see that coming

Author's Response:

LOL More is coming!

Oh Lawd! I think Mr. Raymond is faking the funk he's dirty and he knows this the only way for Mrs. O will be exposed about their marriage; if everyone knows in his mind she have no doubt but to lived with him. Geez the power of pu$$ie. Smh.

Brenda I love your stories.

This is madness. Yet entertaining at the same time.

What type of monster is he? This really is some crazy ish pure and simple

There seems to be a lot of underestimating in this story, no one is who they appear.  Let's hope that it will work out in the end after all the turmoil.  

I love that Ophelia has such control over Raymond. I love that she has him so far out of his comfort zone, he doesn't know what to do with himself. What I don't like is that Ophelia is cutting herself off from Teddy and she is keeping secrets from him. I certainly hope Raymond doesn't die. I know you said he was unredeemable, which I think means he may have set this up to get back some control over Ophelia. You also said that his downfall was going to be grand which I think means Ophelia (and maybe Teddy, Abigail and Margie) will still get some justice. I have a feeling you're not quite done with Raymond yet......at least I hope you're not. Honestly with all the twists and turns in this story, I have no clue what's coming next......I kinda like it. 

I'll be anxiously awaiting your update next week (and rereading all of the other chapters until then). Thank you, Brenda.

Thanks for a great update. Although I can't stand Raymond I don't want him to die yet. I think that he is faking it because he wants Ophelia to live wth him as his wife. This is way of getting back dome of the control that he feels that she has. In addition, now his family knows that they are married.

I like Keisha although I think that she is a plant.

I can't wait to read what happens next.

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Raymond wishes that it was all part of some fake plan of his.  However, alas the controller is about to be controlled in a big way.  Be careful what you ask for Ophelia and remember that revenge is never as sweet in reality as it is in your head. LOL  More is coming!

The truth is not always easy to accept, especially after livivg most of your life in the dark.  It will just take some time,it is still alot to take in.  His past is not who he is and he has nothing to be ashamed of.  His mother was only doing what she thought was best for the both of them.  A man's point of view sounds refreshing and is a nice change to see life through a man's eyes.

Noooo! Raymond cannot die! Ophelia has to take her sweet time exacting her revenge! *cackles*

I meant "brilliant", spell check & auto correct is making me an illiterate!!