I am pretty sure Ophelia and Raymond made me throw up in my mouth a little bit. This was interesting.

Oh hell no!!! This can't be happening. Is this some type of Stockholm syndrome?

Raymond was able to walk back into Ophelia's life too easy. Now this dude trying to inpregnante her. I knew he was sick but he is depraved and crazy? I did not see this coming. I wonder how Bennie is going to deal with this.

Author's Response:

Bennie is going to be pissed of course.  However stay tuned because Raymond is about to get played big time.

Raymond is a snake. 

Your stories always have some type of redemption but I can't see his.

Wait, what? What is that demon up to? I can not believe him. He has taken so much from her. The fact that he's the only one she's been with has warped her sense of reality. How the hell does an eleven year old know about being in love. Hell, a lot of ADULTS don't even know. Ben needs to get her to see a therapist and soon.

If I was Raymond, I'd be really afraid of the KARMA that's coming his way (he embodies the proverb - pride goeth before a fall). And what if he's impregnated her again? I'm depending on you, Brenda, to deliver a blow to him that will leave him beyond staggered. When it happens, I'm sure I'll feel such joy, but I also will probably feel a bit sorry for the arrogant SOB as it promises to be epic. He is a pedophile, but I wish he was redeemable, but I can't see how.

btw, I hope Ophelia gets rid of David. Does David has some personality traits similar to Raymond?

This is an interesting tale. You're doing a stellar job, Chica.

Oh my, Raymond is ape crap crazy, but too much fun! And is Ophelia suffering from some kind of delayed Mary Kay Letourno syndrome or what?! "Black people can't be racist" is such a old racist black person thing to say that I couldn't help but laugh... sadly, I have too many ignorant family members for that statement to sound fake. Love this story so much!

Ophelia is dumber than a bag of rocks.    She needed therapy for a rape that happend.  Don't be stupid and marry that man, he raped you.  When Bennie finds out he will shit a brick!!  Don't fall for the banana in the tail pipe Ophelia!!

He is a sick man.

She is an innocent girl who is confused - somewhat.

Bennie is going to be mad as hell with his uncle/father.

David is just plane wrong for treating Benjamin like he did something wrong! ISo what is Raymond up to! He is such a controling A hole I think in the end,He will be the one getting played! He wont even see it coming his ego is so big. Great Chapter Brenda, love your imagation :)

.......the HELL is that demon up to?! David was wrong for saying such things about Benjamin, but they're absolutely on the mark for Raymond! UGH!

Man, I hope Benjamin can shake some sense into his birth monther and convince her to seek counselling. Shemight be 30 now, but Raymond groomed her very well as a child - like the sick pedohpile he is.

The authors at this site are kicking my butt today. Y'all got me like HUH? LOL! But I am still incredibly hooked.

I am a fan of historical romance so I know a century or two in the past this yostoryline could be very plausible. But Honey this ain't that and I have no idea what to think, hence the "huh" reaction. You got me all caught up in this madness and I am loving the journey.

Author's Response:

Dont think that Ophelia is some sucker.  Mroe is coming.

She needs to throw that back in his face and show him that she has grown a backbone in those 20plus years.

I love it!!!! His uncle/father is a nasty piece of work, I hope he gets his comeuppance!! Can't wait for more, thanks 😊

Wow, this is a powerful subject. I wasn't expecting all this when I started reading it! I hope all turns out great and Raymond gets his just deserved. And on a side note, I know this is a serious story, but I kind of loled at Margie and Teddys interactions....his grandmother is like a combonation of BOTH of my grandmas rolled in one. Oh lawd, THAT is a handful. Anyways post soon! :)