This was just awesome. I want more, lots more :D
Charlie and Eve are just too cute - Charlie leading Eve on until the last minute with the proposal and Eve with her unconventional answer. I felt sympathy for Charlie in the beginning wishing I could just give him a hug but now its obvious how much Genevieve has brought to his life. I like it that Eve's personality is direct without being too forceful and she seems intuned to Charlie in away. She brought a new love, a new meaning and greater appreciation for the things he disregarded before. I agree with Charlie, they make something beautiful.
Well written as always.
Thanks for sharing
BTW Charlie being aroused by her creative process was interesting but it also highlights how perfectly matched these two are. Charlie is turned on by her painting an he fuels that inspiration for her to create.Reviewer: siennagray Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2013 01:25 am
Eve and Charlie what can I say about these two the just intrigues me about them. She seems know exactly what he needs and he knows exactly what she wants. If there was such things as perfect couples they would be one of them. She knew that if Charlie was ever going to move on from his late wife that he would have to go through the door figuratively and literally. They both have been each other's rock during this trying time and it solidifies their relationship and makes their connection that much more. I love how Charlie gets all "frisky" when looking at her painting because it means he sees what she was trying to convey as an artist. The proposal was funny because she had know clue and he played to that fact. And then when she was holding her answer hostage in a sense was priceless as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 11:20 pm
Great start! Can't wait to read more!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 08:46 pm
This was a great first chapter to a story Im looking forward to reading. Charlie and Rebecca in the beginning paragraphs had a love that was worth everything. He knew her like the back of his hand and didn't expect anything that she wasn't about to give. He truly loved her and he thought he had found everything he needed within her. Her dying left him open and wounded to the point of not being able to have most likely those final moments with her. He is now with her best friend Eve and this is a new and different type of love that he has for her. It scares him because how can he love her so deeply when he was going to spend the rest of his life with Rebecca??? The answer is as simple for him to grasp. Eve brings something new and refreshing into his life that he never thought possible to have. Him remembering Rebecca seems to be his way to stay connected to her without dishonoring her memory. Eve got being selfish stems for the fact that she knows Charlie so well and she loves him just the same. Looking forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 04:29 pm
love it more soonReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 04:07 pm
Oh my word. You are writing Anni Grey. *sniff,sniff*
Amazing as always. Loved every word and I am already enamoured to Charlie. Wow he seemed to have found love in two very unconventional women. Not too sure what to think of Eve yet but I will reserve my thoughts for later.
Charlie's contrition felt so real and his carnal desires and love for Becca leaped bounds off the page.
Thanks for sharing.Reviewer: siennagray Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 09:23 am