Title: Chapter 19

I am lovimg the stronger Sasha that sticks up for herself. I have to admit that I really wanted Sasha to knock the hell out of Faye,  That trick is owed a beat down of epic proportions!!  Sasha has gone from to being a doormat because she wanted to be loved so bad to a woman who hides her heart. I can see being with Carter becuause she would consider him safe. Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 19

There were some interesting things going on here.....

First, with Carter, there was no need to lie to him about her connection to either Dominic or Dmitri. What happened isn't all that unusual and the lie makes it seem like there is something to hide. She could just tell him it was a long time ago and its not up for discussission. 

And this is a good opportunity for Dmitri and Sasha. Dmitri can take this time to show Sasha something that no one has ever done; that she's worth fighting for. That she really matters enough to someone to fight for. Fight for her time, her attention, and her love. Not to be taken as a joke, for granted, and then disregarded. Before, all he told her was that getting her meant nothing and was nothing. To show her something different in a concrete, real way is the heartbeat of Sasha. Even if Sasha is unaware it is. In her innermost self, that's what she longs for. That will truly turn Sasha around. And I think Dmitri has it in him.

Dmitri also has his own demons in that department to slay. His own father and family. He needs to make amends with his brother. He's not at fault about his parents.

Second, Faye, what is she, five? What does Teagan leaving have to with Sasha staying?  And why is Teagan, or Jaelynn, for that matter, friends with this shallow, selfish, rude skank? Its starting to make me wonder about them a little. And only because every time she gets around Sasha she can only seem to attack.

And Sasha held up pretty well with Dmitri. 

Nice!!


Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 10:14 pm

Title: Cast

I enjoyed chapter 19 but was stumped by paragraph one.  It sounds as if Dimirtri couldn't careless about whether he saw her or not.

Then I read paragraph four and I wonder why paragraph one even exists b/c only one paragraph can be true, right? 

All the best!

Reviewer: willieriley Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 19

OMG! Loved the update.  I love how Sasha has gotten a backbone and seems to be keeping it bravo for her.

LMAO when Sasha told Faye off she needed to be put in her place and it doesn't seem she has changed much but Jaelynn on the other hand seems to have matured but then she didn't say much at the table.  She did though not encourage Faye as she once would have so again that showed some improvement in her character.

Dimitri has changed really he can now admit he "frank-up" when it came to him and Sasha's relationship but I hope she gives him a run for his money and doesn't give up to easily to his presuit because we know he is going to persue her now that he has laid eyes on her again and poor Carter, Dimitri did not give him an inch and Dimitri could not hid his contempt for the man apparently.  I was surprised that Dominic wants them back together I didn't see that one I thought Dominic's interest was  for himself but I should have known better Dominic has always loved his brother it was Dimitri that could not get over himself and give his brother the chance he deserves because Dom did not have anything to do with his mother and father's breakup that was all Nik "the asshole" Vikhrov fault.

Thank you for a great update can't wait to read more.  Have a great weekend.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 19

Love it!!!! I'm glad Sasha finally straightened Faye out, she need to give Jaelynn a piece of her mind too !! Teagan needs to see how her "friends" was treating Sasha. Can't wait for another update!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 19

Sasha 2.0 I love it!!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 19

BRAVO for Sasha finally telling Faye about herself, she deserved that and so much more, and it seems that Jaelynn sees that Faye is not a friend at all.

And it seems that Dominic is trying to play matchmaker with Dimitri and Sasha, well he has his work cut out for him b/c she has a wall so THICK, its going to take C-4 to blow it up.

I'm rooting for Sasha and Dmitri

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 19

Girrrlllll, you done did it. Lmaoooo. So, glad to see you posting again. And I'm glad to see this new strong/angry/confidant side to Sasha, however , I ABSOLUTELY CAN NOT WAIT for Dmitri to gain her live again and the process they're about to go through. Wheeeww, that was a lot but can't wait for the next update !!!

Reviewer: Jkelly14 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 19

SASHA YOU GO GURL! TELL THAT HEFFA OOOOFF! Even though I was waiting for Dimitri and Sasha to meet up again, but I was more interested in Sasha meeting up with Faye and Jaelynn. Faye is a piece a work and her ass couldn't get through to Sasha.

Sasha has really matured, and she isn't taking no BS from anybody and I am so glad that she is sticking to her guns and not let anyone verbally abuse and taking advantage of her. Dimitri still have a lot of work to do and he needs to work very I mean very hard for Sasha's affection.

Great work on this story. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 19

This story is one of a kind and I can't wait to see what else sasha's backbone has got to say! 

Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 19

Cool chapter. I hope that Sasha stays true to herself and doesn't turn into a evil, mean, bi**h though. I liked the innocence in her character and wouldn't want that changed so that she appears "tough" and "strong". There are many forms of strength and all do not have to revolve around an attitude etc.

Not my favorite chapter but I am interested to see where Dmitri and Sasha go from here.

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 19

Job well done again! I'm excited about what's to come! Yeah I feel like Sasha is gonna experience both sides of the spectrum on an extreme level. The fact that Dominic and Nadia were talking about Sasha's mistreatment is wild. Have my eyes tricked me to has Jaelyn done some growing up? Can't wait to read the next installment! 

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 19

I love the fact that you took some of the comments from your readers to heart and used some of them to build your latest chapter. For that alone you deserve 10 stars and 2 thumbs up!

I think your story is amazing and I love that you finally allowed Sasha to grow up and stand up for herself whether is was against Dimtri or Faye and Raelyn.

Thank you again for such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 19

I enjoyed the chapter.  She rightfully told Dimtri to go to hell.  She also got a chance to  let those..I'm better than you, fake ass friends know she's a different person and step to her correctly or get your feelings hurt. Yeah.. I definitely enjoyed seeing her come into her own.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 19

As I read the scene with Sasha and Dim-itri, I was thinking "Just say no". I dislike Dim boy. He just annoyed me in this chapter. Can't she find someone esle?? Sheesh, LOL. Dimitri needs to go over. Like, he was just so damn presumptuous. Why can't Sasha get another beau; one she sparks with. At least that way it Dimmy will have to work harder.

I like Sasha's wall. (lmao) I say raise them higher, until she can find a man who's willing to make like a bulldozer and tear then down. I just don't think Dimitri is that man. As a reader, this is me going by what's been presented in this story. Also, I just don't like him.  

Carter seems so clueless. I'm sad Teagan's leaving already. I thought they would have been good together. Poor boo needs someone. 

YES! @ Sasha hitting Faye upside the head with reality. Now if she's only put her foot up blondies ass. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 19

It's so great to read this story again. I'm so happy Sasha is standing up for herself. Dmitri says he's changed, but I need to see it to believe it.

Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 19

'bout time, Sasha.  D. should come correct and be prepared to work for it.  I really think Sasha should come clean with Carter--it is just not in her character to string him along.  I don't think D. has really changed all that much; he just realized that he messed up, but he don't realized the damage he did to her. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I don't know why she was so harsh to him, SHE caused a lot of their relationship problems. Sure, he didn't end it well but she didn't respect him enough to stay out of a situation he asked her to. so how is she so high and mighty now...odd to me.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I love how Sasha kept her cool. I totally understand the whole inner turmoil but looking fierce on the outside. I am so happy for her and I cannot wait to see how she handles other things! 

 

LOVE YOUR STORY!

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I think that you are doing a great job with this story.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Finally!! Sasha shut that evil witch Faye down.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for the new chapter. Sooo...They met again ! That was...good. Sure, they didn't make up and make out, but at least they were able to talk and Dmitri was able to kind of apologize. I think Sasha's seemingly contradictory reaction was very understandable. Her inner turmoil is due to the fact that she may have moved on and grown and matured, she still loves Dmitri, despite everything that happened. But she has also learnt to be more cautious about her emotions, and she has learn how to make a good poker face. I also liked to share Dmitri POV: I still root for him to be happy, with Sasha or some one else. I would like to learn that he was able to work on his own issues, someway, and that he began to build some stronger relationship with his brother.

So, what now ? I quite like Carter : he is a decent good man, but I don't think Sasha should "settle" with him just because she feels that she "needs" to be with someone, and I hope she will be honest with him about Dmitri and not lead him on. I also don't want to seel Dmitri grovel : sure he has to earn Sasha back, and earn her he must, earn her trust and respect and love back. But I don't want him to be humiliated or hurt. If Sasha can't get over what happened, at least I hope she will be able to get over him, in the sense that she will be able to love some else, like Carter, truthfully.

Lastly, I like seeing Teagan again. I looks like Jayleen is less of a mean girl while Faye still has her head stuck into her own ass : totally deserved Sasha's smackdown!

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Yes, yes, yes and some more yes. I sincerly hope Sasha isn't finished telling that trick off because its been a long time coming. To be honest, I think Faye was jealous of Sasha. Faye only has her artificial looks to rely on but Sasha is the real deal with goals and aspirations in her life and she's beautiful on the inside and out. Faye is like a rotten apple with a worm in it. Jaelyn needs to get some of that too.

I'm so glad Sasha gave it to Dmitri. You almost had me feeling bad for him not to bad, he had it coming but that was great. Now he realizes he has to work for it. Now Sasha needs to let Nadia and that asshole father of theirs have it. They suck so bad.

Here's hoping Carter doesn't get to badly hurt. I like him. Maybe he can end up with her friend. 

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm so glad to see so much growth with Sasha. She is now a full grown woman and I love it! Thanks for the speedy update. Hope to get another one soon. This is way too good to leave us hanging.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Yasssssssssssss!!!!! Dimitri has some work to do so but so rooting for them to get back together great writing keep it up!!!!!

Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 07:54 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Good chapter even though it left me confused to this new relationship triangle.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 07:45 pm



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