Title: Chapter 19

Me gusta!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter 19

enjoyed the update. gotta catch up with this story. more please.........

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I enjoyed this chapter and the last chapter. I like that although Sasha has changed, she (like everyone else) still has to deal with old emotions and feelings. I love that the new Sasha is confident and believes in herself, but sometimes an old face will come along to make you question your new confidenece. The true question is will you hold on to your confidence or fall prey to the past. Demtri is a test, becuase she still loves him, but those that Faye can GO!! Sasha did good standing up to that chick. 

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Finally! I've been waiting for this Sasha to come out...keep it up.  Make these suckers beg (Dmitri) to get back in her good graces and and let others like Faye fall to wayside...for good!  Yes, I know guys like Dmitri don't have to beg...but yeah let him sweat a little...nothing good in life is ever easy that easy to get.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 19

This was a good chapter. I think Dimitri needs to grovel.  He can't just walk back into her life!  Let him see her with Carter even if she's not feeling Carter like that.  Dimitri doesn't have to know it.  He doesn't have to know up front that she still has feelings for him.  He is going to have to fight to win her as he's never fought for a woman before.  He's had it too easy.  Always getting a woman with his looks and charm.  Well no more.  He needs to be taken down a peg or two.  Then there's still the sister and her father who doesn't like Sasha.  He's going to have to do some major damage conctrol before she gives him her heart again.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 06:41 pm

Title: Chapter 19

The last part of the chapter made my f'in day. YES!  And how green would that trick be if she knew that Dimitri would give his eye teeth to get back with Sasha.

I love the convo between Sasha and Dimtri. Sasha has changed,however, she is still hampered by her past. She really thinks that she won't have the family that she still desperately wants, even if she has convinced herself, otherwise.

Love that Dominic is more of a cheerleader for the both of them rather than a third of a triangle. Thank You!

Dimitri needs to show that he's actually changed. I'm not so sure of it. He hasn't changed so much that he won't pursue Sasha will all that he has. The chase is on.

 

Where is that pesky Next button?

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Yeah!!!  So good.  One, I'm glad she told Faye off.  She is such a bitch and she deserved more, but Sasha held her own.  Jaelynn seems like she may have grown up alittle bit??!  Dmitri...omg I loved it.  He definitely deserved what he got and I hope he gets more.  He needs to grovel and beg and show how much he's changed.  I have a feeling his meeting with Carter will include a few questions about Sasha.  He's jealous and even though Sasha doesn'y really feel Carter if Dmitri believes it then all the better for her.  Don't make it easy for him.  Do I want them together? Yes, but he was so mean.. A real ass to her before.  Then he was a coward waiting three years to even seek her out.  Anyway, I must admit I was at work stalking the site for an update.  As soon as I saw it...I decided it was lunchtime so I could read it.  Now, just keep updating asap and we'll all be so grateful.  I love this story!!!  :)

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 06:21 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Absolutely love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Yes i loved how she handle her self....NEED MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

Reviewer: IM GREEDY Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 18

So any idea on an update...no rush

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 09:47 am

Title: Chapter 18

Woah.... Sasha got some explain' to do now that she is dating Carter. SMH, why the lies, Sasha girl? I can't wait for more.

Great JOB :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 18

This is getting good!!! Please post Chapter 19 quickly!! I was hoping that Dina would get a story, I can't wait to read it!! 

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 15

Lawd Jesus, where is my tissue!! This chapter was good!! 

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 02:47 am

Title: Cast

Great chapter and great cliffhanger...Ahhh!!!  I can't wait for the next few chapters.  Yes, I want Dmitri to suffer a little bit.  He was an ass and hurt her like so many others have done in the past.  If Dominic and Carter know each other wouldn't Carter know Dmitri?  I need to re-read the last few chapters because I probably got it confused.  Anyway, Sasha also needs to let those friends Jaelynn and Faye (?) have it.  They were terrible and really don't deserve her time, but she'll show them, I know you'll let her! ;)  Ok, so will we get another chapter before the Superbowl?  Please...:)  Love this story and I'm favoriting everything about it including you!!  Thanx

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Great update. I hope Carter won't get hurt because its obvious Sasha still has feelings for that asshat Dmitri. I have a feeling Sasha and Dmitri will find their way back to each other but please make him suffer a little while. Don't make it too easy for him. And please please please let Sasha be able to finally stand up to those skanks Faye and Jaelynn. It would be poetic justice that their lives aren't going the way they planned. I don't get Teagan though, how can she not know what those two are like. She's annoying. Looking forward to Dina's story!! As always, great update. Update soon!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 18

oh........no, you didn't! !!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 02:42 pm

Title: Chapter 18

ah that was sosooooooooooooo cruel fininshing this chapter with s much suspence lol please please dont wait too lond to update , ps dont end this story anytime soon , but i gotta say fab , please continie the next chapter  right from this last scene please . you gotta develop form here . 

Fab chapter to date , more , more and longer chapter please if possible 

Reviewer: BABYBELL Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Please make Sasha strong enough to make Dimitri grovel. Please?

Reviewer: Team Carter! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 11:08 am

Title: Cast

great update!!!and with that, I gotta say that I don't want to see sasha revert back to her old self!She should hold her own in front of Dmitri,especially next to a man like Carter!I know she isn't over Dmitri but she doesn't have to react the way she did,come on Sasha, you're doing so well...show him how confident and strong you have become...

And I'd love to see Sasha not cower in front of the two sisters of gloom(faye and jaelynn)and show them what they deserve. Can't wait for the next chap;)

Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 10:19 am

Title: Chapter 18

Wow it's going down baby, team Dmitri +Sasha all the way!!!!! Hey wasn't Dina dating Slade? What happened to them?

Reviewer: ayiti2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 07:10 am

Title: Chapter 18

Ugh at Sasha's reaction. I'm like get a grip girl. I was happy with this chapter until her omg Dimitri freak out. I hope I wasn't too harsh, but I'm just over Sasha acting like a jittering idiot when it comes to Dimitri. I get that she hasn't seen him in a while, but that was just ridiculous. Woman up! Damn. 

I like Carter, but he and Sasha seem give off a brother/sister or best friends vibe. I don't like that she lied to Carter. I thought she was supposed to have grown up...part of that means being able to act like an adult. I destest liars. I think Teegan would be a good match for Carter. She's wild and he's laid back. I think the two would make a great paring.

I am looking forward to the dinner with those crappy hags who pretended to be her friends. 

Good chapter, overall. 

 

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 18

Cliffhanger much...

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 18

First...self publish, there is a website about doing it yourself. I heard about it from a friend....Second...Ooooohhhhh Mmmmyyyyy Gggooodddnneesssss! Please don't let Sasha faint just because she see's the man that caused her heartache...let her be poised, strong, confident in the face of abject horror! Let Carter see the beautiful, capable black woman she portrays. Eat your heart out Dimtri...you threw her away, now let's see how you like it! Third...yes Dina deserves her own story. Finally, I hate cliff hangers, but I love your story...that being said, "Do what you do!" But please don't make us suffer too long. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 18

I just reread Sasha's parting word to Dmitri again in chapter 16. I need for her to have some of that bravado in this situation. Those words were good words, and the meaning and history behind them were heartfelt and good. I don't want her to lose sight of that and lose all the  ground she has gained personally. Falling apart would be like stepping backwards. And part of Sasha's problem is she let her neediness for love and acceptance dictate how people treated her. Would I expect shock, yes, but I also don't expect her to break down in Dmitri's presence either. That just wont be necessary.

I also expect her to say her peace with those other two skanks and be done with them once and for all.

And yeah, Teagan is simply getting too old for that stuff. Grow up and find a better, more constructive way to have fun rather than get pissy drunk and flirt with her life or an STD like that. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:05 am

Title: Cast

you rock more soon5*****

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 02:49 am



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