Title: Chapter 18

I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you've built Carter made me so happy. I like that he's strong, kind, sympathetic, and playful. What more could you want in a man? Which by the way makes me sad because he's just a casualty in the inevitable. The game they had set up was wonderful it really had me giddy. What I don't get is why she wont let go of her bitterness and anger with her parents, the girls and most of all Dmitri. She won't be able to move on with Carter if she doesnt let it go. Im excited that Dina ia getting her own story which will be a masterpiece I'm sure!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 18

Great story... Just read all 18 chpts today... I don't know why I hadn't read this before, but now I'm addicted!!!! Reunited at last. Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: wow!!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 5

That was a good chapter,it was an emotional roller coaster!!!

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 18

Please make Sasha strong and not quaking and running from Dimitri even though she may feel that way inside.  Let Dimitri be jealous and regret the way he treated Sasha!  Great stuff!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 18

Sasha should have been stronger by now and she should not run and cower away from her past.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 10:19 pm

Title: Chapter 18

PLEASE post SOON!!!! Loved it. I am on pins and needles waiting!!

Reviewer: kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Carter may be a nice guy but sasha's just not feeling him,there's nothing worse than someone trying to force a relationship you can't make your heart feel what it doesn't want to feel. Sasha and Dmitri are to old to play games with each other they should just sit and have a nice chat if Sasha's not ready to work things out with him than that's ok he can step back and give her time maybe try and build a friendship and then try to get back to where they were before everything went down hill. It seems he has forgiven Sasha maybe she will listen to what he has to say and forgive him to because yeah she did a lot of wrong too.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 09:13 pm

Title: Cast

Please dont make her look weak! please, please, please!!! Give Sasha a back bone!!

Give Carter A chance, and don't make her go back to "HIM"!

OMG I cant take this...when is the next update.

Reviewer: HEART POUNDING!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Hold it together Sasha--remember Dimitri hasn't been knocking on doors to find you.    If she falls apart then she will have lost all the hard work toward moving on.  She may want to come clean and tell Carter they can only be friends--he should suspect this anyway, because he saw geniune love between his parents.

I think Sasha should kinda stay away from D.,because if he wants her he will come after her, like he should.  Can't wait  for the girls show-down--they have not changed and I hope Sasha pre-sharpens her claws for them on Dimitri.      

Reviewer: Penelope Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 08:27 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Great update. Carter may be a good guy but he is obviously not what and who Sasha wants. Since he is a good guy it is best for her to be honest with him and let him know that it will not go farther than friendship and if he still wants more than nothing.
While he is attractive Sasha is not sexually attracted to him so there is no need to turn this into a useless love triangle when Dimitri is Edward and Carter is a downgraded version of Jacob (I was team Jacob myself though in the Twilight series lol).
The heart/body wants what the heart/body wants and I would feel sad for Carter to be used.

I am here for the ride.

Love the idea of Dina having her own story :)

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 08:06 pm

Title: Cast

Aww I love Carter... but not for Sasha. He seems like such a grounded awesome guy but more of a friend for her. I loved that he said that he admired her. Sooo spot on, Sasha really needs people like that in her life.

Sasha gets the award for "Fictional Character Most Improved" because she's come such a long way. I'm proud of you Sasha! Also what's up with Teagan? Is something going on with her? I wonder what a Carter/ Teagan match would look like. He seems to be so put together but missing that love in his life, and Teagan needs to get it together and have some love in her life too. :)

So I wonder how Dmitry will react. Will be arrogant as always or trully repentant? We got a glimpse as to what his life has been like without her, but he has a loooong way to redemption. I really hated him before, well I hated the way he treated her and the situation. But the heart wants what the heart wants. I can't wait to see how this story will go. Hopefully Dmitry will get the other award for "Fictional Character Most Improved" as well.

Please please please don't let her shrink back to her old personality in his presence. She needs to put on that "poker" face she practiced so well with Carter and address him accordingly. Gah! I love this story. Great job!

 

-p2p-

Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 08:04 pm

Title: Chapter 18

AHHHHHHHHH *faints* love it!!!!! please update soon 

Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 18

OMG OMG OMG OMG! Please update soon. I knew it was going to happen but my heart was still beating out of control! I love this story so much!

I don't really like Carter that much  because he is more of a friend then boyfriend. She cannot even fake being in a relationship with him because of her strong feelings for Dimitri. 

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Small world.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 18

I cannot believe that you just left it there. My heart is pounding out of my chest my breath is shallow and my mouth is dry. Please update soon. I can't take this suspense. 'Bout to make me have an anxiety attack. Excellent job.

Reviewer: Bri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Now you have me chomping at the bit for the next chapter. This was an excellent transition into the next phase. Sorry, but I cannot support Carter for one reason: He doesn't do it for Sasha. Carter and Sasha deserve more than to share the dregs of her passionate love for another man. Find a way to show us that Dmitri has grown. He made me hate him in that hospital scene, but after seeing the transformation that has taken place with his sister, I don't doubt that you can resurrect our belief in their love. Congrats! The only thing that could have made this better would have been if there was more to it.

Reviewer: Wow! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Sasha, greet Dmitri with a confident smile and polite hello and leave, Confidence, Sasha.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Awesome but cruel to leave us hanging like that. Sasha, please be strong and make Dmitri work for it!

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Oh it's on it's on.  I was wondering why Sasha felt it was necessary to say Dominic was dating Dina instead of just saying she was in a relationship with Dimitri.

I am excited to see what happens in chapter 19.  The cliffhangers are killers.  I hope to see an update soon.

Carter is a sweetheart...I really do want to see him happy and with that lve and family he desires.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Carter is not my cup of tea, thats for sure.

Sasha is working hard and aspiring to something and all he wants to do is settle down. He has excelled in his career but he wants something else  for his partner it seems. Old fashioned she doesnt need someone like that she needs growth and to finally live her life to the fullest 

 

Reviewer: Chicken Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Oh my oh my oh my!!!!! Pleeeeaaaase I'm begging you, upload ASAP. The tension-it's crazy. My cells are just buzzing all over with what's going to happen next. Thank you so much though for the rather speedy update :)

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Oh my goooosh, so happy that you finally updated. I definitely do think that they needed time apart, and their time apart hadn't lessened their love for each other. I say this, but I'm kinda feeling this Carter man, so I'm kinda torn right now.  I honestly CANNOT wait till your next update!

And go you, with your move to Japan :))

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 17

the new sasha is fab , more of her dating and happy , i realy hope DIMITRI gets to see her again  , good for nadia . i wonder who Dimitri is talikg to or has been keepin tabs on her

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Awesome to see you back. I like Sasha and Dominic as friends. Hopefully he will become a cheerleader for Sasha and Dmitry.
She was and hopefully will be again ;) with his brother so either way she is off limits. She only reacted that way because she loves Dmitry. Happy to see Nadia is on the mend because she will be battling this condition the rest of her life.
Carter..... is not needed he would only be a rebound and a mistake at best, that would ruin Sasha's self esteem....if it went to far, she would regret it.
She already doesn't like him so I hope that she turns him down nicely unless he turns out to be a jerk.

I concur with the rest, of course I hope that Dmitry works for it ;)

I am here only for Dmitry and Sasha :)

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I love this story so much! Glad to see that Nadia finally grew up - can't wait to see what happens next with Sasha and Dmitri.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 06:12 pm



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