Title: Chapter 16

I cried. But I am glad Sasha took back her power 

Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 16

If this was the ending it was a good one. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 16

 GO SASHA!!! That's how a grown ass woman held themselves. She said it with class and respect. I applaud her for that. I am sad that they are over, but she needed to have a man respect her for who she is, wrong or right. Have your woman's back. Now I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope Sasha gets her happy ending :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 16

OH MY GAAAWD , TEARS !!! YOU DID IT TO ME AGAIN ! PLEASE GIVE US MORE SOON , PRETTY PLEASE :-D

Reviewer: kisser Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 16

Woohoo go Sasha! And Dominic was absolutely correct. Nadia is not a child and she is not innocent. If Dmitri hadn't dumped Sasha over Sasha's actions, then Nadia would have done something to mess them up.

Sasha totally just took the power back and it won't be long till Dmitri is really feeling her absence. I'm hoping the end game is Sasha and Dmitri, but I wouldn't mind seeing Sasha with someone else and I especially wouldn't mind if Dmitri saw it too.

More soon please!

Reviewer: Nicci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 16

Please update soon...

Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 16

So good!! I am so glad that she did that for herself and did not play the victim. She is a strong woman! And I am glad she is growing up. But, I don't want her to lose all of her innocence(?). She is a great person and I cannot wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 16

People can be so stupid with their emotional outburst, not realizing words hurt.  I hope she does not become cold heart.   Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 16

I love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 16

Dmitri is starting to get on my nerves. Sasha has given her heart to him and he has been so cold. In some respect he is like his father.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 16

Hurry I want to see where you go with this

Reviewer: Jiklma8 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 15

.... Sasha Sasha Sasha.... 

I recommend you finish your degree 

look up your mother and get some closure

find your daddy get some closure

move on and try to be happy the one fir you will reveal himself when the time is right.

and start your own little family. ...

Dmitry will regret his actions as will everyone that tore you down...

wishing you a blessed recovery

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: sharlene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2013 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 15

After reading the story again, I can not be surprised that Sasha was going to be heartbroken at some point.  

It is sad that her life experiences have led her to allow others to treat her with disrespect and disdain so that she does not have to feel alone. She is seeking acceptance at any and all costs, but she is the only one that can stop that cycle. 

Dmitri also has baggage, but he was always honest with Sasha. It appears his family life was not a picnic, either, but most people feel that's no excuse to be mean to Sasha. His attitude changed towards her when she began imposing her ideas on his family life, even as he blatantly told her what would happen if she continued. Dmitri was not the catalyst for this recent situation, it was all Sasha and as heartwrenching as his words were to her, it was a natural consequence to her actions.

Sasha nor Dmitri have enough experiences with healthy relationships to make positive choices at this time. I agree with a lot of reviewers that they need time to grow and accept themselves (Sasha-victim syndrome, lack of self esteem/Dmitri-father's rejection, sister/brother responsibility) before they can work on being together (but I do want them together).

SHA2011, the emotions and discussions brought to your readers through this story is a reflection of your great writing. Now bring on the next update!!!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2013 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Had a guy tell me this when I asked why he was out clubbing w/o his girl: Honey, it's hard to keep loving someone when they don't love you back.

Sasha, it's hard to keep loving this guy...  Hopefully the update will show several years has passed and Sasha has seriously moved on.  Be nice if she had a kid,but due to the ex's actions, she chose to move on without letting him know.

If not that scenario, at least let our girl have a relationship with someone who made her happy and allowed her to grow.  I really could care let about the ex and his screwed up crew.  

The man told her to get lost, so that is what she should do.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I've been pondering this last chapter and I think although Sasha's heart was in the right place she should not have interferred. Because she grew up in care of the state her view of what a family is and it's dynamics are incredibly rose tinted.

Philip Larkin, an English poet put it best when discribing families, “They f*ck you up, your mum and dad. They may not mean to, but they do. They fill you with the faults they had And add some extra, just for you." And I have to say that Dominic's family are f*ucked up beyond belief.

However, I don't like the way that Dominic started to treating her and speaking to her since his father came back on the scene. As for the scene at the hospital that was unreasonably harsh, almost as if he wanted to crush her.

Now how would I like the rest of the story to pan out? I'd like to fastforward a few years. Sasha has finished her education and has been working in her chosen profession for a few years. She's got the gloss of having provided for herself. She's harder (not too hard her softness is part of her charm), savvier, sparkier and less naive. They meet again and she's not soo easy to catch. She's had a few flings and maybe one or two meaningful relationships but they lead to marriage. She's loving life and ocassional thinks back to what would have happened if they'd stayed together.

As for Dominic,  I hope the intervening years have been great - his business is going fantastically well and life is generally fabulous in every area but in his personal life. They meet again and it's game on. however this time they're a bit more evenly matched, Sasha isn't cowed by his success and sophistication.

Anyway,  that's my take and I'm really looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story pans out...

Reviewer: london girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 15

We want more! We want more! This was such a good chapter. All I want for Christmas is another great chapter from you. 

Reviewer: ayiti2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 15

Update pretty please!!!

Reviewer: Love33 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Damn! What's Dimitri's deal! Such a cold shoulder. Very intrigued!

Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2013 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 15

I must say that this fallout didn't come as a surprise. And I am glad it happened because some drastic changes need to happen in their lives.

Oh Dmitry....I was routing for you homie. I really was. I understood that you are a product of your family and environment so I thought that made you redeemable. Well you shot that optimism in the face. I understand your anger, guilt, and concern for your sister but you just CRUSHED and DESTROYED that woman you claimed to care about. So I'm not here for you or righteous indignation. 

Poor Sasha....I was routing for you too boo, But these dumbass decisions must cease. I don't know what the hell convinced you that interfering in his life after only two months of knowing him was a good idea. Get some help boo. Live life for you! Believe in yourself and deal with your abandonement issues. Because you are better off alone until you deal with all those insecurities. You have to stop letting people stomp all over you. Lawdamercy....

And Nadia, Nikolai, Faye, and Jaelynn can ALL choke on a dick. I'm through with all of them. 

GREAT STORY!! See how invested you have us?

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 15

I know that there is lots to do while on break, but did you have an opportunity to write a follow up chapter? I've been dying to see what happens here.

Reviewer: Waiting Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 15

herself. Thats too easy. Rather, I hope she sees this as an opportunity to get it together. Really see what she needs to do about how she views her own self-worth in relation to others.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Sasha needs therapy. I love her, but she is not whole. She needs confidence and she needs to love herself. She needs to talk to someone about her abandonment issues. She is not a bad person but she is the perfect candidate that can be hurt terribly again and again if she does not become strong. I hope you put a time space between when she sees Dmitri again and when and if she does, it's not intentional.

Dmitri is cold, bitter, and hurt himself. He also needs help, but Sasha is still very naive where Dmitri is not. What Dmitri said was wrong. He is angry. I am not taking up for him; but Sasha has to realize she cannot change Dmitri no matter how strong she thinks her love is for him. Sasha's love for Dmitri seems more like infatuation than love. He's like a God to her. That is clearly a problem; especially when the other's feelings are undecided or luke warm. He has crushed her so far and may do more if she keeps coming back like a lost puppy. Sasha has to help herself. I know it will be hard, but she can do it. First she has to forget about Dmitri and start thinking about Sasha and what Sasha wants and needs.

Once she finds happiness within, she will be able to confidently find happiness with someone else that will love her unconditionally; whether it's Dmitri or not. And honestly, based on his episode at the hospital, I kind of hope it's not him. But people can change..yada ..yada. I know this though, Sasha needs to move on with her life without the craziness of Dmitri and his crazy family. She can do so much better.

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 15

In a weird way I understand Dmitri's anger. Sasha over stepped the bounderies Dmitri set. Nadia has been nothing but mean and disrespectful to her. Why did Sasha think she could talk to her about anything? Dmitir's father and sister are unbalaced and she cannot help bridge a gap that she knows nothing about. Sometimes you just need to back off and let poeple process things in thier own way.

Was has reaction over the top? Yes. Does he need to apologize later? Yes, but so does Sasha.

Reviewer: Jojo65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I knew the a$$**** would surface sooner or later. Damn! Sasha needs one male friend to kick him in the a$$! He doesn't deserve a sweet person like Sasha anyway! But she needs to start standing up for herself also! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 15

This chapter was so sad.I feel sorry for Sasha . Hope everything works out soon for her and Dmitri. I know he is just angry and emotional right now.

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Date: November 21 2013 09:31 pm



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