Title: Cast

I have to wonder about the massive support for Sasha.  Sasha was out of line from the beginning.   If you love yoru man you support your man.  But lying to his sister to get her to a location that would end up heated.  Acting like your high and mighty with the "he would never let you hurt me."  Or the "I'm what's best for him." Just will not fly.  You might have your own opinions about his sister but it's not your place to try to control it.  I thought most people here would see that.

 

Then having the sister get hurt because of your lying and manipulation is a problem.  Had Sasha not interfered none of this would have happened and I am sure Dmitri would want her around.  However, he does have a sick sister and Sasha created the environment in which she was hurt.   Sasha definitely has to get in her own skin but she has major faults.  

 

I don't care about her upbringing what Sasha did was WRONG.  There is no right to what she did and it went to hell.  I also understand why Dmitri lashed out.  He got the whole picture.  He had told her not to interfere, and she does.  He knows his sister is sick already and Sasha created the environment that could really hurt his sister.  What if she had a concussion and went into a coma or died?!  Would people still be as supportive of Sasha?  This situation was created by her misplaced sense of importance in Dmitri's life.  

 

I am not saying that Dmitri doesn't find her important.  It's obvious that he does considering he wanted to listen to her reasoning before he went on her about his sister and he protected her from his father.   But Dmitri doesn't want a pep talk.  He needs to solve a problem and what he wanted was support not what you think is best.   I also thought Dmitri's actions were normal in the hospital.  I don't think he has aything to apologize for because I would be the same.  Especially when I told you to back off and you create the perfect recipe of disaster to await my family member.  I would be livid.  

Anyway I am commenting because I see more support of Sasha than there was seeing all the bad she did.  Dmitri is definitely not a bad guy here.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 15

Wow, I actually support this.  While reading this I felt Sasha was a bitch too.   I understand that you love the guy but you are seriously meddling in private affairs that are dangerous to venture into.  Even if I was Dmitri's wife I would never enter his affairs, I would support him in any way I can.   There was a very high handed and arrogant way in which Sasha entered this.  I thought she was out of her mind in all honesty and it seemed rather out of character and a bit psycho might I add.   Nadia is a racist fuck, excuse my language; that is without a doubt.  But she is also the sister of the man you love.  Going in there as though you can save her and know what's best for her is out of control.  I'd like to ask Sasha who thinks she is to be honest.  Now we have this drama erupting...I would like Dmitri with someone else.  I am so not into Sasha after this.   Nothing can be redeemed here really.   

 

I think in all honesty she might need a break from Dmitri and that town too.  Maybe go somewhere fresh and quick.  She needs a breather because this was too much for her, at her age.   Maybe a break for both of them would be best.  I'd feel a bit bad she was pregnant, but I think Sasha has some growing up to do and figure herself out.  Because this chapter shows that she's lost herself in this relationship and is far too self righteous for her own good.  I feel like she needs a time out.

 

Still a great chapter, no doubt and I actually that this happened because I felt maybe this realtionship was too much for Sasha.  She has her own baggage to work and Dmitri is overflowing with his own.    If this situation with Nadia is anything to go buy...Sasha is in over her head. 

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 15

Sasha honestly did the best she could. I don't think it's her fault ! I honestly think she should walk away, allow him to fight his own demons because he's seriously needs to. She's such a sweet hearted girl and I feel so sorry for her :( she didn't deserve to be treated like that and I hope she comes to realisation that she can just walk away. Let him come crawling and when he does ... She shouldn't cave. She needs to also find herself . Sorryyyy i loveeeee this story ! It's my first time commenting because my iPad continuously stuffed up ! Lmao but I loved it ! Do you have wattpad ? If so I'll follow you on there too! Such a huge fan xx 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 15

I think this is a really good story and I will continue reading it but I have the hardest time reading Sasha's scenes.  I know her mother f*cked her up but her level of low self-esteem is just....no words. I don't understand how she can take all that verbal abuse from everyone, including Dmitri.   I know she says she loves him but she needs to start loving herself first which obviously she doesn't...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 11:18 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I'm wondering whether Dimitri has any inkling that he just crushed an emotionally fragile woman who lacks both self esteem and a vibrant support network. To kill a butterfly, you need only brush its wings. He used a sledgehammer. I'm not really wondering whether the next move by Sasha will be a positive one. I'm just wondering whether it will involve an accident due to severe emotional distress, an emotional breakdown, pills or a razor blade. 

 

As for Dimitri, he can kick rocks. You don't say those things to people you care about. There are lines you just don't cross. He has finally convinced me that he is incapable of loving Sasha. She needs to move on.

Reviewer: Curious Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 08:02 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Wow!! Good chapter. I'm feeling so bad for Sasha, but I knew her do something like this to her. She needs to let go and wait for Dmitri to beg her forgiveness.  He was an ass and nikolai and Nadia are just mean.  Sasha deserves better so Dmitri better grovel to get her back!!! I've been waiting on thus update and now I need more!!!  So good, live it!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 05:16 pm

Title: Chapter 15

First of all: so glad to read you again! Thanks, thanks, thanks, I missed this story.

Secondly: this was sad and quite pathetic and so so so why Sasha should have never tried and fixed whatever she thought she was fixing.

Sasha, Sasha, Sasha, such a glutton for punishment! You were so out of line calling his sister, lying to her and then attempting to convince her to seek help ! Like, how dumb was that? Thinking that you, off all people, would be able to convince her to do what her brothers couldn't convince her to do, after years of trying. I mean really? I love you, woman, I really do, but I can't stand dumbassery. And that was such a dumb ass move and dumb ass thinking and dumb ass every thing. I know you have issues, comitment issues, abandonment issues and all. But rather than using your boyfriend as a pet project, why don't you go and confront your own problems? I still love you, woman, I really do, but now, you need to back off, take some deep breath and go confront your issues and grow out of them. Go and seek some professional help, just like you "advised" Nadia. Follow your own advise. Because as harsh and cruel Dmitri was dumping you, you better now learn from that and check out of dumbass land once and for all.

Dmitri, man: you were right to be pissed and mad at Sasha. I was pissed too, since her failed attempt at giving life leassons to you right after you had that draining emotional confrontation with your father. She totally overstepped and that is annoying. And then she put your sister into a dangerous situation. So yeah, I got that you were worried about your sister. And angered by your father. So you lashed out. Ok. But man, that was harsh, and cruel and totally a jack ass move. Sasha behaved like a total dumb ass and you behaved like a total a jack ass. Your father can be proud, that's for sure!

So now, I need those two to clear their head, cool off  and come back to their senses. I don't want to read about Sasha mopping around for months, I don't want to read about Dmitri retreating back to is old ways just worse, I don't want them to just regress to lesser versions of their old selves. I understand they can't be together, for now. So let's have them take a seat, a long breath and a good look at their lives and  try to work out their probelms and come back better from this mess. Then, maybe, they will be ready to give a try a this relationship.

Meanwhile, let's give Dominic some love. May be a fun hook up with Teagan, so that Sascha and Dmitri will keep some kind of contact throught this. Or ma be not. Give him a hot fun WOC sister. Dominic deserves some loving. I am only here for him, right now. And for Dina and Slate too.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 07:37 am

Title: Cast

 

What the hell...LOL!! Ok, aleta, this is the funniest damn review I have EVER read!!! LMAO!!! 

Tell the truth, girl!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Poor sasha

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 05:47 am

Title: Chapter 15

wow really intense chapter  would love to know what comes next....in a perfect world i like to see Sasha get counseling and recognize her issues; fear of abandonment, lack of self esteem/confidence and self worth. Have her grow out of the sister save a hoe mentality and recognize her value and not tolerate the bullshit she has been tolerating.  Please allow me to suggest the following: do something to that asswipe of a family...miraculously have that brat nadia admit her fucked up condition is due to her own damn daddy issues and sign her own ass up for treatment, get from under that manipulative bastard of a sperm donar and live a healthy life oh yeah and thank Sasha for saving her trifling life.  And Dmitry can suck a smooth dick....get the hell over his daddy issues, oh i cant love ..no bitch your ass has been spolied rotten and you aint never had somebody tell you that you aint shit and demand you do better. Yo ass is on your way to being an elegant fuck-boy! ....please please do not let Sasha take up with D's brother in her time of weakness..please let Sasha be strong for her own damn self and Nikolai..a smooth fuck you, you emotionly impotent, racist fuck.

As you can see dear your writing has totally garnered my attention and made the characters real for me....so real that if I ever catch they tired asses out side i will show them how jersey rolls.   That is all. Still love you boo!

Reviewer: aleta Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

so excited to see what happens next.  dont be a stranger.

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

Wow

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 04:58 am

Title: Cast

On my God! Please give this girl A SPINE!  I want to slap this man three ways from Sunday.

Reviewer: Stacycue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

Yikes! I agree about Sasha. That was just painful to read! She's sweet but she is a little tiresome now. And she really does need therapy.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 03:01 am

Title: Cast

WOW!!!!! I read this update on yesterday but had to take a day before writing a review. There have been very few stories (purchased or free) that have made me cry - this is one of them. I so want Sasha to grow to live herself because only then will she be able to have a voice that will tell her she is worth loving and deserves love. As for admitting, he can kick rocks at this point! She deserves a real man - Dmitri isn't one.

 

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 15

I was bawling at the end of this chapter. It has been a while since a fic made me cry lol. I feel soooo bad for Sasha. Yes she probably should have left the situation alone but she was coming from a place of love. She yearns so much for a family and thought patching up dimitri's would eventually make him happy since he loved his sister. Considering he knows her past and her abandonment issues, he is a total asswipe for the way he treated her, I mean crap it's not like she pushed her down and he knows full well that Nadia is a bitch. I know he's gonna feel like a heel when he thinks back to how he treated her. I want her to go to therapy and meet a new man so Dimitri can go for a long walk off a very short pier or atleast have him do some major ass kissing. oh and Nadia needs to turn over a new leaf after being at deaths door

okay rant over...excellent work and am def looking forward to an update!!!!

Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 15

WOOOOOOOOW!!

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 12:07 am

Title: Chapter 15

I honestly don't know what to think about this chapter. Sasha now looks weak and I abhor the way Dmitri treated her. I truly hope that she's not the one chasing after him anymore. At this point, they both need space and she needs time to re-evalute the situation and discover her self-worth...

Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Did not see this coming poor Sasha. Update soon.

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 10:12 pm

Title: Cast

ditto to Lapis Love review. 

you know you have a hit when you can get this kind of reaction from your readers. 

If Sasha don't get a clue after being ignored by D. slapped and spit on by N, and their crazy Pops trying to get to her... her so-called man can't even say he loves her --he could've at least said 'thank you' when she said it.  Staying involved with this family would give this girl a nervous breakdown--she is already their punching bag. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 08:18 pm

Title: Cast

Am I the only one finding something wrong with Nadia slapping and spitting in Sasha's face?  That is just so damn nasty..

I can't wait to see what jumps off in the next chapter.. I hope someone but the beats to Dimtri..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Submitted my review earlier but wanted to make a change, and some funky stuff happened. This was was a very intense chapter. My hope is that Sasha gets counseling and work on her own self-esteem/worth. She needs to take care of home first before she should try to help anyone else. Especially someone she's been a witness to that has racists and volatile family members, and is himself emotionally unavailable at times. She's better than me because I wouldn't have slept in the same bed nor remained under the same roof as the mofo who cussed me out. And why she didn't take Dimitir's reaction of her speech as a good precusor that to further insert herself in his family business to heart, I don't understand. I know the saying, 'love makes you do stupid things' but where's the common sense? What did Sasha really think would happen confronting Nadia (evil witch) that she knows despises her? That she'd have an automatic change of her heart? 

And Dimirti needs his arse whooped for the way he spoke to Sasha in the bathroom and at the hospital. Get it, he was very concerned with his sister, and his family business is his business and outsiders need not apply, but in that moment it was like he had zero f*cks to give concerning Sasha and it made him no better than the father he supposedly hates. 

I really do feel for Sasha. She has such limited experience with the world and you'd think that would harden her because she was abandoned by her mom and her 'friends' treated her worse than crap, but unfortunately it's made her naively idealistic, and she's now paying for it. So I'm hoping she'll work on herself and leave Dimirti alone until he gets himself together. Don't know if their relationship is salvagable, but I suppose that will remain to be seen;) Intense, thought-provoking chapter, love. Can't wait until the next one!

 

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 06:06 pm

Title: Cast

sasha sweety, I am so sorry for you but I am finding it hard to totally feel sorry when you're letting people walk all over you like used tissue. and Id love you to stand up to dimitri,what the hell are all those "I love you"'s while he's giving you the boot?I really hope that you grow in a confident woman and make it very hard for dimitri to get back with you . And I am tired of you dimitri,deal with whatever problem you have or you'll end up just like your father and I hope you realize that you lost the best thing that you ever had!
ugh!nadia die already!and may your father join you!and sweet Dominic please rescue sasha and show dimitri how to treat a lady!

love the story

Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 03:28 pm

Title: Chapter 15

She should have popped his dumb ass in the back of the head for talking to her like that, he crossed the line twice. She trusted him and he's too self involed to see that. Yeah, yeah, yeah she should have minded her business, but what female really minds their own business? seriouly? She should find some fight and curse his ass out, personally I would have set his ass on fire literly for disrespecting me like that all of that yelling was uncalled for. Still I love the story his punk ass just pissed me off lol.

Reviewer: leeli01 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Poor Sasha.  She should have left well enough alone.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 11:52 am



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