Title: Chapter 13

Sasha has confessed her love I wonder what Dmitri's response verbally would have been if he did not see his father. Hmmm interesting.  I wonder why his father is there.  I thought this was a celebration for Dmitri and Slade who would have invited him but again I guess that is why Dmitri thought of him as an unwanted and uninvited guest.

What happened with Dina and Slade I thought they had a connection now I am suspecting he is dating that wench what's her face Faye. I am disappointed in him currently but I am sure (hopefully) that he has a valid reason on dropping the connection between him and Dina.

Than you for the update I hipe to see another soon.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 07:27 pm

Title: Cast

yeah I'm going to need an update asap rotfl

Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:58 pm

Title: Chapter 13

i wonder what happen between dina and slater for him to decline another date with her and for him to stop appearing at the diner. i'm sure there is going to be some type of drama between dmitri and his father. looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 13

The long wait was worth it: great chapter, as usual!!! Thanks a lot. So glad about the evolution of Sasha and Dmitri relationship. Dmitri is really growing as a man and a lover: it was about time he confronted his sister, and he aknowledge publicly his relationship with Sasha. I don't think it is bad that he did said back to Sasha that he loved her, or that she should feel rejected or disapointed. I think his actions spoke for him, and he will directly express how and what he fells in his own time. Am a bit surprised that Slade didn't know anything; I thought they were close friends. Also, what happened with Slade: it seemed that he was quite interested in Dina. I think that it is Nadia who told their father about Dmitri and Sasha. So Daddy dearest has made his grand entrance, can't wait for the big confrontation!

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 02:47 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Proud of Dmitri in this chapter he not only claimed his woman he stood up for her with his awful sister! Wonder what Dmitri's father doing there?! Great update ! Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 02:43 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I hope he was speechless because of seeing his father. What's up with Slade, ignoring Dina?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 08:03 am

Title: Cast

Dina stumbled a bit form slade's treatment, but i like that she got right back in the game. sasha should feel relieved that she told D what was in her heart--too bad his reaction sucked.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 13

Dina and Slade broke up; what happened? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: bert8813 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 13

I was so proud of him, even in the end.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 13

Love the chapter. Masterfully written.

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 13

Wtf to slade for ignoring dina, I'm pissed!

And Dominic was doing so good till the end.

Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 13

COme back right now!!!!!!  Thank you for the update. I would love to see the continuation of Sasha and Dmitri's converstaion.  Daddy might be trouble though.....

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh no.

Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 13

I am on pins and needles with anticipation! This chapter was very well written!!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 13

Never liked Nadia but I am very glad that she left.  The little narcisstic ho got mad because Dimitri showed that he cared about her.  Dimitri admitted his love for Sasha and is loving and affectionate in person.  Why did that ass Faye show up at that function?  Just like that roach that scatters when the light is turned on, that Faye reared her bitchy head.  Yep, still don't like her!!  Right at the end, Dimitri runs into his father that was so wrong.  I do hope that running into his father doesn't ruin the progress that he has made in his relationship with Sasha.  That would really chap my britches!!  Fabulous!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 13

Okay they got rid of Nadia and her foolishness.They're at the party having a good time and Sasha drops the L-word, causing him to go into shock. But he said not yet  to himself earlier.  I thought he was thinking the same thing.    . Who in the heck told his about the party?

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 13

Ughhhh!!! 

Reviewer: Teiga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 13

slade you bad boy he better have a good reason for why he blew off dina

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 13

Omg girl this is getting juicy! I hope his sister don't have anything to do with their father showing up. And Dimitri better not hurt my girl! lol Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 13

Awesome!! I know Dmitri loves Sasha at least I hope. Do not like Nadia!!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 13

OMG!!! finally an update. Please dont ever make us wait that long.

Reviewer: val Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh no.  Does he know about Sasha?  What did his sister tell her father?  Thanks for the update!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 13

So, he is rendered speechless because his father came to the celebration.

Why is his father in town.  He disowned Dimitri and Dimitri is now a self-made man.

How much control will Dimitri allow his father to have over him.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 12

Yes, and I think you need to bring in a boy.  I have no clue what boy.  White or Black...or Hispanic...but Nadia needs a distraction.  I say a camping trip is in order.  Get the whole family together, I would bring in my other power couple.  Although I am not shipping Dominic and Teagan (but get the feeling they might be paired).  Dominic can do better.  Ever since the crack mother statement by Teagan I've been critical and probably always will be.  I say though have Teagan along for the ride in order to get the girl outside and dealing with reality.  Nothing refreshes the mind than 1) cohabitation, 2) forced to eat because of over exertion.   Nadia starts walking and eating she'll forget about the condition.  Seriously.  Plus she needs her own guy to distract her.  Someone unexpected.  

Dina must have a hot brother or friend or something to come on the trip.   I'm saying this too because I just love group activities. 

I love the love making scene. Wow, talk about hot. 

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I love your story please continue writing

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Date: July 27 2013 09:51 am



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