Title: Chapter 12

I think in any healthy relationship between a man and a woman, sex is important! Especially when it new to new to one of them. But most importantly, they take the time to really get yo know each other. Just like how Dmitri knew about Sasha being allergic to shellfish. Or how Sasha can understand when Dmitri is upset just by the way he stands. That is great detail. You are great writer, and this a great story!!!! 

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2013 07:10 am

Title: Chapter 11

I know that sister of his is only there to make trouble! Sasha is going to have to stand up to that heffa, and soon! Love scene was just right! Kudos for you!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2013 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 7

That's love

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow...stumbled upon this story and I'm really into it.

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 11:24 am

Title: Chapter 12

It's all so dramatic, lol. 

I liked Dominic, maybe he can hookup with Teagan. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:21 am

Title: Cast

It's something about that sibling attachment where nobody's good enough.. Nayda will have to find a way to get betterr and also allow Dimtir to be happy with Sasha.  Dominic struck a nerve with Dimtri by flirting with Sasha and then telling him  that he needed to deal with his issue with his father.  Talk about dysfunctional. I can't wait to see what type of person his father is and what  problems he's going to cause.  Dimtri really should send his sister packing,but I guess he has to see this ugly side of her first.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 12

And it begins.....Nadia is going to have a field day with Sasha. Dominic tried to warn Dmitri, but I think he is going to have to see Nadia in action before he believes his innocent little sister is no longer innocent. I am not trying to beat up on Nadia, because clearly she does have some health issues, but that does not make it okay to plot against Sasha. Nadia better watch herself; she does not know how much Dmitri is into Sasha, even though he is going around telling everyone they are friends, there is a part of him that needs Sasha just as much as she needs him. But I have a feeling Sasha is going to end up getting hurt before everything is over. Great update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 12

Great update! Love Dmitri's jealousnessn when Sasha interacted ith his brother. And them then getting down was hawt and sexy! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 12:07 am

Title: Chapter 7

I wish Sasha had been the one to put Faye in her place. It's appaling that Jealyn is friends with anyone who'd bring race into account when insulting someone. *smh

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Awe finally someone to tell dmitri of his wrong doings.....loving those two together...hopefully h want mess it up...

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 04:44 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Dominic is correct about lil sis Nadia she is just as manipulative as daddy dearest and he has warned his brother about her so it is up to Dmitri to take it for the grain of salt it is.  He loves her and is still thinking about the little girl she was when he left.

Though she can probably be redeemed he still needs to open his eyes and see her for the person she truly is and take his brother advise seriously. Also the advise that was given about Sasha to he is already possessive of her in secret but he still does not claim her with his family.  She needs that to be able to fight against anything that comes her way about their relationship because Miss Nadia is scheming no doubt about that.

Thank you for the update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Aww, sniff, sniff. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 09:38 am

Title: Chapter 12

Team Dominic. so done with Dmitri,Sasha deserves better and I'm still waiting for Jaelynn And Faye to get a roundhouse to the face.  teagan better watch out for those two because they will turn on her too. looking forward to the next update. here's hoping Nadia drives off a cliff.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 07:57 am

Title: Chapter 12

Fantastic!!! Sasha is really taking to this sex thing...lol! Good for her.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 12

Great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 06:33 am

Title: Chapter 12

Just loved this chapter,

Sasha is getting so much better then how she was in the beginning she wasn't hiding in the corner when his brother started talking to her. Good for her.

Dmitri is now starting to feel jealous about her which is great maybe he will not take her for granted.

I loved their private scene together not necessarily talking about them having sex but the fact that when he was stressed he came to see her and they actually TALKED.. excellent update.

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 12

..... Well Damn

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 12

As much as they argue, his brother was right about Nadia all things considered.  Dominic is level headed and sees even asking.  He sees Sasha as a special beauty that Dimitri fails to acknowlege.  Sasha loves him but based on observation and points proven, Dimitri continues to deny any relationship.  How long can he go on living like this before he realizes that he is not moving forward but rather moving back.

Many things were brought into the light, things that needed to be said without any filters.  Dimitri still has his fathers influence over him even now with Sasha in the center fold.  The truth is like acid, it burns everything until their is nothing left.  It has sunk in about Nadia and her problems but there is still the situationwith Dimitri and his relation to Sasha.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 12

I like Dominic; Dmitri can be such a hard ass but I love him with Sasha. That love scene was so erotic.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 12

Dominic is right about Sasha being hurt by his denial of her with his family.  Dimitri admit that you love her and not just her sex.  This was a great update!!  It is so obvious how Dimitri feels about Sasha so when is he going to get together. I really hope that Dominic can defuse the Nadia sititution before she hurt Sasha.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

I don't understand how Sasha can think these girls, especially Faye, are her friends? 

 

Work on your descriptions because they are somewhat confusing. You should probably simplify at this stage in your writing.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 2

Sasha's "friends' are pathetic. I feel bad that Sasha is stuck with them. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 12

Yes! Thanks so much for this new chapter! I love this story, one of my fav with "Chief" and "Can't catch a break". I love Sasha and the fact that she is not a typical "exotic black beauty" with her round stomach and her dreadlocks but nevertheless a very beautiful girl. I love Dmitri and the way he is growing and evolving. That sex scene was hot, hot, hot! It is great that Sasha is enjoying her sexual desires and becomes more assertive and confident. More sexy and dirty times between Sasha and Dmitri ! Also Dominic seems like a nice guy afterall, wonder why Dmitri seems to hate him so much. Something about their "daddy issues" certainly. I hope Nadia doesn't turn out ot be a total bitch and that she is able to get some help. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 12

Is Sasha going to volunteer to wacth Nadia? And Dimitri needs to stop that denying their relationship bs!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 12

She shouldn't let him get away with saying they are only friends to someone else again, bc then they will only be friends w/benefits.  He loves Sasha and I think Nadia is going to do something to make him wish he had claimed Sasha to all.  D is making good steps toward deserving Sasha.  Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 02:20 am



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