Faye needs to have her ass kicked and a tongue lashing and that is me final verdict on that bitch. I's good to see that Sasha is finally opening her eyes and realize who her real friends are. Teagan is actually genuine and a real friend to her as well as Ms Dina. Hope Dina's confidence can rub off on her. Dmitri is a pleasant surprise. I take back any bad thing I said about Teagan btw. Please update soon and take care. Thanks for the update I didn't expect one.

Author's Response:

No worries. I actually wanted readers to be unsure about Teagan. Considering what bad friends Jaelynn and Faye were, it wasn't too much of a leap. I'm happy you are enjoying the story. Thank you for your review!

owww the last part was sooo cute ,cant wsait for more totally in love with this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm really happy to hear that. More Dmitri and Sasha coming soon!

This was a good chapter.  I am glad that Dimitri understood that this wasn't about sex and I hope they talk about what's bothering her.  I like that you're taking your time and letting them get to know each other better before actually having sex.  Good job!

I never disliked Dimitri nor do I think that he changed overnight.  I feel that he always had feelings for Sasha from the beginning but she didn't meet his previous 'standards' and so he told himself that she wan't really the one and that it was just physical attraction.  However, if that was the case, then why couldn't he move forward with Teagan?  He admitted that she met his physical criteria and yet he had no desire to sleep with her.  

I think the talk with Slade just made all the pieces of the puzzle come together for him.  He couldn't leave her when he hurt her, and that in itselp perplexed him, but he realized after talking to Slade that there was more there than even he had wanted to admit.

Now he wants to explore that.  He knows she's a virgin and he knows that she wants a serious relationship.  He also knows that he can't live with huriting her so to me that told him to get with the program or leave her alone and leaving Sasha alone was NOT an option since he couldn't stop thinking about her.

So, I don't think it was an about face at all.  I think it was a revelation on his part and being older, he's tired of games.  He wants the real thing.

Good update.  I can't wait until her friends see his looks of adoration toward Sasha.  LOL

I love that you have Dina in the picture. She seems to be a real friend Sasha could use. Maybe some of Dina's genuine confidence will rub off on her.

I always liked Dmitri because he has been honest with Sasha the whole time. I liked that he realized his feelings for her went beyond lust and only after that realization did he try to pursue more with her.

Write the story how the characters speak to you and I will be here gladly reading.

Thanks for the update!

awwww cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I never disliked Dmitri, it's just the fact that he was so stereotypical in his attitude toward what he considered beautiful people and what he felt as being worthy of his time and attention. His attraction to Sasha was only physical, he thought. That was until he talked to her and now he knows it is a whole lot more. 

loved it!!

I have absolutely no dislike and actually liked him before.  Personally for me it's a bit unusual that he was so quick to change.   He was adamant and most people are not willing to just flip because of sound reasoning of a friend.  This is to fast, too soon.  There has to have been a reason why he was like that.  I was waiting for that to come out a few chapters later while he slowly wormed himself into her life.  

Actually I'm surprised people dislike him.  He was up front with her.  He was honest, and maybe if she was a tad bit more introspective she might wonder if he had some issues himself.  The thing with Sasha, even though I like her, is that she is self-pitying.  It's a flaw but we all have flaws...if people don't like him so what really because he's not a hero.  He's a reflection of a man with no ties or tries not to have any. 

As a piece of advice and I am not criticizing you...many fans will be out to help destroy a story because they don't like anything.  While others would prefer to help you grow a story from your base onwards.  I felt the original direction was built for a really lengthy and well rounded story and this chapter derailed a lot of what you intended.  Thanks for including the Dina aspect that I had thought but that is something you could have added anywhere down the line or not at all since it is your story.  

Dmitri appears a bit superficial to me because he's so quick to change, as though he's using this tactic to get into her pants.  While the original route would have made Sasha wary but it would lead to some deeper self-discovery later on.

Love it can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!

After  reading the last chapter, I can see where Sacha's low self-esteem stems from. Being abandonned by someone who is supposed to love you, protect you, have your back will do that to someone. I hope being friends with Dina will help her a bit. As I said before, she really needs new friends and the three pigs ain't it. Although Teagan might be the better of the three the dynamics need tp change a bit. Finally I like seeing this new side to Dmitri, and I simply love Slade. Hope everything works out for him and Dina. Keep up the good work and take care.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I am glad to hear you are liking the characters; it can be difficult sometimes to make them likeable without being completely one-dimensional at the same time. But, alas, thats just writing. 

Aw, that's SO SWEET. I LOVE them!