Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a good update. Will see hoe genuine Dmitry really is. As for Dina I hope her date is with Dmitry's friend since he seems stable.

Author's Response:

Yes, Slade is definitely the less commitment phobic of the two of them. They are a nice contrast to each other, I think. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 6

My stance in Dimitri is a little softer now, he appeared almost human in thus chapter.  He said the words that she longs to hear, I won't gbfow you away!  Why in the hell is she honing to invite those treacherous h's that she calls friends out with her and Dina?  I know that those beavers will shoe out and often and I have the feeling that Dina will put all those bitches in their places!  So damn good!!!  I wish you much success with your internship!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your well wishes and your review! I'm very happy to hear you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad that Dimitri admitted his feelings.  Now he just has to convince her and Sasha has to toss those no good jealous skeazy friends!   Update when you can!



Author's Response:

Progress has finally been made between Dmitri and Sasha! More coming soon! Thank you for your review. 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 01:12 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Loved the update! Hope he does right by her!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 6

Nice update. More please. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 07:22 am

Title: Cast

Took him long enough and thank goodness for Slade.  Now it's time for Dina to put the so-called friends in check, bc you know they are going to  show their asses when they find out about D & S. 



Author's Response:

haha. Finally he came to his senses! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 07:22 am

Title: Cast

Wonderful update. I'm glad Dmitri finally got his act together!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: meme398 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 5

Loved the update! Interesting story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

I like him...he might be full of himself but he is honest at least.




Author's Response:

Yup, that's exactly how I wanted to protray him. I don't know but I find arrogance to be attractive to a certain extent. smh. 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 03:18 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for a good update. I am glad we got a chance to learn more about why Sasha is so insecure. I am not sure how I am feeling about Dmitry he is older than the friends and is used to woman more like Teagan. Dmitry admitted to not wanting to be in a relationship he needs to walk away from Sasha if he isn't serious about her. I was surprised that Teagan was so protective of her friend especially after learning that the man she has been dating says he is interested in her friend.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 02:25 pm

Title: Cast

Way to go Dmitri and Teagan!!! :D 

Teagan cares about Sasha more than I thought and she is not that self absorbed. Actually she does see and understand a lot of feelings in Sasha's minds and Dmitri's eyes... :)

And Dmitri is brave, honest, straight forward and truthful. I am liking him now..... :)

I wish Sasha wakes up in Dmitri's arms....lol  :P

I love the realistic and unpredictable bits of your writing  :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am happy you are enjoying the story! More to come.

Reviewer: IndiGrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 11:42 am

Title: Chapter 5

WHAT?! Ok, I.. WHat?!  I can't believe the two people that Sasha is somewhat close to right now, both hurt her badly, without a single care. Then sayin she got issues??... WHAT?! I want to kick both there asses, just sayin. LOL! Is there anybody other than Sasha with a decent, friendly quality WORTHY of Sasha? 

Please post another chapter soon, I hope Sasha moves and get much better people and environment.

Good job with the story, though I am really not liking all the other characters right now, LOL! And Great job on Sasha standing up and given back the sassiness, I only pray she will cut up her 'friends' and set them straight too. LOL!!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 5

I like the idea of the story alot but the ending of this chapter made me disappointed. I'm not bashing you, let's put that on record. Personally I love seeing strong female characters and honestly it's very rare to find one that doesn't so quickly succumb to the 'white' knight dependency syndrome.  One's who can put a man in his place quick and though sasha did that it all kinda fell to the waste side when she broke down and fell right back into that guys arms. I mean this is only her third time seeing him it was uncomfortable how vulnerable she becoame with him so fast. I found myself saying 'really?' and 'what?' quite a bit while reading. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I understand where you are coming from. I've been trying to convey that their feelings for each other are quite different because of how strong they are from the beginning. Sasha has expressed before that she feels a comfort with him that she has rarely felt with anyone else; something that weirds her out at first and that she can't explain. Their connection to each other goes beyond the number of times they met. Also, in that scene, she did not intentionally fall into his arms. It was more that she was so distraught over feelings she had kept to herself since she was abandoned by her mother that it didn't matter who was there, she just didn't want to be alone and needed any form of comfort. I hope this explains a little bit where I've been trying to go with the story and I hope you keep reading. Again, thank you for your input! :-)

Reviewer: True Escape Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 07:09 am

Title: Cast

love it more soon



Author's Response:

Thank you! More to come...

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 5

Please update soon...thanks it's great

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for helping us understand Sasha better.  Now I get why she excepts the sad friends she's surrounded by,with the exception of Teagan, I hope she doesn't turn on her because of Dmitri.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 5

I really like the chapter.  I was wondering where Teagun would fall to be honest.  She is someone who is vapid and I realize a friend of Sasha's but I was unsure if she would be supportive of the relationship between Dmitri and Sasha or not.   At this moment I can't be positive but she is a good friend so far.  Things can change especially if things get a bit more complicated between Sasha and Dmitri.   I actually hope that Sasha does end up in a uncommitted relationship with Dmitri.   I hope all those things happen where he is reluctant to go out with her or say endearing things but his actions say otherwise.  Secretly I was hoping that Teagun would flip out so that Sasha would end up staying with Dmitri.  I realize a bit cliched but I really want to see more of Dina and I could see her crashing at Dina's for a bit until she was convinced to move in with Dmitri.   But that's the instant gratification of a netizen.   

 

I can't wait for more Slade, I hope that means more Dina too.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 5

awwww that was sad.

 

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 4

I adore Dina.  I realize that you have not introduced Sasha's friends much but to be honest I found them to be as vapid as Dmitri, but also self-absorbed.  I even wondered how they were friends with Sasha or vice versa, considering Sasha's personality--which is super sweet, considerate, and insecure.  Additionally Jaelynn turned me off immediately and Faye has turned me off now.  I had thought Teagun was a bit more down to earth based on the first chapter, but I also found her slightly irritating and whiny by this chapter but it began in chapter 2.   However, Dina seems sweet so far.   She's only had a tiny intro---but she's sassy but seems down to earth with her shooting down Slade's pick up line.  I have high hopes for Slade and Dina.   Actually at the end of this chapter, I was actually hoping it was Dina who would be driving Sasha home to build that friendship a bit.     I look forward to reading more.   By the way is Dmitri biracial with East Asian.  I only ask because Dina mentions that she noticed Dmitri shared in that trait with Slade.   It could explain they're relationship too.



Author's Response:

No, he's not biracial. I only meant that the contrast between their eyes and their pale skin was similar. Both Slade and Dmitri have really dark brown, almost black, eyes. Thank you for your review! I'm glad you are enjoying the characters!

Reviewer: vaberella Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

It's a good sign when Dmitri stayed and console her.

Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 12:29 am

Title: Cast

Yes, he did deserve that and definitely much more with his fine ass.  Sasha will have to put him in check and have him eating out the palm of her hand



Author's Response:

Such a turnabout would be very interesting. hmm...you've given me ideas! lol Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Loved the chapter. Happy Sasha spoke her mind for a change. Dmitri is not going anywhere. It's more than lust. Poor baby abandoned as a baby, I can understand the attatchment to people.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic update! I'm glad Dmitri stayed to comfort Sasha and didn't just run. Anxiously waiting for more of this great story!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Aw and Teagan cares more about her than I thought...she should still lose Faye and Jaelynn though...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Okay, so here is the problem; I have been reading this story from the beginning & I am just now finally leaving a review.  I am really sorry about that, I blame my course load & my daughter (nothing is ever my fault)  I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!  I like the chemistry between Sasha & Dmitri; however, Sasha's friends are horrible little hoes!!  I am enjoying the evolution of love.  Definitely looking for more.  THank you for sharing!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my story and review! I'm happy you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:42 pm



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