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Title: Chapter 1

You have to do something with Aubrey, she is working my damn nerves. Between her and Natalia I don't know whose getting on my nerves worse.

 

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to an update, I hope sometimes

soon...PLEASE!!!! :-)

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

She needs to tell Antonio what happened.  Brilliant update!!!

 Reviewer: bookworm Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

can't wait for Aubrey to tell Nat to stop being a perv.  I wish Sandra wasn't really dead--just faking it to protect Maurice and Aubrey.  I can't picture Antonio with anyone--it's like he's half a character w/o Sandra. 

I think Nat would beat Aubrey in a fight, so that is where Sandra could come in and say she knew Nat was behind her near rape and commence to spanking that azz.  

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 06:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

I look forward to reading your updates.  I feel for Aubrey and I'm glad she's strong, but mentally she is starting to break and needs Antonio. 

Who is Lillian?  Please don't let Antonio be into such a calleous and cold-hearted person.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful chapter. Update more frequently pls

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Bree has a good heart and will probably be Mary's savior.  I am glad you made her tough bc she is going to need to be this way where this family is concerned. 

I think Tony will be heart broken at Sandra's death and welcome Bree.  Now we need love interests for Bree, Tony, & Mary.  So glad I didn't skip this story.  Thanks!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start update soon...

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 04:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 02:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh yeah, this one is on my list of ones to wait excitedly for an update. Good job, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 09:58 am
Title: Chapter 1

what a wonderful start...please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 08:01 am
Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing and imaginative start! It will be interesting to find out what happened between Sandra & Tony and whether he knew about Aubrey or not. Somehow I'm feeling he didn't. I am highly anticipating your next chapter so Well Done!

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 05:41 am


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