Title: Chapter 3

What a family Aubrey will be meeting.  And what happened to Antonio picture?  His is the only photo that did not appear.  Can you try pasting it in again?  Looking forward to meeting between father and daughter. 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 06:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

What's the name of the man who is supposed to be Antonio?

Author's Response:

That would be Mr. David Beckham

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting start! More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Can you say D-Y-S-F-U-N-C-T-I-O-N-A-L?  The Russo's are it for sure. I wonder what the issue is between Tony and Natalie? I can see anyone or even all of them being involved in causing the rift between Tony and Sandera. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 12:31 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Poor child, so young. She needs to be a little more stingy with the outlay of money.

I hope she meets her father soon, although, to be brought into that viper's nest of Russos might not be the best thing for her. I can see Lillian being a good ally for her. The other Russos are another story. Stefan scares me more than the others. I can see why Sandra would not be welcomed in that  dysfunctional family. I can't wait for Tony to find out about Sandra. This is going to knock him for a loop. Especially, since it seems, he's never had a serious relationship.

I'm truly enjoying this.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 09:17 am

Title: Chapter 3

More

Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 03:13 am

Title: Chapter 3

nice update, please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 01:49 am



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