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Title: Chapter 8

I love this story. I get that Aubrey's attitude and behavior may be annoying some people but it's very realistic. Please don't change the realism of this story to cater to some. I appreciate the pace that you have chosen to write this story for its not cheesy, corny, or honky dory which will make the outcome so much sweeter. The honesty and emotions of the characters just seem so true and I just hope you keep it that way instead of rushing the process along because some can't be patient enough to allow your character(s) to reach their final destination and the story to build.

 Reviewer: Patpricka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 8

I know Aubrey is still a kid and reeling from the death of her mother, but she is straining my patience. I'm trying to remember her circumstances, but to continue to perpretrate the illusion that her mother is still alive to Antonio makes me a bit angry with her. True, she doesn't have any idea that he might still harbour feelings for Sandra and might be devestated that she's dead, but still.

And of course,  her introduction to the family would be anything but calm. This family is a trip. Aubrey included.

Update soon. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 04:32 am


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