Title: Chapter 14

More please. Aubrey is just like her mom and dad, but it appears when she makes up her mind, it's made, whether out of fear, anger, or whatever. She is just like her dad and that no good spoiled aunt of hers, lol! It's an honest family trait, stubborness. I do feel sorry for Antonio because Aubrey is hard to reach and he knows this and is running out of ways to try and reach her. I believe he will continue to try, but he is getting weary and anyone in his shoes would be especially when the person staring back at you giving you hell is you. In Aubrey's defense she is scared and does not want to get attached to Antonio only for him to skip out on her. Antonio would not do that, at least I do not think he would. Who was the lady Antonio saw in the elevator? It may be far fetched but I think she may be able to help Aubrey and Antonio and her being able to help Aubrey would be a miracle in itself seeing how Aubrey does not trust or let anyone talk to her. Anyway, great update!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I NEED THE REST. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 14

He's her father, hard spot because if he tries to force her she will run away. maybe he should go back with her and talk to the old lady. she will make her return with her father.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:49 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for the new chapter. I am glad to read about those characters again, evenb though I am a bit disappointed : they are still running in circles, nothing has changed or evolved. Something needs to happen to move things forward really, 'cause it is going to be just annoying...

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:37 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for the update hope Natalies lies catch up to her she need a dose of Karma for her evil vindictiveness

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 05:12 am



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