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Title: 4 Months Later

AJ really needs to get his act together.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 11:13 pm
Title: 4 Months Later

so hes gay now..........

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Date: June 25 2013 11:01 pm
Title: So We Meet Again

I love your story and will try to hang in there with you, but right now AJ is working a nerve.  I thought maybe he and Io. could get together, but now I think she should go for the brother coming out of prison.   AJ is just too risky--the girl would come home and there is no telling who would be in their bed.  At least he has the sense to use protection--sometimes.   

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 10:58 pm
Title: 4 Months Later

AJ is fucking his way through life with men and women. The boy is ho and it ain't cute and needs to clean up his now that Gianna is mobile and vocal. I need for AJ to realize that his life style ain:t normal and that his baby girl deserves better. I am really disturbed that Evan is engaged but having sex with AJ. Boys and girls can you say HIV test! So good!  I am hoping that he falls in love with his best friend Io and that he remains true.

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Date: June 25 2013 09:32 pm
Title: Get It Right

AJ is so confused, what type of legacy did his mother leave?  Because she sold him to her drug dealer that boy is confused.  Now the only woman thst loved him. Momma E is dead. I worry about him especially with raising a child.  Just so sad!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 09:21 pm
Title: 4 Months Later

This here some powerful stuff you're writing, missus. 

Get an editor or a beta read if you can, though, because this is good, very good and editing will make it even better! Many people will say it doesn't matter, but it does. Sometimes we need help to sort out our thoughts. But I hope you don't dwell on that and just continue to write.

Good luck and I can't wait to see how this pans out.



Author's Response:

Any beta suggestions?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 09:00 pm
Title: 4 Months Later

I freaking loveeeee this story! It's written beautifully! It's one of my favourite at the moment!

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Date: June 25 2013 08:51 pm
Title: So We Meet Again

Great story 

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Date: June 25 2013 07:53 pm
Title: Namesake

Your story is totally amazing....please hurry with the updates!

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Date: June 23 2013 02:31 pm
Title: Namesake

Glad the baby is his and he's taking responsibility but his childhood was terrible. Hope he can make a better life for his daughter as well as make something better of his life.

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Date: June 22 2013 04:52 am
Title: Namesake

I really hate is human incubtor Katya, she is using her child to pay for her drug habit.  That is just pure evil and she needs to die a horrible death.  But he is keeping his baby.  How is a high school going to take care of a baby?  Mama E took AJ and Adrian when their inubator left them for good? Can we get a description of Io?  I love the name that he gave the baby, Gianna Estelle, just perfect!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 03:28 am
Title: Namesake

i like what you have so far, i hate that alexander had to go throught that as a child it's sad that his mother used him that way, i can't wait to read more 

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Date: June 22 2013 02:51 am
Title: Namesake

OMG i could just throw up with those flashbacks :( Poor baby.

I just hope he is able to be a good father to the little girl and never let anything like that happen to her. So horrible that a mother can put her child through that, both Katya and AJ's baby momma. Such a disaster.

 Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 01:51 am
Title: Namesake

I want to read this story but...,  I just can't.  The flashbacks are too disturbing to envision.  It literally makes me sick! I find myself wanting to protect him and his brother, make it so they'd never have to suffer a day in their lives and at the same time wanting to KILL those no-good bastards who'd hurt them!!! But, I just can't.  Crazy as it sounds- I feel helpless that no one is saving saving them which has got my tummy in knots.

Anyhoo...

I'm glad AJ has claimed his daughter and given her a good name; she's a beautiful innocent who's blessed to have someone who'll protect her, plus,  AJ has a great support system with Io by his side and his real mother, Estelle - not that thing that birthed him! He's already a good father and hopefully he'll become a great dad.  If anyone deserves a HEA...AJ does.

Wishing you the best of luck on your story. JV :)

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 01:31 am
Title: Namesake

This is just too sad. His mother is the devil itself, I only hope she died horribly and suffered a lot. Now Gianna is in good hands. I wonder what ewactly happened to his brother. Great job !

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Date: June 22 2013 12:17 am
Title: Namesake

Katya a bitch. Thank God AJ does'nt have her cold heart. Guilt did'nt stop her from selling het son nor providing him a good meal. Already AJ is showing that he is a good father. He would never do to his child what was done to him. I hope Daniela gone for good.

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Date: June 21 2013 11:40 pm
Title: Mama, come back

What the hell!  I detest women of the nature, who turn a blind eye on their child...

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Date: June 21 2013 04:01 am
Title: Mama, come back

His mother gave him to that creep and I know that glad had to be to settle a drug debt. I really hope that Katya ho is six feet under.  Is Mama E is grandmother? AJ was raped all because of his hi of an human incubator. This going to be a tear jerker isn't it?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 02:12 am
Title: Mama, come back

Despite all the sadness I could not stop myself from reading this story. My heart weeps for young Alex. Betrayal by your own mother has to really burn. Now, his own actions will shape his daughter's future. The things Daniela said were mean and spiteful. She isn't any better with her callous attitude. To not name her daughter and to get rid of her like trash does not speak well of her. And if her opinion was so low of Alex, why did she sleep with him and leave her daughter to his custody?

I look forward to what direction you take this story. I'm rooting for that precious baby and that Alex gets his life together.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 02:10 am
Title: So We Meet Again

This really seems like its going to be an intense story. Can't wait

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Date: June 20 2013 11:32 pm
Title: So We Meet Again

I horrified to think that it's normal for teenagers to drink, use drugs and have unprotected sex! That heifer Gabriela just shows up at A.Pj's at 7 in the morning with a baby and she never told him that she was pregnant. That girl is suspect and AJ needs to verify paternity. Maury here they come! That smirk ifhers pissed me off

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 01:47 pm
Title: So We Meet Again

Very interesting start. I want to read more.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 10:38 am
Title: So We Meet Again

Me likey! More please.

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Date: June 20 2013 07:49 am
Title: So We Meet Again

I love it. Can't wait for the update!

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 06:46 am
Title: So We Meet Again

Good start, but little to short (Powerful Introduction)

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Date: June 20 2013 06:16 am


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