I love this story and all its dynamicsReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10 2014 10:46 pm
I just read the whole story today :)
and it is brilliant!
i love the characterisation...
I am loving Ann, she really would be a knight in shining armour in case her mother gets hurt.
I can't help wishing Thomas was alive. He seems to be the real one true love for Melody. And Mark seems to be the second choice only.
Thomas healed Melissa's wounds. I think Melissa needs no one now. Mark can wallow in self pity.
But Mark desperately needs Melissa to mend his life.
About Cameron, he can only be a best friend to Melissa.......i guess
Those were my personal thoughts.
I admire your own thoughts about the story.
You are going great girl :DReviewer: Tannistha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 12:14 pm
what is their to ike about Mark? He seem to be the same guy that he was in high school. If he is so on love with Melody, why is going cruising for hot tail? I would be trying to prove i am a different person from before. That is just mine opinion. Love this story keep up the good work!!!!!!!
TEAM CAMERON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!##Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 08:55 pm
Wow I just adore Cam I hope he gets the girl both of them have been through so much and they had each other to lean on. So I take it Mark is about to find out that the person cam is reconnecting with is Melody while on his drive. Thanks for the update can't wait for the next.Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 05:51 pm
So I dont like Cameron. I cant help it I dont if he truly thought of himself as Mark friend then he wouldnt be making a play for her in secret. He's a coward. Mark is an asshole but that could change with a massive amount of maturity. The coward thing is ingrained deep within and to me very rarely changes. I have never really been a fan of the love triangle thing. But I can't lie I can't wait to see what happens when Mark figures out his "friend" is using what he knows about Mark to make a play for Mel. This might be fun.Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 12:32 pm
I had forgotten about this story so I am glad that it is back and I am not disappointed. Mark has long road to travel and it will be even longer because his ass is stupid. Cameron is throwing his heart in the ring but will it lead to heart ache? Melody is not trusting Mark with her heart anytime soon but it doesn't mean that she doesn't want to give it to him. I love Ann her protector, it's sweet. Wonderful!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 08:25 am
I don't know how I bypassed this story before but it has EVERYTHING to keep me interested in reading it until the end. I love a little revenge; I love seeing those on their high horse fall to ground and Mark....what can I say? He's going to have more regrets. I was a bit surprised that this has the makings of a good old triangle...I suppose that explains the banner. I like Cameron a great deal and it is going to be VERY INTERESTING to see how everything will play out. Melody's been in love with Mark forever but I don't think she feels that way now...as she realizes it was only "hero worship." If Mark plans to win her over he definitely has a LOT of WORK to do....not to mention his parents are a rich, dysfunctional mess. The fact that he thinks Melody was supposed to pine for him for over 10 years was his first mistake. I would love to see Cameron give Mark a run for his money...and I wouldn't mind if Cameron wins Melody's heart. Afterall, her late husband made her promise not to remove the ring until she finds a man who loves her as much he loved her. In my eyes, Cameron could be that guy but I don't know what tricks you have up your sleeves so I will make sure to read until the end. Who knows Mark may have some redeeming qualities.Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 02:05 am
this is a reallyy good story and i enjoy what you have written so far.. i feel that mark has not changed much since his high school and college days and i'm glad that melody was able to get away and find thomas as well as find herself
i feel the same about cameron as well he has left and found himself and it seemed that he really liked melody based on the dialouge about the bet in high school he never said anyrhing bad about her looking forward to the next updateReviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 06:47 am
Loving this story. I can't wait things for things to heat up for Mark and Melisa. Although Melisa says she no longer has feelings for Mark, her action shows otherwise.
As for Ann, she is truly wise beyond her years. I wonder how she deal with her mother's new love interest and the possibility of having siblings.
I also wonder has Mark changed enough for Melisa. Although he doesn't see himself as a spoiled rich boy, he is. Melisa is giving him a taste at she felt growing up in this small town.
Date: July 12 2013 07:32 am
love it more soon is Ann 18 or older if so her and Cameron may be good togeherReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 05:06 am
Those two actually look like a cute pair. I wouldn't have ever thought to put them together. I like how this story has started out. That was brave leaving him that letter; my scary arse would have been too hurt to even do that. I most likely would have just disappeared and came back years later, hopefully not still licking my wounds and with a new guy.Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 03:43 am
Cameron is looking even better after you posted the cast. He seems to be more self aware and willing to make changes to those parts of his personality that are less than appealing, while Mark still seems to live in a bubble of entitlement. You may have a plan of redemption for Mark but after so many years he stills sounds like a petulant child upset that his favorite toy has been taken, or in this case has changed.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 03:34 am
Mark is an asshole of the highest order, he doesn't like this new Melissa because she doesn't hang on his every word and has money now. What conversation will Cameron and Melody have? Loving Ann, she is the such a loving protective daughther. Fabulous!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 01:37 am