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Title: Chapter 2

can we longer update next time please, i really enjoy what you have written and i'm really looking forward to reading more about kensington's back story 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 04:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it. More please. 

 Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 03:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I have Bambi eyes. Just watching to see what will happen next.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 01:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2

*let's out a slow breath* Damn. Her dad is a sick fuck. I can't say it any nicer. 

I'm looking forward to the day when things get better for her. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 09:16 am
Title: Chapter 2

Powerful and deep chapters. Love it so far, can't wait to see where the story will go from here. Hopefully it gets a little brighter for Kensington.

 Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 07:18 am
Title: Chapter 2

Can he die by the next chapter?

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow so sad.  He's a pervert that needs to go under the jail.

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 05:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This was a very powerful chapter. I actually teared up. I've been bullied before, not physically but I can relate. Camden will get his.

I'm hooked.

Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 11:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1

like what you have so far

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 10:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Just read your summary--thank God someone new will come in and hopefully save this girl.  Hate bullies!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 09:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am a tough babe, but this brought tears to my eyes.  Hopefully, she will soon escape her misery and Camden.  He pushed her down stairs?   No way I can see any romance between these two.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

damn i am so hooked. you must be totally good at fishing because you definitely caught me.

 Reviewer: cookiemonstah Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 08:10 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Though why is she just taking the abuse like that? 

 Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 04:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

The chapter is so sad. 

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 04:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start.It was kind of scary to see her getting abused liked that.Why does this guy keeps hitting her and why does she tolerate all this abuse?Hope I'll find the answers in next chapter.Looking forward to the nxt update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I feel like standing up and clapping while shouting "encore!" Well done! Im definitely hooked. Very gripping chapter. Makes you want to know what happens with the characters as they continue to develope and grow...and most esp. the relatioship between them....whether its good or bad.....cant wait for more!

 Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Intense. You pretty much started this character out at rock bottom. Your writing is gripping. Ihope you update soon.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This first first chapter as ripped my heart out, she has no place to where she is truly safe. Why hasn't one said anything? It seems as if she is constantly walking around bruised, so these teachers are ignoring the obvious signs of abuse.  Why has she silently accepted this abuse? I can't wait to read more! Great start you got me invested in this story from the first sentence. Why is this Camden dude bullying a girl this intensely? He will never be a real man!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 02:27 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Powerful start! What it must be like to live in fear all the time. 

Wow. 

 Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 10:27 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, interesting start! Sounds abit scary to enter that home! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 06:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

I hope someone comes to help this child and soon.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great I can't wait for an update.

 Reviewer: lym7293 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 06:15 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow

 Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  I can't wait to read more. 

 

 Reviewer: bama_belle Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 06:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Great, no fantastic start

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 05:18 am


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