I hope those bullies at her school receive some punishment. Are the staff members ignoring the bullying or they just not aware of it?
Author's Response:
They choose not to get involved, it's less work for them.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 22 2014 04:41 am
I love this story and how it doesn't take the conventional path of a romance story. Keep up the good work!! Looking forward to the coming chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: RomanceLover93 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2014 09:28 pm
More pleas....its getting interesting. I would like to see where this goes.
Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2014 08:39 am
When are we going to meet mystery man, and get his history? Keep the chapters coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 21 2014 07:15 am
Put some supernatural flavor in it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2014 07:09 am
Longer please... pretty please.
Author's Response:
I try. lol
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2014 05:00 am
Interesting start. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 09:03 pm
Love your story, however, the only part is that you don't update sooner and your chapters are really short. Hope you can either have longer chapters or up date sooner thanks for the story, it's really original and interesting.
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 04:51 pm
It's very sad all the stuff she's going through where at home shes not safe neither at school her Stan is a piece of work really hope he gets his. But on a brighter note who is our mystery guy why can't she see him & did he really buy her a house & car or was I just dreaming. Glad she got out now she can get her some food hopefully find a friend I hate how she lost her mom anywho better days ahead update soon
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 04:29 pm
I feel so sorry for her! I cannot imagine living in a house like that... i would probably go crazy. I HOPE in the next chapter she actually takes that escape route ... that mysterious guy gave her. She's smart for not believing him straight away though because you should NEVER trust strangers. But in her case... she'd do anything to get away from this hell hole. I hope lover boy steps in and beats the shit out of any of the guys who touched her... lmao i love posessive guys who are very alpha-male like but do anything for their love.
I loved it !!
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 04:21 pm
I feel so bad for Kenzi, het life is so hard. Her mom's choices in life has made her life hell. Why hasn't anyone stepped in to help her? There is no place where she's safe. This is story is so sad!! More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 04:13 pm
I still love it! Really glad you made an update :-) Kensington deserves happiness and I hope she gets it. Stan needs to go and do one. Please hurry and update soon. Thanks 😊c6;a039;
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 11:52 am
I'm happy to have an update on this story and that it seems like you are keeping the story realistic, I think. I can't wait to see who it is that grabbed Kensington's shoulder. I hope it is someone that is going to help her. Also, I wish your chapters were longer. I wanted more.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 10:43 am
I vote for supernatural. Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 09 2014 06:29 am
I love this. How realistic it is. I think you should keep it realistic. But based on how you ended this chapter, it has a supernatural feel to it. If you were to keep it realistic and still keep how this chapter ended without having to edit it to make it realistic, the only thing that comes to mind is walkie talkies or something like that.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 03:48 am
I'm leaning more towards supernatural myself. I would read this either way.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2014 08:57 pm
I would read it either way, but love supernatural!
Reviewer: Drea Signed
[Report This]Date: April 19 2014 07:19 pm
I did not like it....Make it to where she fines a champion, someone to
Watch over her and love her and turn her life around...all for a real real
good tear (wipeing?) turn around love story.... :-)
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Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2014 05:08 pm
Love it so far!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2014 08:42 am
I like it so far, but I'm not sure if a supernatural turn would be best. Thanks for sharing this story!
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for reading!
I opted out against the supernatural. :]
Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2014 07:49 am
Wow, what a turn of events! Wonder who the voice belongs to? How will he help her?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2014 03:45 am
Wow, what a rough life Kensie has! So sad!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2014 03:38 am
I loved it!! I read it through up to tho chapter and I want you to continue, please haha :-) Erm I'm not too sure if you should make it supernatural or realistic. Either way I'll keep reading xx
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2014 02:33 am
Love the story, I am glad to see that you decided to continue writing it. A supernatural twist would work with this story, so go for it. Can't wait to see what we get in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 10:51 pm
Well, the food issue is fairly easy to solve. Plenty of churches and food banks could resolve that.
I'm not sure why she hasn't tried to emancipate herself or call cps. She must be receiving social security from her mother.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 10:37 pm