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Title: Chapter 1

I'm gonna need you to come back and update this story. It's so interesting. Thank you random story generator. 

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 05:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1

He'd do anything to keep her safe but doesn't he no that's with him. He should have b n honest & up front from the beginning about his past & not just bits & pieces. Now this problem we have that should've been delt with a while bk can't wait to see how. Plus her Ancestors are angry @ him for failing to keep her happy even though he had good reason can't wait til she wakes bk up

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 09:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

thats not very nice of nikoli! she clearly heard him!!!! update pleaseeeeee

 Reviewer: bubbleum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

It's fridayyyyy! Well Saturday here in uk lol! Pleaseee update if u can! I love this so fat :)))))))



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I'm sorry that i didn't get to post it earlier. I was still trying to find pictures for the new characters. 

 Reviewer: Bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

The mystery about Nikoli and his family is killing me!!!! Love this story.MORE!!!!!!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

It's funny how everyone is mad at her and yelling when they didn't explain anything to her.  How do you expect her to do the appropriate action or believe you when you all look like liars to her now.  

Anyway, very interesting read and it has captured my attention to want to read more.  I would add a quick review before posting to make sure some words are how you would like it to appear/read.  I know if you type on these darn iPads and things that word correction stuff will drive you cray cray.

 

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 04:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like and want to continue reading but I'm confused. Can you maybe flesh it out a bit more.

 Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

Love this update.I am really curious to know about Nikol.Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.More!!!! please

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 02:53 pm
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hell yes !!!! MORE!!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

YES!!!! continue, I want to know how they met, how she came to love him how old is he and what is he????Lol, thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 11:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love a story that I can visualize the character actions, movements and features.  What a wonderful start to your book

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 10:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start please continue

 Reviewer: Primegirl04 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am confused, the village was named Kumli and where is it located? It has to be in America since there was a Native American tribal burial sight or at least it should be. How did Nikolai meet Caroline name his beloved? Cast pictures? Is the blonde finished or will try something again? More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 04:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

You should definitely continue.It's very intiguing story....Would love to read more.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 02:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Yessssss! Sounds really good!! Continue pleaaaassseeee

 Reviewer: BubbleGum7 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 01:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Yes, you should definitely go on! In which way is he a monster (description!), is it his physical or his behaviour? Are you going back in time when they met? Does it take place in a remote place that actually exist or did you create an entire society? there's so much to discover, so yes, I must read more. Good Job!

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 12:14 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Please do continue!
This is off to a wonderful start. =]

 Reviewer: Ren Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 11:20 am
Title: Chapter 1

LOVE! Would like to kow more about this Nikoli character and Carolina of course. 

 Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 10:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like this story so far! Its interesting....continue!! :)

 Reviewer: xsweetdellzx Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 09:42 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ummmm yes definitely continue, seems very very very interesting.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 09:21 am
Title: Chapter 1

Hmm...It's a bit confusing, but with some exposition it could be very interesting. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 08:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

Continue pleeeease continue!!! This is a great start. Can't wait for what's next.

 Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 08:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Please continue, I have a million questions some background info might answer, lol.

 Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 07:15 am


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