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Title: Chapter 5

Sorry tried, but the story does not flow. It tends to jump around a bit. The reasoning for some the actions or reactions are weird and unbelievable. Love a good vampire tale but immortal becoming a vampire. Hmm... I always like a good reasonable original spin to a tale but, well, I've read up to chapter 5. Sorry will have tolet this story go. I hope the back ground story is revised. Will check on it much later. 

I hate to be a downer, but keep in mind what is the plot? I guess that is what threw me, it isn't clear and the synopsis is confusing too.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 5

i liked it bt it def needs to be longer

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 05:08 pm
Title: Chapter 5

More more more is what i think. I will wait until Friday I guess.  LOL. 

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 5

Excellent

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 03:27 pm
Title: Chapter 5

That is why Nikolai knows dishonorable when he sees it. Her parents are obviously horrible they could have told her about what her future would entail.  He is screaming about that fortune tellers SL daughter being too young. Carolina is definitely too young for him.  Looking forward to reading more in Friday!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 02:55 pm
Title: Chapter 5

way too short :(....t

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 12:04 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Ok, these short chapters are killing me! More please.

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 09:41 am
Title: Chapter 5

too short

 Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 08:45 am
Title: Chapter 5

I would like of this wonderful book, please continue to fulfill are needs...Great job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 07:45 am


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