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Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

thats not very nice of nikoli! she clearly heard him!!!! update pleaseeeeee

 Reviewer: bubbleum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Wow, interesting update! Nikoli can give but he can't take!! He needs to check himself!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2013 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 8

Maybe I missed something in all of the  flash backs but I hope she leaves him for a while he doesn't appreciate what he has with her..

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Nikoli I was trying to give you the benefit of doubt as far as Carolina was concerned but you've turned your craziness and evilness into Carolina. Why continue to lie after she had already heard sime of the conversation wirh Seyrun? If she does not live with Nikoli where is going to live? Nikoli is an asshole!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter! Nikoli is out of control, cannot believe he blatantly lied to Carolina when she obviously heard what he was saying. Thanks for the two chapters!! 

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 8

this is a really good story and i'm looking forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 08:30 am
Title: Chapter 8

That was just a taste!! You cant leave us hanging like this! and Seyurn is freaking hott someone needs to do a story featuring him.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 08:00 am
Title: Chapter 7

Love the update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 02:59 am
Title: Chapter 7

Who is Kendra? What relationship does she think that she has with Nikoli?  Is she a vampire or immortal?  For that matter who in hell is Seyurn?  Why didn't Nikoli choke him for speaking of Carolina that way?  Enough questions, this was a wonderful update!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 10:36 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I love all of the men in this story they are all hot!!  Nikoli has meet his match in Carolina.  Carolina is 17 and apparentely doesn't know what sex sounds are so she had no idea that Nikoli and his men would react that way.  Hilarious!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 10:32 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I'm screamed when I saw this update. I'm so loving this story. They are so cute together. Can't wait for the next update. 

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 6

cute,

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 07:04 am
Title: Chapter 6

Fantastic chapter

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 06:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

It's fridayyyyy! Well Saturday here in uk lol! Pleaseee update if u can! I love this so fat :)))))))



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that i didn't get to post it earlier. I was still trying to find pictures for the new characters. 

 Reviewer: Bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 5

i liked it bt it def needs to be longer

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 05:08 pm
Title: Chapter 5

More more more is what i think. I will wait until Friday I guess.  LOL. 

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 5

Excellent

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 03:27 pm
Title: Chapter 5

That is why Nikolai knows dishonorable when he sees it. Her parents are obviously horrible they could have told her about what her future would entail.  He is screaming about that fortune tellers SL daughter being too young. Carolina is definitely too young for him.  Looking forward to reading more in Friday!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 02:55 pm
Title: Chapter 5

way too short :(....t

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 12:04 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Ok, these short chapters are killing me! More please.

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 09:41 am
Title: Chapter 5

too short

 Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 08:45 am
Title: Chapter 5

I would like of this wonderful book, please continue to fulfill are needs...Great job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 07:45 am
Title: Chapter 4

Very interesting story! So many things still to learn, can't wait to read more!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Nikolai to allow the man to live and change his life for the better then kill him when he was at his happiest moment was beyond evil. When you killed his wife you killed an innocent which was when you completely lost your soul. Interesting how Carolina sees this situation, she knows what Nikolai did yet still falls in love with him. She lost when mind when she found out that she couldn't live her as sh chooses. Interesting twist in a vampire story. More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 02:38 pm


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